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Post by ~*Hieislove*~ on Mar 19, 2005 22:20:10 GMT -5
Once or twice? Dude no you dont dbzlivemovie.proboards18.com/index.cgi?action=usersrecentposts&user=jstarbobRead down the line, theres more then one or two And I dont say everyone is good, I only say the ones that are good , good! And I did say yours was good geez, I just thought, from your past stories it can be better. Geez you should be happy I dont think its not crap. Like I said before if you cant take a suggestion, then dont ask for one, they are some people who actually go into detail for you! Its better then saying "Good." Geez, I give you a suggestion, be thankful, not bit*hy And my suggestion was pretty good, just deal with it and make your story better and stop whining .
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jstarbob
Super Saiyan 2
Forever has to end sometime...
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Post by jstarbob on Mar 19, 2005 22:32:28 GMT -5
alright please delete your posts when we started arguing and I am going to delete mine....
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Post by ~*Hieislove*~ on Mar 19, 2005 22:37:46 GMT -5
No reason to delete the post, we wasnt fighting, I was giving my suggestion and you got alittle worked up. Its all fixed now
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Post by Trunksangel79 on Mar 19, 2005 22:41:07 GMT -5
It's good.
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jstarbob
Super Saiyan 2
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Post by jstarbob on Mar 19, 2005 22:49:28 GMT -5
thanx I am glad you enjoyed it lol
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Majunks
Super Saiyan 2
Shut up or I Turn you into CHOCOLATE!
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Post by Majunks on Mar 21, 2005 11:22:40 GMT -5
Hiei, you gotta stop goin off on people like that. let the man have his fan fic, we don't complain about yours. JB: Wait, I figured that hiei would be pullin the strings around there. But that is interesting. I'm glad we finally have Kurama vs. Hiei. I haven't read the next chapter and it probably explains it but: Does Kurama finally get to go Yoko again? And Kuwabara still has his dimesion sword right? That's pretty cool.
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Post by ~*Hieislove*~ on Mar 21, 2005 11:26:31 GMT -5
Hiei, you gotta stop goin off on people like that. let the man have his fan fic, we don't complain about yours. Dont call me Hiei, its Hieislove, I hate when people call me Hiei , I'm not Hiei , I'm his love. I'm not going off, I'm giving him suggestions, its better then just saying "oh good" I would like someone to givve me suggestion then just "Good chapter" Thats becuz you dont read my story
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Majunks
Super Saiyan 2
Shut up or I Turn you into CHOCOLATE!
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Post by Majunks on Mar 21, 2005 11:36:32 GMT -5
Dont call me Hiei, its Hieislove, I hate when people call me Hiei , I'm not Hiei , I'm his love. I'm not going off, I'm giving him suggestions, its better then just saying "oh good" I would like someone to givve me suggestion then just "Good chapter" That's aside from the point... and it's a good thing that you give suggestions but the way you say things makes it sound like your trying to control the story. I know you aren't and I'm assuming that JB does to but still... Point of Rant: Try to be a little less dominant (That means put the whip away.) Thats becuz you dont read my story
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Post by ~*Hieislove*~ on Mar 21, 2005 11:40:07 GMT -5
I'm not trying to control the story, I just dont like it when people change the character, but whatever, I dont care anymore.
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jstarbob
Super Saiyan 2
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Post by jstarbob on Mar 21, 2005 19:13:13 GMT -5
Thanx Majunks! There will be new additions (characters) to the story who may take the role of Kuwabara and Hiei (not all the time). Hiei will have his special part in the story and every once in awhile we will switch over to what Kuwabara is doing on his own personal case which I have not started yet. And please explain to me what the dimension sword is because I am not exactly sure what it is... =/ Oh and about Yoko... you will just have to wait and see... ;D
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Post by ~*Hieislove*~ on Mar 21, 2005 19:16:35 GMT -5
Yoko is spelled Youko but its interseting. I look forward
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Super Saiyan 2
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Post by jstarbob on Mar 21, 2005 19:20:36 GMT -5
lol k sorry bout that ;D
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