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Post by gokuromario on Feb 12, 2005 17:39:20 GMT -5
Saijan Reunion Episode 9 – The Warriors Decision
Part 1 – Memories
(trunks sits beside videl looking at an old photo album, goten is bored so starts doing push ups, videl flips through the pages looking for good photo’s, she stops and stares at one)
Videl-“hey I’ve never noticed this one before”
Trunks-(looking at it) “what do you mean, isn’t that you there with your dad”
Videl-“no, that’s somebody else”
Trunks-“well is it your mom”
Videl-“I’m not sure, the eyes look so…..similar, but there’s something about this picture I don’t trust”
Trunks-(points to something in the woman’s hands) “hey look, is that a baby”
Videl-(gasps) “oh, so…..this is my mother huh…….”
Trunks-“she’s very pretty” (goten comes over and looks)
Goten-“she looks just like you”
Videl-“yeah (to herself, thinking) I’ve never seen any pictures of her, she looks so happy with my dad and me, what ever happened to make them split up must have been huge, maybe my dad just became too successful, maybe that’s why he’s so protective of me, because I remind him of my mother”
Trunks-“uh videl”
Videl-“yeah”
Trunks-“maybe we should take a few pictures; it would be nice if we could have some memories, besides it’ll give us something to do”
Goten-“that’s a good idea”
Videl-“sure lets do it”
(Later on videl manages to find a camera in the back of the ship, she sets it up, and begins preparation on the background, and the two boys come back through with their space suits on)
Videl-“whoa, Halloween already”
Goten-“no trunks thought it would be nice to wear our space suits, you know just so everybody’d know we were in space”
Videl-“good idea” (takes a step forward and stops quickly, thinks to herself for a second) “darn I forgot, we don’t have any spare suits”
Trunks-“ah that’s ok, so who’s up first”
Videl-“why don’t you go first buzz aldren”
Trunks-“buzz who, forget it, sure why not” (trunks takes a step forward, moves to his position, strikes a pose for the camera as videl is positioning it, goten laughs) “like this”
Videl-“yeah like that”
Trunks-“or maybe like this (does some weird Arnold Schwarzenegger pose, the others laugh, the camera goes off a few times as trunks does a few poses) the camera loves me”
Videl-“yeah, I think I saw the lens crack just there, alright my turn, you know how to use this thing don’t you”
Trunks-(thinks to himself) “uh sure, point and uh click”
Videl-“right”
Goten-“good luck videl”
(Videl takes to the backdrop and trunks begins taking pictures of her, he starts saying things like “yeah that’s it, work it, show us the magic”)
Videl-“your really getting the hang of this” (she poses again) “just don’t ask me to pose nude ok”
Trunks-(laughs, sarcastically) “aw, how’d you figure that one out, I was just about to ask goten to pose with you”
Goten-“I’m not getting naked”
Videl-“nobodies getting naked goten, it was just a joke”
Goten-(turns away) “some joke”
Trunks-(sarcastically) “aw come on it was just a joke, besides I bet you have a great body”
Goten-(blushes a little) “well I do like to keep in shape”
Videl-“ok enough of the naked jokes already its beginning to become disturbing how much you know about this stuff at your age
Trunks-“well things are different, kids are acting older, woman are getting younger through the use of breast implants, its part of life’s evolutionary chain, besides its natural to be nude sometimes, I mean WHY don’t we all just strip sometime, not to the full extent mind you just underwear or something and we’ll all throw a big party, have some cake and stuff, do some dancing maybe after that get drunk and teach aliens English, it’ll be a blast”
(Everyone begins laughing at the thought of aliens)
Videl-“alright, lets get off the subject, there’s tons more to talk about anyhow, hey goten your up”
Goten-“KAY”
END OF PART 1
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Post by gokuromario on Feb 12, 2005 17:39:50 GMT -5
PART 2 – Forming an alliance
(This part takes place right where we last left off with Frento and Goku discussing with each other)
Goku-“so, if I’m reading you correctly, you and your team developed energy depletion devices to store large amounts of energy in to an industrial size conductor, in order to supply your planet with the energy it needed to function”
