Saijan Reunion - Episode 4

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EPISODE 4 – Training day, trunks the pervert

Part 1 – Food Fight

(This starts off with our gang hurtling through space at an amazing speed, they are all just getting up from their rest and are heading for the breakfast table)

Goku-“YAWN”
Gohan-(rubbing his eyes) “man, that ride through an asteroid belt really keeps you awake”
Goku-(trying to keep awake) “sure does, is this the way to the food” (gohan and him bump into each other) “OOOOWWW”
Vegeta-(entering) “hmm, clown”
Goku-“oh hey vegeta, I guess you decided to join us this morning”
Vegeta-“hmm, actually I was rudely woken from meditation by this annoying robot”
Gohan-“you were sleeping through meditation”
Vegeta-“that’s beside the point, that stupid robot stuck a duster up my nose and called me messy”
Goku-“oh well (stretches) its good to see you join us for once, you really have been a right outcast this week”
Vegeta-“I don’t enjoy luxuries much now lets just eat, I’m starving”

(They head into the main breakfast room, sit down to where several plates and cutlery are already laid, they each remove the lids of their silver dishes to each find a different speciality)

Goku-“wow, roast timber wolf, I haven’t had this since I was like 11”
Gohan-(opening his) “oh man, look what I got made”
Goku-(looks over to gohans bowl, starts laughing) looks like king V wanted to play a pun on you”
Vegeta-“oh forget about your name puns, it may be funny to you but I don’t see the joke in preparing boiled gohan for a snack, (he opens his dish, finds something unbelievable) I don’t believe it”
Goku-“what is it, (looks over) eh, vegeta I didn’t know you were into giant bugs”
Vegeta-“THIS IS NO ORDINARY BUG, this is a dish known as steamed Torontonian mantis, this is the same dish my father prepared for me after we fought together on the planet Jango Jun (turn around in tukido, a martial art) when I took one bite of this thing I immediately went purple, everyone laughed at me, the taste was disgusting, but it was some day”
Goku-“aw, looks like your dad really does care”
Vegeta-“or maybe this is his idea of some sick joke”
Gohan-“hey lighten up”
Vegeta-“I’ve got a better idea, why don’t I lighten you up like a candle, or would you prefer being the main course for tomorrow (another pun)”
Gohan-(to himself) “jeez, (pause, to goku) hey dad, who do you think made all this”
Goku-“dunno, maybe King V has a couple more crew than we thought”
Vegeta-”stop calling him king v”
Goku-“what do you care” (vegeta blasts goku’s meal, the remains go all over his face, gohan laughs and goku returns the favour by blasting the weird bug thing) “ha, ha, how do you like the taste when its over cooked”
Vegeta-“YOU’RE ASKING FOR IT NOW” (he starts throwing food, goku does the same thing and even gohan joins in the action)

(Minutes later after the fight vegeta becomes curious)

Vegeta-“Kakarot, I’m curious to know why you and gohan decided to come in the first place”
Goku-“you waited till now to ask us that”
Vegeta-“well I never quite realised it before that you seemed to come on your own free will, why is that”
Gohan-“well we didn’t come on free will, it was more like guilt, excitement, and uh my mom made me”
Goku-“yeah we couldn’t leave you alone up there by yourself who knows what could happen and gohan convinced videl to postpone the wedding anyway so we got bored and decided to come”
Vegeta-(sarcastic) “oh I’m so grateful”

(King V enters)

