Majunks
Super Saiyan 2
Shut up or I Turn you into CHOCOLATE!
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Post by Majunks on Feb 17, 2005 9:42:40 GMT -5
Still, I really want to see how Vegeta Jr. does against Majuub, (Sorry I mean Uubu). Oh I kinda wanna see how Goku and Goshin do.
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Post by ~*Hieislove*~ on Feb 17, 2005 17:49:59 GMT -5
Still, I really want to see how Vegeta Jr. does against Majuub, (Sorry I mean Uubu). Oh I kinda wanna see how Goku and Goshin do. You just got here ya cant rush SonGoshin he needs his time to write a one post chapter O.K!!
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Majunks
Super Saiyan 2
Shut up or I Turn you into CHOCOLATE!
Posts: 579
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Post by Majunks on Feb 18, 2005 9:46:39 GMT -5
You just got here ya cant rush SonGoshin he needs his time to write a one post chapter O.K!! Uh yeah right, he-he I know but the supense is killin' me! Anyway... uh well... just keep on writting good chapters Goshin!
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Post by ~*Hieislove*~ on Feb 18, 2005 9:56:30 GMT -5
Uh yeah right, he-he I know but the supense is killin' me! It kills everyone deal with it -_-
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Post by Son Goshin on Feb 18, 2005 13:22:08 GMT -5
thanks for the compliments guys. i don't mean to keep you waiting but i've been real busy lately with homework and other things. i'll definitely try to get chapter 35 up by the end of the week. so stay tuned and try not to letthe suspense kill you! ;D
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Post by ~*Hieislove*~ on Feb 18, 2005 13:24:55 GMT -5
thanks for the compliments guys. AND LADIES so stay tuned and try not to letthe suspense kill you! ;D We cant help it , its so good ;D
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Post by Son Goshin on Feb 18, 2005 13:32:40 GMT -5
lol, when i say guys i mean everyone. from now on i'll say 'everybody'. and i'm glad everybody is really enoying it. i'm even taking a class now in school, creative writing, and i'm submitting the first saga of DBAF for a grade. hopefully it'll be good! ;D
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Post by ~*Hieislove*~ on Feb 18, 2005 13:35:22 GMT -5
lol, when i say guys i mean everyone. from now on i'll say 'everybody'. and i'm glad everybody is really enoying it. i'm even taking a class now in school, creative writing, and i'm submitting the first saga of DBAF for a grade. hopefully it'll be good! ;D Well I feel like a guy when you say that its o.k you can still say guys You will get a A if I was grading you ;D
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Tekk
Saiyan
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Post by Tekk on Feb 18, 2005 19:19:17 GMT -5
I've only had time to read chapters 1-4 (VERY GOOD) but I'm wondering. Why are Generals Blue and Yellow have blue skin and isn't Commander Red Dead!? Just Wandering
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Post by ~*Hieislove*~ on Feb 19, 2005 19:04:14 GMT -5
Only chapter 1-4? you need to read more
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Post by Son Goshin on Feb 21, 2005 16:01:37 GMT -5
I've only had time to read chapters 1-4 (VERY GOOD) but I'm wondering. Why are Generals Blue and Yellow have blue skin and isn't Commander Red Dead!? Just Wandering ok, general blue and yellow are not human, they are metamarines. actually, i think they're supposed to be called the metamareese, but i'm not gonna change that right now. the metamarines were the aliens that showed goku how to do the fusion dance while he was in the other world after he was killed by cell. i thought it'd be interesting if i actually brought some of these aliens into the story line. commander red on the other hand is not the same commander red from DragonBall. he's just using the namesake in a way to honor the real commander red of days past
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Post by ~*Hieislove*~ on Feb 21, 2005 19:53:56 GMT -5
The new chapter is great Son Goshin, this AF seems to last in me forever, I never get tried of it. I'm like your number one fan ;D
Now go and get writing
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Kweb8876
Saiyan
" How did you know I was a cowboy fan!?!"
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Post by Kweb8876 on Feb 22, 2005 8:29:34 GMT -5
Excellent reading....I'm impressed!
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Post by ~*Hieislove*~ on Feb 22, 2005 12:16:28 GMT -5
Excellent reading....I'm impressed! Well I never seen you post here, hopefully you have read all. cuz each and every chapter contains its awesome events and everyone should read it
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Post by Son Goshin on Feb 22, 2005 13:21:24 GMT -5
thanks a lot guys, and i'm glad i got a number 1 fan now too. ;D as for chapter , i hope to have it out by the end of this week, although i have a lot of school work due this week, but i'll do my best to get up soon
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