Frento-“that’s right, our planet doesn’t revolve around a sun, we have to supply the energy ourselves to keep this planet safe from galactic harm”
Goku-“but does that mean your planet….is a machine”
Frento-“not exactly but I does have a mechanical core, the original core dried up a long time ago so we needed to act fast, once the core cooled we acted, but if we didn’t act fast we were done for”
Goku-“that’s really something, man I didn’t think cores could just freeze up like that, man, this planet must have been here a really long time”
Frento-“well, as far as I know, the planet has survived for other 4 billion years so I’m guessing everything has its time clock”
Goku-“4 billion wow”
Frento-“our calculations were simple, draw light energy from other planets, other moons and even stars and we would keep going but our master wanted more, he wanted to use the energy for evil, that’s why we left, its been 3 long years since that day, and our planet is slowly dissolving due to the suns rays, its only a matter of time before were fried to a crisp”
Goku-“that’s terrible”
Frento-“so we formed this alliance, hoping that we could one day put a stop to this, we developed ships, droids, catapults, anything we could find but it wasn’t enough”
Goku-“why not”
Frento-“unfortunately the battle you experienced today was not the first we have had several battles like that”
Goku-“what do you mean”
Frento-“it seems that our enemy is much more devious than we had hoped”
Goku-“so, let me guess, were not the only ones to come to this planet”
Frento-“exactly”
Goku-“how many”
Frento-“37, 37 powerful warriors from different galaxies, 37 battles against our droids, 37 defeats, and………..37 disappearances”
Goku-“disappearances”
Frento-“each warrior came and was never seen again, it’s like they just vanished from the face of this world”
Goku-“so you brought us here because you wanted to protect us from being captured or whatever’s been going on”
Frento-“exactly, we needed your forces”
Goku-“so you planned all of this, right from the beginning”
Frento-“yes, we planned that you would be here, we sent spies to go aboard the enemy vessel and watch closely at your every action, we know of your super saijan 3 strength, and your……..tremendous appetites, we know everything because we watched it through a tiny hidden camera”
Goku-“but how on earth did you get aboard, and how did you ever last for so many weeks”
Frento-“as I told you before, I sent spies, I believe your familiar with Hades, second in command of the palace guards”
Goku-“HADES, your kidding, that guy was your spy, man, you know I had a full feature length convo with him once, he had his hood up so I couldn’t see his face but man the guy was all yack, yack, yack you know, and he never once mentioned he was with you, you should give him a promotion he……”
Frento-“goku, I’m not interested in the polite conversations you and Hades might have had, we have more pressing matters to deal with”
Goku-“just one question though, what exactly is he doing with the energy, your master I mean”
Frento-“we don’t know it’s a mystery”
Goku-“so this machine transfers any light energy, so that’s where my spirit bomb went to”
Frento-“yes, indeed, goku I’m sorry to say this but…….about a day ago our scanners pick up an unknown energy reading from a nearby base of operations hidden in the mountains, it was confirmed by Hades that the base had captured a young man, roughly aged early 20’s wearing one of the guards uniforms, do you know of him”
Goku-“well no, I wouldn’t know of any intruders………huh unless, no your not talking about gohan are you?”
Frento-“tall boy, black hair, able to run at the speed of light, ring a bell”
Goku-(tenses himself, lets out a kind of grunt) “d*mn IT, WHAT WAS HE THINKING”
Frento-“I feel he was thinking of getting to the bottom of this, goku I know your angry but I feel gohan is still alive, I’m sure of it, besides, he may be of some use to us”
Goku-“so, what do we do now”
Frento-“we wait”
Goku-“wait! What do you mean wait?”
Frento-“we wait, I have already planned this, Hades has convinced a number of guards to join in an alliance against both the king and our master, they should be beginning manoeuvre F shortly”
Goku-“manoeuvre F?”