King v-“good morning men, I hope you’re all enjoying the food I prepared”
Goku-“it’s great” (wiping a piece of wolfs claw from his forehead)
Gohan-“just to ask, how did you manage to make all this by yourself”
King v-“well I guess I have slightly more crew than I was letting on”
Vegeta-“what a surprise, how much more”
King v-“actually, I just brought them all to meet you, come in men (several men and woman enter, some wearing combat gear, some wearing chef outfits etc) these are my royal guards, royal chefs, personal trainers and my assistants”
All-“pleasure to meet you sirs”
Goku-“wow obedient”
Vegeta-“and just where have you been hiding all these men for the past week, under your pillow”
King v-“oh I had them in stasis, I didn’t think I’d need them, but I kinda wanted to surprise you vegeta”
Vegeta-“by showing me that you still have slaves, I’m not surprised”
King v-“speaking of surprised it’s good to see you sitting down to a meal for once”
Vegeta-“the food I brought was getting old, so old I could see moss coming out of the north side”
King v-“ha, ha, ha well the main thing is you’re here, and if any of you boys feel hungry during the night, my royal chefs will come and prepare anything you desire”
Goku-“great then make me some egg foo young”
Gohan-“and don’t forget the lemon sorbet”
Goku-“oh yeah and roast ox tongue and……..”
King v-“ahem, there will be time for that later the real people I wanted you to meet are my guards”
Apollo-(kneeling) “hello sirs, and highness, my title is Apollo, I am the leading guard for the kings armada”
Vegeta-“ARMADA”
King v-“oh it’s just a word”
Apollo-“and these are m me, Zeus, Hera, Hades, and Aphrodite”
King v-“very good Apollo you are dismissed, in fact you are all dismissed (Apollo and his men leave followed by all the other crew) now if your done eating I have something I need to show you”
Vegeta-“let me guess, your mounds of treasure”
King v-“ha, ha, no, actually that’s over there (points) what I’m going to show you is the ships training room, does that sound good to you boys”
Goku-“oh yeah”
Gohan-“finally something fun”
King v-“ha, ha, I knew you seemed bored, so I had my men prepare it specially for you, shall we go then (looks at Vegeta who doesn’t seem interested but they all get up from their seats and head out of the room, gohan whispers to goku)”
Gohan-(to goku) “is it me or does vegeta seem a little more colder than he used to”
Goku-(to gohan) “I think that’s because he’s still not quite sure whether or not to believe this is real”
Gohan-“is he insane, were aboard a ship, hurtling through space and theres this king guy standing in front of us with a dozen staff and he doesn’t consider this real”
Goku-“let’s just let him be, he’ll come around eventually”

(Note, gohan is a famous beef and rice dish in Japan for those of you who didn’t get the gohan joke)

END OF PART 1

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PART 2 – Do not disturb

(this takes place on goten and trunks ship, videl has just gone for a clean up after the whole storage room incident, she leave the hoi poi capsule next to her ripped skirt and dirty clothes, she enjoys a relaxing shower, outside the room we see trunks walking down the stairs, he just passes by the door when he hears a few noises from inside, and he gets a strange thought in his head, he then hides behind a box lying next to the door and whispers to himself)

