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Post by gokuromario on Feb 26, 2005 9:30:28 GMT -5
Saijan reunion Episode 11 – Battle for the planet of the Apes part 2
Part 1 – All hell breaks loose
(We pick up from where we last left off, goten and trunks go to fight against the giant ape unbeknownst to them that its trunk’s so called grandpa, goku has just felt the energy of videl dying as she is being squeezed in the monsters grip and is on his way, gohan discovers videls turmoil and breaks free of his chains to rush over there and save her, we continue the story with gohan flying through the air in super saijan 2 form, pent up with rage he races towards the giant ape)
Gohan-(snarling) “I WONT LET SOME GIANT APE TURN MY LOVE INTO MUSH, GET READY WHATEVER YOU ARE CAUSE HERE I COME” (blasts off even faster into the distance, we now find goten and trunks desperately trying to set videl free of the monsters clutches)
Trunks-(pulling at the mighty fists) “LET HER GO” (rips away at its hand finger by finger, goten does the same, suddenly in a flash of light goku appears in front of the oozaru’s face)
Goten-“DAD” (the oozaru takes one look at goku as goku drives his fist into the beasts nose, zooms out of vision and brings the beast to its knees with a shuddering kick to the stomach, the oozaru lets go of videl and she lets out a gasp, goku backs off the now hurt oozaru king) “dad what’s going on”
Trunks-“Mr Son, what is this thing”
Goku-“its ok boys, I’m here and I’ll explain everything, videl are you okay”
Videl-“yeah, just a little out of breath that’s all”
Goku-“alright, you see……..”
Gohan-“HHHHHHHHEEEEEEEEYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAA” (gohan suddenly appears, his foot flying through the air, he zooms past the foursome with tremendous speed and thrashes his foot into the oozaru, who is sent straight back into the castle)
Goku-“what, gohan, STOP”
Gohan-(sends a shuddering array of punches to the head of the beast, disappears and reappears at certain points around its body where he is sending about everything he has into his blows, the oozaru screams in pain as each blow hit, parts of the apes armour are now disintegrating) “I’ll teach you for hurting my fiancé”
Goku-“GOHAN STOP, HE’S BEATEN, STOP IT” (gohan doesn’t listen to his dad) “he’s not listening to me, he’s lost control of his anger, I have to stop him” (goku powers up to super saijan, throws himself towards gohan who is about to fire a KI blast which will end the beasts life but goku blocks him with a blow to the face, gohan floats there still but shaking, he comes out of his super saijan form and begins to breath again, he looks at goku)
Gohan-“dad, what was that about”
Goku-“you can’t hurt him”
Gohan-“and why not”
Goku-“because that is the king, I know you may not see it but that is king vegeta”
Trunks-(gasps) “waahh, grandpa”
Goku-“I’m afraid so”
Trunks-“but how can that be him, he’s an ape”
Goku-“he’s in oozaru form, usually when saijans become oozaru’s they lose complete control but he is one of the few who can control his actions”
Trunks-“well he seemed pretty unstable back there”
Goku-“yes I know, I’m not quite sure why but he seems to have lost control somehow”
Videl-(racing towards gohan) “gohan” (grabs him) “I was so worried about you”
Gohan-“videl, your ok”
Videl-“of course, you can’t beat me that easily”
Gohan-“I’m glad (to goku) so dad, if this thing is king vegeta then how come he lost control”
Goku-“I’m not sure”
Goten-“dad what’s going on”
Goku-“it’s a little hard to explain but I’ll try, you see there are these groups of science experts living beneath the surface of the planet, and they have been plotting revenge on the saijan king for years, just moments ago a battle was fought between many of the scientists and the saijan kings army, this is the result, King vegeta transformed in order to beat them, but he’s somehow lost control and has gone off the deep end, a lot of things have been happening before you three got here, and don’t have time to explain them all”
