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Post by Oniwari on Mar 20, 2005 13:07:03 GMT -5
Long ago, there were ancient scriptures written by the gods that contained ultimate knowledge of the universe. There have been many secrets written upon them. One who posseses the knowledge of these scriptures gains great power. Now, I believe the fate of the universe rests in the hands of great heroes, but one will save it all.- Emperor Krillin
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Post by ~*Hieislove*~ on Mar 20, 2005 14:06:23 GMT -5
World's shortest...thing.
Its seems interseting but could use ALOT of work and more effort.
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Post by Oniwari on Mar 20, 2005 21:07:17 GMT -5
INTRODUCTION! Well, yeah, but I had to turn it off for something. I was busy. The story will be way longer!
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Post by Trunksangel79 on Mar 20, 2005 21:16:46 GMT -5
I agree it does seem interesting.
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Post by Oniwari on Mar 21, 2005 21:30:35 GMT -5
Chapter 1- Goku, the Mortal God from The Mountain
Goku is one of the gods believed to be able to enter Earth from the mountain sanctuary of the Ozarru in a Chinese Mountain. His mortal form preserves power in the mortal world by placing a body in a giant rock. His god form watches over Earth in the Other World.
He is the strongest warrior that is skilled in the art of ki manipulation, it is said. Humans can manipulate their inner spirit to fire energy blasts, fly, and achieve great strength. In fact, all living things that can move can manipulate ki, but they need training from great warriors.
Earth is ripe with nearly every possibility you can imagine. The journey of great oppurtunity, however, begins today.
The Shaolin Monk Fighting Temple of Turtle Master Roshi.....
Within the beautiful temple of Master Roshi, several men and women were training to be great fighters, all trained by Master Roshi. Roshi is a short man, about 4'3 high, he has a long, white beard down to his chest, he is bald, and he usually wears sunglasses(This is set in the old days, but a fedual Master Roshi without sunglasses is no Roshi at all.)
Most of the warriors that completed their training went to enlist in the Satana Shogunate. Led by Hercule Satan of Eastern China, the warriors are fighting in a war against Vegeta, a powerful ki-manipulating warrior. However, the Satan Shogunate was in greater battles. There was once a terrible warrior spawned from the Guardian of the Planet, Kami.
He was Piccolo(The one from DBZ), who wanted to bring down the world in apocalypse. He was leading an army of great warriors. The temple Roshi lives in was attacked by Piccolo's armies, but Mutaito stopped them with the help of his remaining students.
Piccolo was trapped in a jar for years and sent to the bottom of the Atlantic Ocean. Hercule took command of his native army and he wanted to ensure peace on the Earth. He is half American and has a weird afro.
All that aside, Sanzo, a blue-hairred brunette priestess in a blue kimono, was studying a scripture she attained from a forest, on her pilgrimage to get supplies for the temple. Gohan, a boy with a blue fighting gi, black hair down to his shoulder blades, a white fighting belt, a golden band around his forehead, black shoes, and a fighting pole, was wondering what Sanzo was doing.
Sanzo is the single mother of Gohan. Gohan cares about her and would trade his soul to keep her eternally safe. Gohan walked over to Sanzo and asked, "Hey, mom? Watcha doing?" Sanzo replied, "Gohan, I'm trying to work on this. I'm sorry, but from what this scroll says, there is information we can use. Vital information."
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Post by Oniwari on Mar 23, 2005 16:10:39 GMT -5
How do you think it is, sofar?
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Post by Oniwari on Mar 24, 2005 8:49:38 GMT -5
Well, c'mon. Tell me what you think about it.
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Post by ~*Hieislove*~ on Mar 24, 2005 13:36:35 GMT -5
You cant double post like that. Only if your short is too long to fit the rest.
Well the first chapter is pretty good, keep working at it.
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Post by Oniwari on Mar 24, 2005 19:23:26 GMT -5
The Ancient Monkey God Sanctuary...
Deep within this Shaolin Temple in the high mountains of West China, there were seven statues of dragons holding starred balls in front of a giant ball with inscriptions on it. The ball's inscription implied, "Goku, Monkey Warrior God of Ancient Earth, will arise when requested."
Monks were training for battle in his name. Sanzo, Gohan, and Master Roshi were coming to the fortress on a horse-drawn wagon, hoping to awaken Goku. Sanzo asked, "Are you sure this scripture we found is true, Master?"
Master Roshi replied, "Sanzo, Goku is the greatest warrior in the heavens. He will protect us from any evil. Don't worry, kid."