Trunks-“hehehe hehehe oh man, what great timing, ok lets think this through, if I go in there and try to sneak a peak, then videl may never trust me again and probably tell gohan who’ll probably kick my ass once we get home and I’ll miss a week or a few months of school with a cracked tibia………..hmm, on the other hand I get to see a grown woman naked and have something to be proud of for the next couple of years, oh decisions, decisions (he thinks to himself but cannot stand it) OH MAN, THIS IS SO HARD…….”
Goten-“trunks (trunks looks up, he sees goten hanging over the box) what are you doing (trunks pulls goten down beside him, puts a hand over his mouth and tells him to be quiet)”
Trunks-“do you wanna get us into trouble”
Goten-“what are you talking about”
Trunks-“well you see goten, I’m about to do something really daring and something that’ll probably get me killed but as a world famous daredevil I cant let that worry me” (he starts to look smug)
Goten-“your gonna listen to videl taking a shower, how is that daring” (trunks collapses)
Trunks-“RRRRGGGHHHH, goten, have you ever wanted to see a woman naked”
Goten-“no not really”
Trunks-“well this may be our one opportunity, we cannot and will not pass this up”
Goten-“no offence trunks but doesn’t this seem like something master Roshi would do”
Trunks-“yeah well he’s not around”
Goten-“that’s not the point, spying on videl, watching her in the shower, that’s perverted”
Trunks-(tries to play it cool) “it’s not perverted its fun”
Goten-“what’s so great about seeing a girl naked”
Trunks-“well if you come with me then you’ll find out” (trunks tries to go but goten grabs his collar) “LET GO OF ME”
Goten-“no, I don’t think this is right, videl would kill you if she sees you”
Trunks-“oh what’s she gonna see, I went in there earlier when we were checking out the rooms and I discovered that shower happens to have a see through glass pane”
Goten-“so”
Trunks-“so, girls like hot showers, and hot showers means hot steam which fogs the glass, she wont see a thing”
Goten-“I still don’t like this idea”
Trunks-“just listen to me goten, try very, very hard to get this through yourself, girls like hot showers right, hot showers means steam, she’ll be covered in soap and the top of the glass will be clouded and, that means (drools a little) whenever the water splashes off the glass a beautiful but naked girl will appear”
Goten-“don’t do it”
Trunks-“what if I just take a quick peak”
Goten-“fine, just don’t go in ok”

(Trunks, gets up from the box, he walks slowly around and opens the door slightly, he sees that he was indeed right that the door of the shower is indeed steamed up)

Trunks-“JACKPOT” (he runs in really fast and closes the door behind him)
Goten-“HEY, oh well, his funeral (walks off humming)”

(Trunks slowly moves from side to side across the room, he walks up to a wash basket and hides behind there for a sec)

Trunks-(whispering to himself) “aww man, it’s too hard to see from this angle” (he then notices a pair of videl’s panties on top of the wash basket and starts to drool, he raises his hand to pick them up and suddenly the shower door opens slightly, he ducks, and it turns out videl is just reaching for the soap, the door closes and trunks gets up) “man that was close”
Goten-(from behind him) “see anything yet” (trunks cringes, turns)”
Trunks-(whispering) “what are you doing”
Goten-“well I got curious as to….(trunks tries to shush him, goten whispers) oh sorry, I got curious about what the big deal is so I just walked in hope you don’t mind”
Trunks-“of course not, just hide over there, and prepare for the thrill of your life” (goten goes to hide behind something in the room, trunks tries to get a closer view) “ok now keep quiet goten, we don’t want videl…….”
Videl-(from inside the shower) “who’s out there” (trunks cringes, videl opens the shower door and sees him standing in the middle of the room, she gets an angry look on her face) “trunks what are you doing here”
Trunks-“I, I, I, uh, eh, uh, muh, gah, (looks around wants to hide but its too late, suddenly his trousers fall down, trunks thinks to himself) “whoa saved by the bell” (trunks looks up at videl who is now giggling at him, trunks pulls up his trousers) “um, I was just, well, trying to you know, lighten the pond a little bit and well there were no other bathrooms and I really needed to go”
Videl-“oh, well if that’s true then that’s fine, anyway could you hand me that towel over there while you’re here”
Trunks-“oh sure” (goes over and grabs a towel, gives it to her, and she raps it round herself inside, she then comes out dripping wet)
Videl-“now can you show me to my room, I need to get dressed”
Trunks-(blushing) “oh sure” (he leads her out of the bathroom, they walk down the hall together, and trunks leads her to an unused room filled with girly stuff) “wow this room was made for a girl”
Videl-“well thanks for letting me come trunks, you’re a lifesaver” (she kisses him on the cheek and he goes red, she walks into her room and turns) “oh by the way, can you fetch me my clothes from the bathroom, I think my panties are still usable” (trunks blushes and nods, videl closes the door on him, and he starts drooling again, goten is right in front of him)
Goten-“you said we would see her naked”
Trunks-“oh well, at least I get to touch her panties” (trunks faints with the excitements, goten prods him with his finger)

