kingbrolly
Super Saiyan
bow to your king!!!
Posts: 295
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Post by kingbrolly on Dec 15, 2004 16:59:35 GMT -5
vegeta is not a asshole,He’s sophisticated
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Post by gokuromario on Dec 15, 2004 18:22:08 GMT -5
exactly, he's an asshole ;D ;D ;D
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Post by Trunksangel79 on Jan 12, 2005 1:58:45 GMT -5
It's interesting!
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Post by Little Syxx on Jan 12, 2005 7:38:57 GMT -5
;D This is great! Update it soon! (on a side note why are parts 1 and 2 on page 1 and 3 and 4 on page 2? Did someone reply to these two and not the 3rd and 4th. Kind of like what I'm doing now.)
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Post by TheDarkPrince on Jan 12, 2005 13:17:21 GMT -5
I liked this episode, but one thing I didn't like was your explination of how king v survived. Remember, all his men were vaporized by frieza, so how could they have taken him to his pod?
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Post by gokuromario on Jan 13, 2005 7:46:11 GMT -5
hmm good point, but think of it this way
no one really saw what happened to king v, they only really assumed he was dead.
by the way, the parts where shorter so i connected them
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Post by TheDarkPrince on Jan 13, 2005 13:45:11 GMT -5
That's not true, Frieza saw king v die and it's in his flashback where we see his death. king v couldn't have survived, at least not in the way described here
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Post by Trunksangel79 on Jan 13, 2005 21:41:52 GMT -5
;D This is great! Update it soon! (on a side note why are parts 1 and 2 on page 1 and 3 and 4 on page 2? Did someone reply to these two and not the 3rd and 4th. Kind of like what I'm doing now.) Cause I started to read episode 1 & 2 the other night,but got too tired to read 3,&4.
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Post by gokuromario on Jan 14, 2005 10:21:51 GMT -5
hmm you make a good point.
but heres the thing.
vegeta never saw king v die, he was just told that, by the time the planet was blown up freiza was long gone and vegeta was none the wiser.
i know your saying that some people watched him die but see it from my point of view, vegeta never really found out how his father died because he never saw it happen so he doesnt know whether or not he's alive but he's becoming suspicious about this person thats just shown up.
i guess i'm not perfect at fan fics but you can get the gist of it
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Post by TheDarkPrince on Jan 14, 2005 11:42:14 GMT -5
I wan't implying you were bad at fanfics, I was just pointing out a small glitch. I'ts a good story overall.
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Post by gokuromario on Jan 15, 2005 9:27:36 GMT -5
yeah, thanks for your comment anyway i like a bit of criticism
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