"Why didn't he come to us, when Piccolo was attacking?" "Mutaito wouldn't allow it. The old coot thought that we could've handled it ourselves."
Gohan and Sanzo smiled, at Roshi's statement. The wagon stopped at a long stairway that would eventually lead to the huge, beautiful temple. There were several monks within the sanctuary, as Gohan looked up. He commented, "It's amazing. Look at it, mom!"
Sanzo and Roshi looked up, but Sanzo had thoughts of her own. She was thinking, 'I wonder what Goku looks like! I hope he's as cute as I heard he was!'
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Post by Oniwari on Mar 31, 2005 20:40:07 GMT -5
Sanzo, Roshi, and Gohan were walking into the temple, as the three passed by a gardener. The gardener stopped and bowed, "Greetings, Master Roshi."
Roshi asked, "How's it going, Iroh?" Iroh, the old, withered gardener responded, kindly, "It is fine, old friend. What have you come here for? To pay respects to King Goku?" "We've come to summon him to get the rest of the Kai Scriptures and keep them safe from Lord Vegeta. Vegeta is sure to be looking for them and will try to use them to make wishes."
"Do you know the incantation, Roshi?"
Roshi responded, kindly, "Yes, Iroh. Are we allowed consent to go in the temple?"
"Yes, Master Roshi."
Sanzo, Gohan, and Roshi bowed to Iroh, as they walked in. Sanzo asked, "Are you sure this will work, master?" "Oh, of course, Sanzo. I have studied many mystical arts, in my training with Master Mutaito. However, Goku is a god. I'm not sure if he will come to help us."
Roshi, Sanzo, and Gohan walked in, but nothing could prepare them for what they saw next. There was a stone the size of a man with strange inscriptions on it. The three warrior's jaws gaped, as they beheld the sight. Sanzo exclaimed, "That is the God Key Stone. It is an entryway for Goku and other gods to Earth."
Gohan asked, "So, we ready?" Roshi nodded his head and he poured mystical powder onto the floor in the form of a transferrence circle. Then, Gohan laid a fish in the center of it. Gohan thought, 'If fish is supposed to summon Goku, then, I've seen everything.'
Roshi, Sanzo, and Gohan started chanting, as the circle started to flash. Soon, energy started lighting up the inscriptions and it caused the Earth Key Stone to start cracking. Electricity flew from it and soon, a being of flashing light appeared. The light stopped shining and soon, it revealed a being with a tiger pelt around his waist, blue pants, black fighting shoes, a blue shirt with a symbol in the middle that said, 'Monkey God', a tail sticking through the pants, a circlet on the forehead, a fighting stick on the back, silver guantlets, a monk hat over the fighting pole, and he had unruly hair and blue eyes.
Sanzo thought, 'Whoa.... It's really him... Goku...'
The being stood nearly 5'9 tall and he had a kind, trusting look in his eyes. He asked, "You rang?"
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Post by ss4axel on Apr 3, 2005 9:45:31 GMT -5
pretty interesting...keep writing..lol
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Post by Oniwari on Apr 3, 2005 20:55:12 GMT -5
Vegeta's Palace... Lord Vegeta is pure evil. He is son of a warrior king that annihlated kingdoms with his armies. It seems as if though Vegeta's mastery in ki training could match even the gods' own might. The king has built an empire of evil. No one knows why he would try to conquer the world for evil, but one thing is for sure- he has to be annihlated. Lord Vegeta's palace was a huge one within the mountains and at the foot of one mountain was his empire, a city surrounded by a huge stone wall. Hundreds of powerful soldiers stood by the ready, protecting the area. Lord Vegeta's castle could only be reached by walking up a long stairway that had several guards. Within the beautiful halls of the castle that were decorated with stained-glass windows, a red carpet leading to the throne, gargoyles on Corinthian-style pillars, there sat King Vegeta, a man with slicked-back, pitch black hair, a red cape, golden shoulder armor, a sword on his back, chest armor connected to his shoulder armor, blue pants, white boots, and white gloves, on a throne of great power.
Vegeta had icy brown eyes that said one thing to describe him- total badass. He has two powerful children: Trunks and Bulma, who are out to help Vegeta fight the war against the other continents. King Vegeta was simply relaxing, for he would need to save it to destroy an enemy army. King Vegeta is dishonorable in his fighting tactics and will only be honorable towards his clan. Soon, a priest walked in and bowed before him. The priest had red robes on and a black skull cap. He greeted Vegeta, saying, "My lord, we have news from over in China." "Yes, priest? Come about!"