Frento-“it’s called F for FIGHT, we have no other choice but to take the palace, and the base by force, we will transform into oozaru’s and take what is ours”
Goku-“wait oozaru’s now, I’m afraid this planet doesn’t have a moon, how are you going to……..unless…….your using my father’s technique aren’t you”
Frento-“if it’ll help”
Goku-“perfect, but wont the oozaru’s destroy the planet”
Frento-“dear goku, why so negative, we plan for these things remember, we have set up a psychic wave link between each other so strong that any known beast will immediately obey, and if that doesn’t work we’ve installed electrical collars which stretch to any size and shock whoever disobeys, or we’ll try and reason with the with the new ear radio we’ve been working on”
Goku-“so you have everything sorted then”
Frento-“exactly…….so all we have to do……..is wait!”
Goku-“but what if the oozaru’s aren’t strong enough”
Frento-(pauses) “then……..there are very little choices we can make”
END OF PART 2
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Post by gokuromario on Feb 12, 2005 17:40:10 GMT -5
PART 3 – Closing in on a doomed planet
(This part takes place once again aboard trunks, gotens and videls ship, videl is closely examining the monitors while goten and trunks train together, videl speaks to them using a holographic projection unit (TV screen to be exact)
Videl-“good news guys, were closing in on planet Kin-To-Un, we should be arriving shortly”
Trunks-(stopping) “that’s great” (goten smashes his cheek) “OOWWW, did you have to hit so hard”
Goten-“sorry, (looking up at the screen) so how long until we get there”
Videl-“well by my calculations, we should be arriving in just under 30 minutes, pack your bags fellas, were getting off this buggy”
Both-“YEAH”
Videl-(touching a few buttons) “hold on, my sensors indicate that there is an unknown particle rising from the planets surface, and my scanners indicate that the its made up of light and energy, we should be careful”
Trunks-“what do you mean”
Videl-“well I’m not certain but it may be that someone is about to launch a KI attack”
Goten-“they can’t be pointing at us we’re all the way up here”
Videl-“I can’t be certain, I’ve scanned the whole planet for any unknown energy readings and as far as I can tell, it’s not of any threat to us”
Trunks-(thinks to himself) “father, what’s going on”
END OF PART 3
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Post by gokuromario on Feb 12, 2005 17:40:39 GMT -5
PART 4 – Getting the inside scoop
(In a dark dungeon, miles away from civilisation, underneath the secret base of operations we find gohan again, chained to the wall, he has his head tilted downwards and is sleeping soundly, outside the cell door we see several guards protecting the door, Hades makes his entrance)
Guard 1-“halt”
Hades-“stand down men”
Guard 2-“sorry sir, we have strict orders from master turnip”
Hades-(walks over to the guard, goes close to him) “are you challenging my authority maggot”
Guard 2-(scared) “uh no sir, I was just……”
Hades-“forget about it, listen I need to speak with the prisoner”
Guard 1-“what about”
Hades-“master Turnip has sent specific word not to reveal any information to anyone, except for the prisoner, I have been granted access, I hope you will not stand in my way”
Guard 2-“no sir”
Hades-“good” (goes to the door, takes a key from guard 2’s pocket, he opens the door with the key and goes inside, he shuts the door behind him, he walks over to gohan) “peh, sleeping on the job while all this commotion is going on, pathetic, I’m surprised our guards were able to let him get so far before he was captured, he’s quite the wonder” (picks up a bucket of water from the side of the room, he throws it on gohan, gohan begins to wake up) “rise and shine sleepy head, I’ve got a few things I need to discuss”
Gohan-(shakes his head) “what happened, (looks up, his eyes are adjusting to the light) Hades, is it you”
Hades-“yeah sunshine, it’s me”
Gohan-(jostles his head again) “what happened”
Hades-“you hit by master turnips mind crushing waves, your lucky you can still speak”
Gohan-“man, where am I”
Hades-“you’re being held captive in an underground prison cell far below the surface of the planet”
Gohan-“so I was captured huh, well that makes sense, I wondered what happened after I got zapped from a mile away (stands up, the chains stop him from moving far) oh great chains (tries to pull them off, doesn’t work) what the”
Hades-“I’m afraid the metal of those chains is made from Kacheem, the hardest known metal…….”