END OF PART 2

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PART 3 – Return of the Father

(This next part takes place on the saijan ship, it shows a high rise view of the training room, it’s just an empty room, gigantic in size and smooth in shape, there is a command centre above it, King V enters)

King V-“now this is the training room”
Gohan/goku-“whoa” (they all look around)
Vegeta-“hey, I thought you said this was a training room, this looks more like a big turquoise box”
King V-“oh believe me vegeta, some of the most toughest men in the galaxy have trained right in this room”
Goku-“but theres nothing here”
Gohan-“yeah, how are we supposed to train if it’s just like this?”
King V-“hmm, I was getting to that, (points) see that thing floating above the room, that’s a simulate, it produces light and spiritual energy the two things needed to make you think that all the things around you are real, the program we’ve invented also produces smell and sound, and because of the ki energy each individual figure produces, it gives them a physical presence around the arena, so which one of you are up to the challenge”
Goku-“sounds good to me, I’ll go first”
King V-“all right, the rest of you follow me” (the rest leave while goku walks around the room waiting for the simulate to work, minutes later, King V, Vegeta and gohan appear in the simulate centre from an elevator, and he presses many buttons starting the machine) “now are you sure your ready for this goku”
Goku-“ready and steady”
King V-“now hopefully the realness of these produced beings wont misguide you from reality but if it does then god help you, once the machine starts theres no turning back until one of you give up”
Goku-“listen I’m pretty tough so I think I can handle it”
King V-“alright (pushes some buttons) now here’s how the machine works, I pick a random figure or as you like to call it, bad guy from your memory bank, that’s your subconscious to be exact, and then the machine will instantly hide a produced hologram of that very person in the surrounding area, and I can increase the holograms speed and power to match your own, and don’t worry you wont get hurt if you don’t believe it, hehehe, you can use your full power in here, its quite safe”
Goku-“alright, let’s start” (a machine countdown begins)
Machine-“scanning for memory details (a light beam hits goku’s eye) scanning complete, scanning for maximum power rating (another beam of light surrounds goku’s body) complete, initialising and uploading physical memory icon into surrounding area, complete, uploading system” (a forest scenery is produced, goku begins to move around)
Goku-“wow this is realistic”
King V-(from the command centre which has disappeared) “now remember Kakarot, don’t give in to the temptations of the virtual world, remember that what you see here is fake and cannot hurt you (goku walks into a rock and cringes) oh except that” (goku walks around a bit more, at hits a tree) “oh and the trees have a presence too by the way”
Goku-“I don’t mean to be rude but SHUT UP!”
King V-“hmm, manners”

(Goku walks around a bit more, tries to gain a grip over the virtual world, a giant bird flies close to him, he blocks himself and the figure goes straight through, goku turns around feeling stupid, within the trees a dark figure appears, only his eyes can be seen shining through the forest, he moves quickly, goku looks to see what the noise was, looks in front of him and a dark figure just stands there with his head bowed)

Goku-“ok, who are you, (no reply, goku looks puzzled, he thinks this through) well, your too tall to be freiza, Majin Buu, the androids or…..possibly babadi, but then again your not big enough to be either garlic junior or even olibu, hmm, not tall enough for piccolo or cell, not big enough to be ox king, master Roshi or android 16, so I guess its between pikkon, one of the ginyu force or….ah what am I doing, WHO ARE YOU”

(The figure steps out of the light for a second, only part of him is shown, all goku can really make out is a tail)

Goku-“ok so he’s a saijan, so does that mean he’s vegeta or Napa, or maybe he’s raditz, oh this is confusing”

(Suddenly the figure makes a move, goku moves in time to stop a karate chop to his neck, he then continues a little spar with the man in the darkness of the wood, he hides behind a tree for a second and the figure catches up to him, he has a rock thrown at him but blasts it with a ki blast, goku becomes a little desperate and uses the solar flare to blind his enemy, it works and goku comes out of the wooded area and into the clear, once there he sees the man walking towards him)