"We have news that the Monkey God, Goku, has been summoned by three monk warriors from West China. One of those monks is Master Roshi, the fighting champion of the world, next to Hercule, the Satan Shogunate leader." "What? Please. What reason would anybody have for summoning Goku?" "To look for the Universal Scriptures, spell books that can allow one to access powers of the gods. Roshi obviously wants to protect them." "Old fool. Even if Goku is here, I will use the scriptures' powers against him." "Yeah, well, you might wanna be careful. Haven't you paid attention to what your father taught you about Goku?" "I can't forget anything my father taught me... heh. We cannot take chances. I want to see Goku and his friends dead."
The Temple of Goku... The light faded and soon, Goku looked down and yelled, "Fish! Awesome!"
Goku picked the fish up and started to eat it like crazy. Soon, Roshi patted him on the back to stop him. Goku asked, "Master Roshi...?" Master Roshi greeted, "Hello, Goku. It's flattering you know me..."
"Well, of course! I'm a god! We see it all."
"Oh, of course!(CURSES!! I'm such an idiot!)"
"Hey, it's okay. I understand. It's your first time seeing a god in person!"
Sanzo greeted, "Hello, Goku! You probably know who I am!" "Yeah! You're Sanzo and you, little boy, must be Gohan!' Gohan asked, "Hey! Who are you... Sorry. I don't like being called little."
"I've seen you training, Gohan. You're really good at fighting, but you still have plenty to learn."
"Are you kidding? When I complete my training, I'm gonna fight Vegeta and win!"
"Well, that's a good goal to achieve. Maybe I can help you with that!"
"Alright, Goku. You know why I want you. It seems that bastard, Vegeta, and his croanies are trying to take over Earth. We have one of the scriptures, but I am sure you read all of them." "Oh, of course."
"We also need you alot to defeat Vegeta. Please, Goku, I'm beggin' ya!"
"Of course, I'll help you."
"Good. Now, Sanzo and Gohan will be there to help you. You have to look for the seven scriptures, which might take a year, but with your godlike charms, I bet you can do better than I ever could at finding them!"
"Yeah, but it will take a while to look for them! It's not magic, you see!... Well, okay, it is. Still, that's not what I mean." "Now, Sanzo, Gohan, I want you and Goku to look out for each other, okay?"
Gohan jumped up and laughed, "Ye-heah!"
Sanzo thought, 'Wow. Goku's way better looking than I thought! He's cute!'
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Post by Oniwari on Apr 6, 2005 16:28:21 GMT -5
One of Vegeta's navy ships...
Vegeta's son, the prince, was not what one would expect. Trunks is more peaceful than one could ever know. He wants peace, but fights to not betray his father. Trunks has blue eyes and silver hair, which goes with his attitude: outworldly badass, but still a peaceful warrior.
Trunks wears a black shirt underneath a purple robe, gray pants, brown boots, a blue scarf, and he has a sword sheethed on his back. Trunks has strength in ki manifestation that nearly match his father's own. Trunks' sister, Bulla, has a peaceful look at life, but is also a powerful warrior.
Bulla has blue hair that resembles Sanzo's, in a weird way and she wears a yellow and red kimono, on occassion, but in battle, she wears a blue miniskirt, white chest armor with two golden straps around the shoulders, white shoes, a sword sheethed on her back, and a blue, long-sleeved shirt beneath the armor.
Trunks stood atop the crow's nest of the ship, as he looked down at the deck, watching over for any intruders. The navy ship was a gigantic one made of metal and it had four masts and seven cannons on each side of the ship. Trunks likes going out to sea, but usually wants to settle in a single place, at times. As he looked onward towards the big, blue ocean, his train of thought was interrupted by a yell from a lower-rank soldier. The man yelled, "Prince Trunks! News have arrived from the palace!"
Trunks floated down and asked, "What would the news be, sir?" The man replied, "We have learned that the 'Monkey God', Goku, is looking for the seven scriptures, the Dragon Texts of Earth." "My father will be defeated, if Goku gets those texts. I must take them, so, we can impose our dominance on the globe."
"Sir, we don't know where the texts are. We can't go chasing them without clues as to where they could be!"
"Oh, we'll learn. We just have to catch up on our history. Bulla! Come out!" Bulla ran out and asked, "Yes, brother?"