Gohan-“so what now, should we attack it”
Goku-“no, if he’s truly lost control, then there’s only one way to reason with him, and that’s to cut off his tail” (goku disappears, the monster begins to get up, goku appears behind him and fires a kienzon disk at his tail, cutting it straight off, the beast lets out a cry, and begins to decrease in size until he is just a normal man again)
Gohan-“unreal, so it is the king”
Trunks-(racing towards king vegeta who is about to collapse) “grandpa” (grabs him before he falls, king v regains himself and pushes trunks away) “what’s wrong”
Goku-(along with the others he floats down to the ground, king v falls to his knees holding his stomach in pain, goku goes over to him, lifts him by his collar and pulls him to his feet) “I think its about time you explained what’s going on”
King v-“he betrayed me”
Goku-“this master of yours, he betrayed you”
King v-“I didn’t want to harm them, he made me hurt all of them” (turns round, looks at his castle) “MY PALACE, what did I do, I don’t remember, what happened”
Goku-“you destroyed it, with your own hands, you brought down these walls piece by piece and blew away the atoms”
King v-(sobbing) “how could I have done this, where did I go wrong”
Goku-“ENOUGH SOBBING, TELL ME WHATS GOING ON”
King v-(doesn’t answer, just kneels there defeated)
Gohan-“dad, I think I can field this one if you’d like”
Goku-“no, I want to hear it from him”
Goten-“dad”
Videl-“Mr Son, is everything ok”
Goku-“no videl, everything is not okay, and it’s……….wait, (looks to gohan) I just realised, gohan, how did you escape”
Gohan-“it’s a long story, I’ll tell you bout it later”
Videl-“escape”
Gohan-“I was captured, locked away, broke free, no big deal”
King v-(shouting aloud) “MASTER” (everyone turns around to him) “you beast, how could you let me do this, after everything I’ve done for you, you make me destroy me own city, how dare you”
Goku-“GET UP, I’ve got a few things I want answered and I’m not leaving till I get them”
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Post by gokuromario on Feb 26, 2005 9:30:49 GMT -5
King v-(rises to his feet, turns to face them all) “alright, I’ve put on this charade long enough”
Trunks-“uh, I’m confused, what’s going on”
King v-“you see, I’m not who you think I am”
Goku-(sarcastically) “reeeaaalllyyyy, well that’s news isn’t it”
King v-“I’ve lied for the last time, so now I’m going to face up to what I’ve done”
Gohan-“if you’re not the king, then who are you”
King v-“my name is jacana, and this is my true face” (he pulls away his goatee to reveal a bald mouth line, he then pulls away his hair to reveal a different shade of hair colour, instead of brown, it’s bright red, he throws the wig to the ground and stands there firm as usual) “I did tell the truth about one thing…….I am a saijan”
Goku-“I figured that when you transformed”
Jacana-“I’m sorry for the trouble I’ve caused all of you, but now I’m ready to make up for it”
Videl-(to herself) “man, this is weird”
Jacana-“Now the next thing you’ll be wanting to hear is the truth so here it is, about 50 years ago our home planet was destroyed by an evil overlord named Freiza, he left the saijan world to rot in the deep depths of Hades, as for me, I was a mere child when this happened, I was one of the many hundreds of saijans that were sent out into space every day to other planets across the universe just like you kakarot, now things may get a little confusing so I’ll try to explain to the best of my abilities”
“When I was 15 years old, I had already conquered the planet that I was stationed on, my power grew each day and my fighting talents were phenomenal, there really isn’t much to explain before I met………him so I’ll go from there, on my 16th year on the now desolate planet I saw a strange craft fall from the sky, I searched everywhere for that thing but found it to be nowhere in site, I lost all hope of finding others, you see my ship had been damaged from when I was a child so I had no means of escaping my fate, life was hard”