Goku-“ok, now I’m a little freaked out, just who is this guy” (the man walks out of the woods and the light slowly reveals parts of him, when the figure walks completely out the light reveals a tall bandana wearing man about goku’s height, scar on left cheek and same haircut) “unreal, I’ve never seen this guy before, but he looks like me (the figure walks towards him, forms a light ball, the same kind vegeta used against goku in their first battle) WAIT A MINUTE, FATHER!”
Machine-“increasing strength and agility”
Goku-“uh oh, this doesn’t sound good (Bardock throws the ball into the air and quickly changes into ozaru form, he becomes wild and outraged, goku senses amazing power) that’s some kind of machine, its made my father seem stronger than me, guess theres only one thing left to do (goku powers up to super saijan, puts his hands in front of him) EVEN IF YOU’RE MY FATHER, I WONT BE FOOLED BY A HOLOGRAM SO TAKE THIS, KA……….ME……….HA……….ME…………(the giant ape tries to flatten goku, goku disappears and reappears in front of him) HHHHAAAAAA!!!!” (goku blasts the giant ape into oblivion, when the smoke clears there is nothing there, goku seems a little drained) that….should…..do it”
Machine-“increasing speed and power to maximum level”
Goku-“WHAT” (he turns around to find the giant ape behind him, one giant fist comes crashing down on goku’s body, he bounces straight off the ground) “ah, ah, that’s it, I quit”
Vegeta-(from the command centre) “what’s that, Kakarot quitting (speaks to the mike) get up Kakarot, are you saying that your gonna let yourself be beaten by a hologram (as vegeta says this, the giant ape comes closer to him and goku starts to get up) GET UP, SHOW US YOUR MADE OF BETTER STUFF”
King V-“I didn’t know you cared so much”
Vegeta-(to his father) “I refuse to see Kakarot lose to something that isnt there” (goku gets on his feet)
Goku-“ok, (stumbles a little) this is gonna take a lot but it’s worth it” (turns super saijan 2, then goes super saijan 3, the spiritual energy of the surrounding area seems to swirl round goku as he changes)
King v-“this cant be, his power is off the scale” (vegeta smiles slightly)
Goku-(still powers up) “KA…..ME…….HA……ME (the beast comes closer to him) HHHHAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!” (Goku blasts the beast once again, a violent scream is heard, the ship begins to shake, after a few seconds, goku releases the Kamehameha wave from full power and then stops, the giant ape is completely gone)
King V-“unbelievable, the spiritual energy around goku has completely wiped out the system, it’ll take hours to recharge this”
Vegeta-“that’s super saijan 3 for you” (vegeta looks on in despair, goku wipes his nose in glee)
King V-“I think that’s enough training for today, I don’t think my ship can handle anymore anyhow”
Goku-“oh that’s ok, I was getting hungry anyway” (everyone collapses, goku stands and smiles)

END OF PART 3

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PART 4 – CAN I SEE YOU NAKED, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE

(This part starts maybe hours or a day later with trunks training in the gym with goten, videl is there too, trunks walks about watching videl doing exercises, he tries to get the thought out of his head but keeps staring, he goes on the quad bikes with goten)

