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Post by Neo Vegeta on Jan 8, 2005 2:46:13 GMT -5
Let me know what you think about Dragonball Generations so far, and feel free to post any criticisms (constructive please) of what you think should be done...or, We can just discuss the story, feel free to ask ANYTHING about the story, and I will gladly resond ASAP. So, what do you think of Dragonball Generations so far? ;D As for me, personally, I think it still needs some work, and I will definitly go through few more revisions by the time it is finished, what you are reading now is the 3rd revision of the story...I just cant leave it alone, lol EDIT: I almost forgot to explain something...the disclaimer... Dragonball Generations does not take into account any of the actions and/or events that took place in Dragonball GT, the story takes place after the events of Dragonball Z, and is entened to be an ending to the saga.
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Post by BlackCoven on Jan 8, 2005 2:53:42 GMT -5
You know I liked it, I might have to reread it since it was so long ago when I last did read it. I am glad you are reposting it though...
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Post by Neo Vegeta on Jan 8, 2005 3:00:33 GMT -5
Thanks, and I actually intend to start on Volume 2 soon as well I also have a few other treats in store...including a personal commentary of myself talking about the story, Im not sure how i will get that onto the forum, or when, but i am going to do it sooner or later.
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Post by rjxsapri® on Jan 8, 2005 11:57:08 GMT -5
I hope you post it again. I didn't read all that you had before, but what I read was pretty cool.
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Post by Neo Vegeta on Jan 8, 2005 21:52:01 GMT -5
I dont know if you guys have seen, But Dragonball Generations Volume 1 is already posted up! The first half of Volume 1, that is...i dont wanna run outta material too fast ;D
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Post by ~*Hieislove*~ on Jan 8, 2005 22:12:50 GMT -5
I like it, i'll take my time to read it
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Post by Neo Vegeta on Jan 11, 2005 13:42:37 GMT -5
Feel free to ask me any questions you may have about the story, I will be glad to answer.
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Post by rjxsapri® on Jan 11, 2005 15:08:07 GMT -5
The part that got my attention to this story at first, is how you ignored DBGT. Hell, this fan-fic would have been so much better than GT to end the series...
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Post by DeLaRocha99 on Jan 12, 2005 16:32:13 GMT -5
Great and well-written fanfic. This may be one of the most enjoyable fanfics to exist in a long time....Well, at least until my story, 'The Alpha and Omega of Dragonball' is finished ;D
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Kweb8876
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Post by Kweb8876 on Jan 14, 2005 12:25:59 GMT -5
excellent!!! When's the next volume? ;D
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Post by Neo Vegeta on Jan 14, 2005 12:42:10 GMT -5
I couldnt really tell ya, because I havent written any more of the story. I still have other things to do than the main story, like, the backstory to all the events in Generations "The Blade of Power" it tells the story of the origin of Diablo and the Blade of Power, of course.
Not to worry though, I still have more things that I have written on the story that I will post every few days or so, as of write now, Dragonball Generations is about 100 written pages, and 50 Typed pages.
In the end it will be about 2-300 pages with the Back Story added.
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Post by Marccio on Jan 16, 2005 17:22:06 GMT -5
dear GOD! how I missed this story. Write! Write! Write! ;D
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Kweb8876
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Post by Kweb8876 on Jan 17, 2005 8:25:46 GMT -5
Another good section of story, can't wait for the next one.
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Post by Kweb8876 on Jan 18, 2005 8:54:21 GMT -5
excellent as usual. How often do you update the story? Just wondering?
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Post by Neo Vegeta on Jan 18, 2005 10:55:43 GMT -5
I have one chapter left, Im going to post it sometime this week.
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