“Suddenly as I slept a great tower began to rise beneath the earth, I was awoken by this site and rushed over to see it, as I got there the tower began to expand and decrease in size until it was not merely a tower but a castle, a great pair of doors opened into the great castle that now stood before me, I entered not knowing what to expect, but as I got inside, that’s when everything changed”
“I was greeted by an enormous hooded figure, I didn’t know who this was but I felt a strong connection to him straight away, I’m not sure where he comes from but he spoke to me, he told me about my saijan heritage, he showed me a vision of what had happened all those years ago, you could imagine my speechlessness, he also told me that he had been examining my fighting skills from a nearby planet and was impressed with me, so he offered me a reward for my hardships, I sat and listened as he told me of how I would be reunited with my race if I helped out, I reluctantly accepted his offer and well the rest is history”
Goku-“and that’s your master”
Jacana-“yes, his name is Turnip, Master Turnip”
Goku-“how nice”
Jacana-“believe me its not as nice as you might think, he taught me many things, how to control my power and how to use it, he and I built upon the planet together, then one day when I was in my 20’s he brought more servants, more innocent victims from other races which he had conquered, I had no idea that he was so powerful, many of them were not saijans, many of them were not earthlings either, I wondered when he would reunite our race, but he just told me soon, soon never came”
“You see, I lied to you before, there are not 1000 saijans living on this planet, quite frankly there’s far less than a tenth of that much, the people you’ve seen wondering around the streets…….”
Gohan-“they are servants”
Jacana-“half right, some are servants, some are holograms, so you could see my situation, rebel against him and I would surely be destroyed, join him, and we could help rebuild the saijan race, he promised me ruler ship, he promised to make me the new king, I couldn’t resist”
Goku-“but wait I’m confused, what happened to the planet you originally landed on, was it destroyed”
Jacana-“goku, don’t be so naïve, take a look around you, YOUR STANDING ON IT” (the others look in every direction, nothing but rubble and desert)
Goku-“well, that makes a lot more sense”
Jacana-“indeed, and goku, don’t bother asking me if I know of Turnips plans because he never showed them to me” (cringes, holds his stomach and kneels to the ground in pain, goku goes to his side, brings out a bottle and asks him to drink from it, he does so and his strength is restored) “thank you”
Gohan-“hey, what is that stuff”
Goku-“it’s a useful remedy a man named Frento gave me, it’s supposed to heal your strength” (takes a sip of it, passes it to gohan who also takes a sip, he passes it to goten and trunks who fight over the remaining drops)
Jacana-“I feel honoured that you are so generous after all I’ve done”
Goku-“after your heart warming speech I’ve realised that you aren’t the bad guy”
Jacana-“but I am, I was sent to your planet to find the prince and bring him here, it was said that I resembled the face of the saijan king so I was forced against my will to go to your planet and bring you both here, I’m not really sure why he wants you here, I just know that it isn’t pretty”
Goku-“whatever happens from now on is not your fault, in fact if you hadn’t brought us here we would never have known of such an evil” (a rumble is felt beneath their feet’s) “what’s happening” (off into the distance, a giant tower begins to come out of the ground)
Jacana-“it’s starting”
Goku-“what’s starting?”