Goten-“this is kinda fun isnt it trunks, my mom wont spring for this kind of equipment at my house, your so lucky (trunks stares at videl) trunks”
Trunks-(looking to goten) “oh sorry goten, I got distracted”
Goten-(whispering) “were you looking at videl again”
Trunks-“GAH WHAT MAKES YOU SAY THAT HA, HA, (videl leaves the room) ok maybe I was, but I just can’t help it, I don’t know why but I just cant you know”
Goten-“if you ask me, it’s getting kinda annoying”
Trunks-(to himself) “if I could just sneak a peak”
Goten-“TRUNKS ARE YOU LISTENING”
Trunks-“what, oh sorry”
Goten-“huff, huff, (gets off the bike) trunks until you can deal with this problem more openly I’m not speaking to you, good day” (goten leaves the room grabbing a towel)
Trunks-“goten, aww, what now” (trunks sits on a bench and puts his head on his knees)
Videl-“trunks (from the other room, she comes in wearing a training bra and a towel)”
Trunks-(looks at videl then turns away) “Gah, uh what is it”
Videl-“sigh, ok this may seem a little out of your league but do you know where this ship keeps the tampons, I need a few”
Trunks-(to himself) “do not put that picture into my head, do not put that picture into my head”
Videl-“sorry”
Trunks-“oh nothing, uh I don’t know where they might be, but if you have trouble locating them I’d be glad to help (to himself) shouldn’t have said that”
Videl-“ok what’s going on, it’s like every time I enter a room, you get really, really shy”
Trunks-“what makes you think that hehehe?”
Videl-“are you hiding something trunks”
Trunks-“uh no nothing”
Videl-(sits down beside him, puts a hand on his head and rubs his hair) “hey it’s because I remind you of gohan isnt it”
Trunks-“huh, what uh n…..”
Videl-“its ok, I know you were close with gohan and you really miss him, you can say it”
Trunks-“well yeah I guess”
Videl-“I’m sure we’ll be seeing gohan in no time” (she gets up to leave)
Trunks-“UH VIDEL (she turns) uh, theres something I’ve been meaning to ask you”
Videl-“is this about woman, because I can give you some pointers”
Trunks-“hehehe actually it kinda is”
Videl-(sits beside him, puts an arm round him, trunks blushes) “now tell me, what is it”
Trunks-“well you see, I have this friend right”
Videl-“right”
Trunks-“and he’s kinda a pervert if you know what I mean”
Videl-“well what does he do”
Trunks-“well you see, theres this girl he really likes right, (waves his hands in front of himself) and well, he kinda wants to get more intimate with her I think”
Videl-“what do you mean by that, is he much older than you”
Trunks-“well actually were the same age, that’s why I find it weird”
Videl-“oh, well that does sound weird, well what kind of intimate, like trips or dates or something”
Trunks-“well, actually, he really, really wants to see her……you know”
Videl-“hmm, I think he’s a bit young to be thinking about that”
Trunks-“well he’s been looking at a few websites if you know what I mean, ha, ha, eh!!!! And well, he was just curious about the human body”
Videl-“well you tell him he should probably wait a few years before he starts thinking about that”
Trunks-“oh yeah, yeah I will definitely, don’t you worry hehehe”
Videl-“well it’s been nice talking to you but I think I need to go to bed, (she begins to walk away and trunks breathes a sigh of relief) oh by the way, who’s this girl, that you wanna see naked”
Trunks-“gah, what me” (points to himself)
Videl-“I can tell when someone’s making an excuse, now tell me who is she”
Trunks-“well, uh……”
Videl-“someone in your class”
Trunks-“no”
Videl-“hmm, someone I know”
Trunks-“uh, kinda I guess”
Videl-“hmm, well (thinks to herself) Marron is still a little young, chi-chi’s too old for you, Bulma’s your mother so I guess that leaves me hehehe”
Trunks-(trunks looks on in disbelief, videl winks for some reason) “huh, you’re not mad”
Videl-“why would I be mad, it’s natural, I am beautiful”
Trunks-“well uh…….hot is usually the word”
Videl-“oh, then I must be really hot ha, ha, ha”
Trunks-“hehehe, (desperate to leave so he speaks faster) well thanks for talking to me videl, it was a real help getting that off my chest, I’ll just be leaving now (whistles while he tries to leave embarrased)”
Videl-“hmm, trunks, don’t just leave”
Trunks-(stops and turns around) “uh what do you mean”
Videl-(points to the exit) “come with me”
Trunks-(trunks starts to get a weird thought in his head, videl leads him to her bedroom down the hall, trunks thinks he’s got lucky) “uh, what are we doing”
Videl-“you’ll see” (she leads him into her room which is kinda trashed, trunks looks surprised)
Trunks-(to himself) “man and I thought I was messy”
Videl-(she closes the door behind her) “now I’ll be right back” (she goes into another room, trunks watches her leave, he starts drooling and getting excited, runs to her bed and tries out a number of positions, by that I mean lying down, sitting, lying back, he decides just to sit, videl returns) “now close your eyes”
Trunks-(he closes his eyes, videl comes closer to him, grabs his hand and places an envelop in his hand, trunks opens his eyes again) “huh what’s this”
Videl-“oh just couple of pictures of me when I was drunk one night, my friends were over and decided to bring a camera for fun, theres a couple of flashing pictures in their but nothing special”
Trunks-“uh why you giving this to me”
Videl-“because, I don’t want gohan finding out I like to go a bit overboard sometimes, I don’t really trust myself to keep a secret, and since you’re the curious one, you get to keep them”
Trunks-“uh thanks, uh is there…..”
Videl-“oh yeah, but mostly just flashing, theres a couple of my friends too”
Trunks-(starts to drool again) “thank you”
Videl-“your welcome, just remember I’m doing this as a favour, not because I’m sexually challenged, now run along, (trunks gets off the bed and walks to the door, videl follows him, opens the door and pats trunks on the butt) ha, ha, sorry, an old football tradition”
Trunks-“oh in that case” (trunks slaps her ass and runs, videl laughs, then closes the door yawning) “wait till I show goten hehehe, WAH” (trunks trips over and the pictures fall out, he stuffs them back into the envelope and goes, trunks runs into goten’s room excited and bursts through the door) “GOTEN, GOTEN”
Goten-(swirling round in his desk chair) “yeah trunks”
Trunks-“hahahaha you didn’t think it could be done could you” (walks closer to him)
Goten-“what couldn’t be done”
Trunks-(rustling open the envelope) “HAHAHA YOU DIDN’T THINK I COULD DO IT BUT HERE IT IS (pulls out the pictures and throws them in goten’s face) ONE, STEAMING HOT PIC….TURE…….of……….a………chicken”
Goten-“nice rooster trunks, how’d you take that”
Trunks-(flicks through the photo’s and collapses) “why me”