Gohan-“yeah I know Kacheem when I see it, but how did you guys find some of this stuff”
Hades-“it wasn’t easy but we did”
Gohan-“so I’m guessing you’re here to pay your final respects huh”
Hades-“no I’m here to give you a message”
Gohan-“huh, a message, what kind”
Hades-“listen carefully, in a moment you will feel a great rumble coming from the planets surface, do not be alarmed this is all part of our tactical manoeuvres”
Gohan-“wait now I’m confused what’s going on”
Hades-“you see gohan, I am working undercover for a group called the Mali Growth Infidels, we are an elite science team working together to put a stop to whoever’s behind these atrocities”
Gohan-“(rubs his head) man how long was I out”
Hades-“well, about 2 days I guess”
Gohan-“two days, what’s happened in the last two days?”
Hades-“it’s hard to explain but I’ll try, you see during the past two days a plot has been organised by the royals to imprison you your father and vegeta, unfortunately because of your meddling they were able to capture you sooner, but because we acted fast kakarot and vegeta are safely hidden away in one of our base camps”
Gohan-“I thought something was wrong, this all seemed to suspicious to be real”
Hades-“gohan, do you remember much before you were knocked unconscious”
Gohan-“nothing except I remember reading blueprints”
Hades-“can you tell me anything about these blueprints”
Gohan-“well from what I can remember they were blueprints of multi terrain holographic projection units, something about producing holographic images around parts of the planet, I’m not sure what for”
Hades-“anything else”
Gohan-“a type of energy transference modulator, something of great mass and capacity, again I don’t know what it’s for”
Hades-“that’ll be enough for just now, you can rest if you wish”
Gohan-“thank you (a rumble is felt, gohan nearly falls to the floor) what’s going on”
Hades-(pause) “and so it begins”
Gohan-“alright, I don’t know what’s going on but I’m not gonna stick around to find out, how about we get out of here”
Hades-“I’m afraid I can’t do that”
Gohan-“why not”
Hades-“I’ve said too much, I should go (turns to leave)”
Gohan-“hey where are you going, come back here, what’s going on”
Hades-(turning back) “just believe me you don’t want to know”
Gohan-“don’t want to know what”
Hades-(stands in silence, orders for the doors to be re-opened, he leaves)
Gohan-“what in gods name is going on?”
END OF PART 4 END OF EPISODE 9
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Post by gokuromario on Feb 12, 2005 17:42:30 GMT -5
so what yall think of this one.
personally i like this one because its a suspense maker.
i'm not sure where i'm going with this series but i have a few more surprises to work on.
i'm still undecided of how there all going to get back home though.
any suggestions
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Post by gokuromario on Feb 12, 2005 17:46:39 GMT -5
also i just wanted to say sorry that this one has taken so long to write, it was hard for me over the last week or two thinking up new ideas.
i promise it'll be weekly from now on
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Post by ~*Hieislove*~ on Feb 12, 2005 18:54:50 GMT -5
You could of fit those last two post in one -_-
Well it is a long read *_* but I like it.
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Post by gokuromario on Feb 12, 2005 19:07:44 GMT -5
thanks thats always good to hear.
i'm not the best writer in the world but hell i know how to write a good script
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Post by TheDarkPrince on Feb 13, 2005 12:58:06 GMT -5
D*mn I'm confused. Good work though.
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Post by Trunksangel79 on Feb 13, 2005 17:35:20 GMT -5
I like it,it's pretty good. ;D
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Post by gokuromario on Feb 13, 2005 17:50:39 GMT -5
why are you confused
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Post by Little Syxx on Feb 13, 2005 18:00:47 GMT -5
Pretty good ;d.
Lot better than the last few episodes of my fic.
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Post by gokuromario on Feb 14, 2005 4:17:02 GMT -5
really, what was your fic
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Post by TheDarkPrince on Feb 14, 2005 14:06:40 GMT -5
Because of Frento's story, I didn't quite follow it. Also, did you notice you named this part after the episode of DBZ where Vegeta fights Buu? |
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Post by Little Syxx on Feb 14, 2005 15:53:43 GMT -5
really, what was your fic Dragon Ball ATL...it's been going for 23 episodes now.  |
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