Jacana-“the beginning of the end” (the others begin gasping, jacana speaks a request to goku)
Jacana-“goku, I wish to speak with your new friend Frento, I feel our rivalry has gone on long enough”
Goku-“alright (puts his hand on his shoulder) everyone grab on” (everyone grabs onto goku and he uses the instant translocation technique, goten suddenly stops them before they leave)
Goten-“wait, I’ve got to get Charlie” (goten races off into the distance)
Goku-“Charlie”
Videl-“gotens pet chipmunk”
Goku-“oooohhhh” (goten returns and he performs the technique once again, they disappear into the night as the dark tower rises once again)
END OF PART 1
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Post by gokuromario on Feb 26, 2005 9:31:22 GMT -5
PART 2 – The Beginning of the end
(The Z gang arrive back in the underground base, and Frento stands to greet them all as they appear, a rumble is felt again)
Frento-“ah, you have returned”
Goku-“is vegeta awake yet”
Frento-“no he still sleeps, I felt it was only right that I wait for you to return (looks at Jacana) who’s your new friend”
Jacana-“my name is jacana, I have been impersonating your saijan king for many years and I’m not proud of some of the things I have done, I do not deserve to be in your presence”
Frento-“ah I see, so after all this time I finally see the true face of our ruler, I must say I’m disappointed, I expected you to be taller (snigger to himself) come, we must wake vegeta, you can explain all on the way”
Jacana-“but wait, why do you act so kind, I have betrayed you, I have destroyed your lives, why not punish me”
Frento-“my mother always said to me that people deserve a second chance no matter how evil and besides I’m under false pretences that your master had a few things to do with your behaviour, besides we have bigger things to worry about, now come with me”
(They all head across the many hallways leading to vegeta’s room, Jacana explains everything along the way, how he met Turnip and what he has done, Frento listens to every word, back at the site where the ruins now stand, the kings servants, Frento’s guards and many others stand to look at the ruins)
Aphrodite-(lowers her head) “so he has betrayed us”
Zues-“I expected as much, I knew from the look in his eyes that he was no king”
Apollo-“yes, but we followed him just the same, and now our kingdom is destroyed, what shall we do now”
(One of Frento’s team step up to the playing field)
Man 1-“first we must clear away the damage that your so called king has done then we must rebuild”
Apollo-“and who might you be”
Man 1-“I am Mali Infidel number 15 I am second in command and capable of achieving oozaru form at will”
Apollo-“well, an infidel, a scientist, a saijan scientist at that, so Mr Techno wizard, you mind explaining what just happened”
Man 1-“certainly, now first of all you have been deceived, the king you once knew is someone else, second if you haven’t noticed it already, there are market sellers over there (points) now it must seem strange to you how market sellers are there but the city is destroyed, that’s because they are……….”
(The scene cuts back to gohan and crew)
Gohan-“holograms, every last one of them, the children, the sellers, everything, and the so called illusionary dust you see at night that everyone warns us about, it’s merely a non toxic mist that’s created by the lack of climate around these areas, also the electromagnetic fields around some parts create it, so in a way its dangerous in a way its not”
Frento-“gohan, is there anything else that you discovered inside the lair of master Turnip, I already know about the holographic field generators, I designed them”
Gohan-“oh right, well I’m not sure, but I did learn that the energy transfusion generators that you designed are being reused for another purpose, and that purpose is to be transferred, into what I’m not sure but its some kind of bionic organism, it needs enough energy in order to become whole”
Frento-“that sounds terrible, we must wake vegeta, right away”
Jacana-(stepping in) “wait let me talk with vegeta, it’s only right that I explain everything, I owe it to myself that much”
Frento-“alright, but be careful, vegeta is not the level headed types”
Jacana-“right” (opens the doors to vegeta’s chambers where vegeta lies in comfort in a room filled with pillows, jacana gulps and enters the room, shutting the door behind him and turning on the lights)
Frento-“for so long we’ve served a false king, now he will meet the rightful prince”
(Jacana moves slowly towards vegeta with anxiety, he ponders for a moment of the outcome and then shrugs vegeta’s shoulder, vegeta doesn’t wake)
Jacana-“um………vegeta……….it’s time to get up now………uh (unsure what to say) daddy……..wants a word with you”