END OF PART 4, END OF EPISODE 4

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now lets hear your opinions.

i'm kinda stuck for what i wanna do for episode 5 so i need a few suggestions, it would only take me half a day to write it anyhow so any ideas from you guys would be really helpful.

basically i want them maybe to find the new planet in the 5th one or should i have another side episode of them on the ship, you decide.

[kingbrolly]

bravo. even though i couldn’t be asked to read all of it the last bit sounded good.

[gokuromario]

thanks i guess

[kingbrolly]

o.k I just read the hole of it and videl never in a million years behave like that. I know it’s your story but try and keep they personalities. I still like it very much.

[gokuromario]

didnt you read the part where she tricks him into believing she's given him naked photo's, meh some people are heard to please i guess, but i'm glad you liked it, episode 5 should be up and running soon, theres only one last thing i need to do before posting it.

actually write it

;D ;D ;D

[SockPerson]

Two chapters on Trunks being perverted.............
I didn't expect that.
Videl teasing Trunks like that was just weird also....

Well....whatever. Its your story. I wouldn’t want you to change it just because some people don't agree.


It's written well....

[~*Hieislove*~]

now what would pan think but its pretty good i guess ?_?

[gokuromario]

what would pan think, she doesnt exist in this story yet, what are you talking about.

i just thought it would be a good idea to make trunks a new master roshi to give the thing an interesting story, and i think we can all remember when we were his age am i right

[~*Hieislove*~]

i was saying if she was

[gokuromario]

oh right, well pan isnt in to trunks anyway

[Kuhan]

pan's into trunks. trunks ain't into pan