Trunks exclaimed, "We're going to chart a course for the Shaolin temples. That's where Goku was summoned." Bulla asked, "What? Goku is only a myth!?"
"Those who consider myths trifles are fools."
"Ehhh.... Sorry, Trunks. I guess I got a little carried away!" "It's alright. Helmsman! Take us to Shaolin!"
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Post by Oniwari on Apr 8, 2005 20:44:59 GMT -5
Chapter 2- Goku's Search Begins
Goku, Gohan, and Sanzo were leaving the Shaolin Temple, as Goku's eyes wandered around the landscape. He saw a dragon pathway weaved around a mountain, as there was a head with two hands holding a giant ball with four stars. Goku also looked at the large forests and deep crevaces around the temple mountains. Goku said to himself, "God... This place is beautiful..."
Sanzo looked at Goku's smiling face and asked, "So, you think we should get going, Goku?"
"Sure. It's just a great place. We shouldn't deviate from our quest.... NIMBUS!!!!!!!!"
Out of nowhere, a cloud flew down in front of the three. Goku laughed, "This is the Nimbus Cloud, guys. Whenever I'm tired and I wanna sit down, I use this. Well, come."
Goku took Sanzo and Gohan's hands and the three got on the cloud, as the cloud took the three of into the sky. Gohan thought, 'Wow. A guy as nice as him... I bet he's a great god in his world...'
Sanzo asked, "Where do we start, Goku?" "My senses will bring us closer to the seven scriptures, as we travel, so, we can find them faster. However, this war is going to be an important quest, as well."
Gohan laughed, "HAHA! Alright!"
Goku smiled at the boy's enthusiasm in the war, as he thought, 'I think I like this kid. I think I'm also gonna like Sanzo. Sheesh. She's hot.'
Sanzo thought to herself, 'Man. Goku's cute. He's also a really nice guy! A great one, in fact!'
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Post by Oniwari on Apr 11, 2005 20:45:29 GMT -5
Chapter 3- The Assault on Shaolin: Uub vs. Trunks
Trunks' ship was arriving in Shaolin, where he would gather information from the monks about Goku. However, he would have to force it from them, because Shaolin had several fighting monk forces, led by Emperor Krillin and General Tienshinhan, who are two powerful warriors. Tien resented the evils of his old master, Tsurru, the Crane Hermit, and soon, Tien came out alive in a mortal fighting battle.
Within the training halls of the Shaolin temples, Tien was helping new students become greater warriors. Tien had three eyes, not one, which increased his power, so, he could see into the future. Tien had green pants, a red belt, black boots, golden prayer beads, a black gi, and a white, long-sleeved shirt under the gi. Several warriors were performing punching and kicking formations, while Tien and several other Shaolin monks watched.
Tien watched, as the warriors strived to become greater and greater. One student, Uub, who had dark skin, a black mohawk, a blue gi, dark blue pants, black boots, a white belt, yellow wristbands, and blue eyes, was trying to perform a special attack. Uub threw out his right index finger in a gun-style position, then, he yelled, "DODOMPA!!!!!"
A long, invisible energy blast fired and broke through a stone wall. Tien exclaimed, "Very good, Uub. You have become better and better with the art of ki manipulation, almost to the point where it surpasses my own power. Still, you need to be more relaxed in battle." "Huh?"
"Uub, you're always afraid of something happening to you. You're easily insulted and will get incredibly mad. You must learn to relax. With all the power you have, it doesn't seem to matter what people think of you."
"Thanks. I'll try to keep that in thought, Sensei Tien." Soon, a Shaolin monk ran in, yelling, "ONE OF VEGETA'S NAVY SHIPS HAS ARRIVED! COME TO ARMS, MEN!"
Tien yelled, "Stay here to protect the students, Uub. You have a responsibility to carry out."
"What? I wanna see some action!" "I'm sorry. You'll get your chance. Maybe today. Just get these fighters to safety." "Yes, Sensei." Uub herded everybody away from the dojo, but afar, on Trunks' navy ship, Trunks thought, 'Shaolin is a beautiful place. Too bad I might have to destroy it.' Bulla exclaimed, "I know what you're thinking. We're not going to..."
"Sorry, Bulla. However, I know that one of the Universal Scrolls is here. We have to get it for our father. We also need information on Goku!" "Well, don't kill anybody, okay? I hate killing?"
"Well, why don't you stop fighting this war and join their side?" "Trunks!" "Sorry, Bulla. We have a duty, understood?" ".... Hm. Yes, bro."
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