(Vegeta starts to awaken, he shakes his head rubs his eyes and holds his side because of the electric shock he experienced earlier, he begins to rise to his feet Jacana does the same, jacana edges away from him and turns away from him ashamed)
Vegeta-(trying to adjust to the light) “father, is that you, I heard your voice but I can’t quite see you, where are you”
Jacana-(hesitant) “I’m………right here vegeta, there are……..so……many things we must talk about”
Vegeta-(looking at the turned away figure) “your hair is different, and your voice has changed, you are not my father, who are you”
Jacana-“is that really important”
Vegeta-“Turn and face me coward, who are you” (jacana turns around, raises his head and looks at vegeta, vegeta looks stunned, he walks over angrily and grabs jacana by the collar) “YOU, I SHOULD HAVE KNOWN”
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Post by gokuromario on Feb 26, 2005 9:31:47 GMT -5
Jacana-“you…….know who I am”
Vegeta-“I could never forget your miserable face, Jacana, son of the great Pacoima, elite ranked GENERAL of the saijan army, the one who sent me to Freiza’s BOOTCAMP when I was a child ”
Jacana-(trying to get vegeta to loosen his grip) “my father…….was a general”
Vegeta-(throws jacana to the ground) “I should blast you right now you snivelling coward, how dare you impersonate my father”
Jacana-(pleads with him) “wait vegeta, let me explain……..well actually I can’t explain………tell me……..how did you figure out my identity”
Vegeta-“when I was a small boy my father went to a saijan nursery to view the newborn saijans, he brought me along with him, he asked me to peer through the glass window that stood between us and the nursery and what did I see, YOUR MISRABLE FACE, Jacana, I remember my father saying that it’s so funny, how the son of the great Pacoima could look so similar to it’s planets king, for weeks my royal servants teased me about this newborn………I remember how they used to say”
“Vegeta, you and this newborn should change places, Vegeta, maybe your father will pick him to be king instead, vegeta, why not trade places it might be fun, a real prince and the pauper story, and how I hated these gestures”
Jacana-“so is that how it was clear to you, that I impersonated your father”
Vegeta-“actually for a while I never wished to believe it, when you were finally gone I slept easy, but night after night I would go to bed thinking about you, thinking that someday if you were grown up enough and if fate would have it, look like my father then you would be king instead of me, childish nightmares of jealousy really, peh but what a surprise, you do look like my father and you did became king, but there’s one major detail” (pauses)
“YOU IMPERSONATED MY FATHER, BROUGHT ME HERE, MADE ME BELIEVE HE WAS ALIVE AND STOLE HIS CROWN, and to think, you were the son of a general, what honour”
Jacana-“it’s not like that vegeta, you must understand, I had no intentions of fooling you”
Vegeta-“well you certainly did a good job of that didn’t you”
Jacana-“for your information I never met my father and I certainly didn’t know he was some general who took you away from yours and for that I’m truly sorry”
Vegeta-“save your breath, now tell me what’s going on because I’m a little tense at the moment and wouldn’t mind frying somebody right about now”
Jacana-“alright, I’ll tell you”
(Jacana spends time with Vegeta explaining to him some of the things he needs to know, he explains the origin of master turnip and some parts of his plans but doesn’t know all, vegeta listens with a heavy heart, a tear starts forming around his eye, jacana stops)
Jacana-“what’s wrong”
Vegeta-“I was just thinking, how after all these years I finally thought my father had returned and now it turns out I was right about him being gone, you son of a female dog, in fact scratch that, I’d like to confront the son of a female dog that did this to me”
Jacana-“well it seems you won’t have to wait much longer, your family and friends are awaiting your presence but I’m afraid our survival may be at stake pretty soon”
(Outside in the hall, Frento receives a distress call)
Frento-“excuse me, I must see to this” (Frento walks off into the distance)
Goku-“I wonder what could be taking them so long”
Trunks-“I heard my dads voice, he sounded pretty upset”
Goten-“well how would you feel if someone told you that what you thought about your father was a lie”
(The five warriors stand together waiting for vegeta to emerge, as they wait videl gives gohan a kiss, goten paces the floors with Charlie, goku lies back and trunks tries to do some calculations in his head)
END OF PART 2
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Post by gokuromario on Feb 26, 2005 9:32:06 GMT -5
