Dragonball Dimensions Ep.1

[ss4axel]

Hello, it took me awhile to get around to writing this but i finally made it. Please post any comments good or bad or any advise you might have for me. Well here it is, let me know what you think.

[ss4axel]

Dragonball Dimensions
Episode 1: The Z Warriors….saiyans??!!

Gohan stood atop the lookout staring down at the Earth thinking. Thinking of how it was just a few years ago when he defeated Cell and saved the Earth. He had grown a lot since the fight with Cell since he is the same height as his father now. Gohan stood there waiting for the rest of the Z Warriors to arrive. Dende called them all there for something urgent. Gohan suddenly heard something behind him and turned around to see it was the rest of the Z Warriors finally arriving.

Gohan: “Hey guys!”

Krillin: “Hey Gohan, do you know why Dende called us here?”

Gohan: “Nope, not a clue.” (Dende comes out) “Hey Dende, what’s up?”

Vegeta: “This better be good. This little reunion is interrupting my training.”

Dende: “Trust me Vegeta this is important. This is kind of hard to explain so I will try my best. You know how there are many different dimensions. Well there is an army going from dimension to dimension conquering each planet in the dimension and then moving on to the next. The reason why we should be worried is because our dimension is next.”

Krillin: “How do you know all this?”

Dende: “All the guardians of the planets of all the dimensions keep in contact with each other. Call it the Guardian Communications Network (he said with a smile).”

Vegeta: “So, we will just blow them up when they get here.”

Dende: “It’s not that simple Vegeta. They are unbelievably strong. Way stronger than us. Even if we were evenly matched with them we would still lose. They know all of our strengths and weaknesses.”

Tien: “How could they know all of that?”

Dende: “The Supreme Generals, the leaders of the army and the strongest, they know all about you because they are you. They are all of you but with one exception they used their Dragonballs to wish themselves to become Saiyans.”

Krillin: “What! How are we suppose to beat us or them or whatever when we I mean they are Saiyans?”

Gohan: “Easy, by playing at their own game. We gather the Dragonballs and wish the rest of you guys into Saiyans. That is if you guys don’t mind. We probably won’t be able to beat them otherwise.”

Dende: “That was exactly what I was thinking Gohan. I already had the liberty of having Mr. Popo gather the Dragonballs. He should be here any time now.”

(Mr. Popo flies onto the Lookout on his Carpet Dragonballs in tow)

Mr. Popo: “Here are the Dragonballs Dende.”

Dende: “Thank you Mr. Popo. Are we all agreed then?”

Krillin, Tien, Yamcha, Chaotzu: “Yea.”

Vegeta: “Wait a minute; I didn’t say it was ok. I’m the only full blooded Saiyan here. Having you guys as Saiyans is a disgrace to my people.”

Krillin: (smirking) “What’s a matter Vegeta, afraid I’ll become stronger than you?”

Vegeta: “Why you!” (Throws a ki blast at him and hits him in the rear)

(Krillin jumps up and smacking his rear trying to put the flames out)

Gohan: “Don’t worry Vegeta, just think that we aren’t the last of our race after all and we could always wish them back to normal after we defeat them or us, whichever it is.”

Dende: “Good, now that that’s settled lets call the Shenron. (Places Dragonballs on the floor) Shenron, I summon you. Grant my wishes.”

(The Dragonballs start to glow. The Sky turns dark as lightning and thunder envelope the sky above them. Lightning fires out of the Dragonballs and begins to take shape, the shape of Shenron the Eternal Dragon of Earth.)

Shenron: “You have gathered all seven Dragonballs. What is your Wish?”

Dende: “I wish that Krillin, Tien, Yamcha, and Chaotzu would be turned into Saiyans.”

Shenron: “That is a difficult wish, but I shall grant it.”

(Shenron’s eyes glow a bright red as a blinding light comes from the four Z Warriors. As the light decimates we see them standing there changed.)

Gohan: “Whoa!”

*The Z Warriors are now Saiyans. How much have they changed? Find out on the next episode of Dragonball Dimensions.*

[ss4axel]

Kinda short i know, but this was the first chapter and i didnt know how long it would be on here. let me know what you guys think. Oh and i will have pictures of what they look like on next chapter which should be up in a couple of days. hopefully. ;D

[Little Syxx]

Not bad. It was pretty short as you said but it was nice intro.

[Trunksangel79]

Not bad at all. Short,but good intro.

[SaiyanSpirit]

Not bad could of been longer like you said but not bad that was good in fact.

[ss4axel]

Thanks, the next chapter will be longer and hopefully will have pictures of what the 4 look like now.. ;D