PART 3 – Death of a soldier
(Frento enters through a pair of doors, pulls out a transmitting watch from his pocket and flips the front latch open revealing Hades face upon a screen)
Frento-“Hades, what is the meaning of this” (Hades stays still looking blankly at the screen) “Hades” (still no answer, suddenly laughter is heard, the screen begins to fuzz a little bit, a dark shadowed man steps out from behind Hades)
Turnip-“Hello old friend”
Frento-“what, are you the………”
Turnip-“yes I am the one they call turnip, but that name is so………unoriginal, please call me DEATH” (suddenly upon the screen, Hades head begins to grow, Hades screams as his skull begins to crack and explode)
Frento-“what have you done”
Turnip-“he was of no more use to me, but this communication device slash tracker seems to come in handy”
Frento-“oh no, don’t tell me”
Turnip-“surrender or I shall destroy what’s left of your organisation the choice is yours, goodbye”
(The screen goes blank, Frento smashes the watch thinking it will do some good, he stands there defeated, and Frento grits his teeth and runs through the doors back towards goku and the others)
Frento-“I’m afraid I have some bad news, it seems our enemy has discovered where we are hiding”
Goku-“no way”
Frento-“what’s worse is that Hades is now gone” (goku and gohan gasp at the same time, the doors to vegeta’s quarters open and vegeta steps out) “vegeta, your awake”
Vegeta-“did I hear you right in saying that Hades is dead”
Frento-“yes”
Vegeta-(pauses, Jacana steps out) “that’s terrible news but lets focus on one thing and one thing only”
Trunks-“dad”
Vegeta-“and that’s how we shall defeat this beast”
Frento-“in time I may be able to develop a plan, but time is not on our side”
Vegeta-“then we shall make time” (looks to kakarot, then to the ceiling) “for time is of the essence”
END OF PART 3
END OF EPISODE 11
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Post by gokuromario on Feb 26, 2005 9:34:24 GMT -5
and so episode 11 is written.
mostly when i write these things i dont bother editing them, well in some ways i do but i prefer to leave them the way i write them.
if anyone has any comments about this episode you can reply as often as you like.
anyone wishing to know some of the secrets i have in store, then just contact me, i'm always open.
so which part did you like best, i like the way i've explained some of the character origins, i have more in mind but maybe not as long.
episode 12 should be up in the next week so enjoy SAIJAN REUNION BY GOKUROMARIO
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Post by TheDarkPrince on Feb 26, 2005 16:46:28 GMT -5
Good work. I can smell a major battle coming.
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Post by gokuromario on Feb 26, 2005 18:52:57 GMT -5
yep there probably will be, i'm just making it up as i go along.
i had different plans for this earlier on in developement but i've kinda changed them over the period of time
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Post by TheDarkPrince on Feb 27, 2005 5:56:28 GMT -5
Yeah. I'm guessing you intended it to be the original King Vegeta, given the argument we had over how he survived. (That was in episode 2 if you don't remember).
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Post by gokuromario on Feb 27, 2005 6:59:21 GMT -5
actually i always inteded it to be a fake king vegeta, just a really good actor.
i guess you liked the way i've presented him though right, the son of the general who was forced to take vegeta from the kings side to his saijan bootcamp.
i thought that was a nice touch, and the whole plaguing jealousy factor vegeta has for jacana i think adds a little more story to it
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Post by TheDarkPrince on Feb 27, 2005 7:02:30 GMT -5
Yeah that was a good idea. I liked Vegeta's screaming session. ;D
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Post by gokuromario on Feb 27, 2005 7:03:31 GMT -5
screaming session, what do you mean
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Post by TheDarkPrince on Feb 27, 2005 8:55:53 GMT -5
When he was going mental at Jacana.
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Post by gokuromario on Feb 27, 2005 12:53:07 GMT -5
oh yeah.
well how would you feel if you found out your dad was dead, he came back, took you millions of miles into space and then after a big battle found out he was a fake and nearly cost you your life
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Post by TheDarkPrince on Feb 27, 2005 13:18:27 GMT -5
Yeah. That's why I liked it. I love seeing people get what they deserve. ;D
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