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Post by ~*Hieislove*~ on Mar 2, 2005 18:40:41 GMT -5
Ahh, I know what you mean...I don't know if I've explained this before, but when I'm done writing the entire story, I am going to re-edit it, and add extra details...what you are reading now is just my first draft. Oh, even though I dont agree with that (I think you should give your best the first shot) , I still like these alot, keep going at it ;D
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Post by Majunks on Mar 3, 2005 10:14:24 GMT -5
Ahh, I know what you mean...I don't know if I've explained this before, but when I'm done writing the entire story, I am going to re-edit it, and add extra details...what you are reading now is just my first draft. Just as long as you keep developing the conflict between Diablo and Oneon it's cool. And you should mention why Diablo has turned against the saiyans. Side Note: Why was the infantry trying to hold them off until the women and children were off planet? I thought Saiyan women were warriors too.
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Post by Neo Vegeta on Mar 3, 2005 12:20:51 GMT -5
Just as long as you keep developing the conflict between Diablo and Oneon it's cool. And you should mention why Diablo has turned against the saiyans. Side Note: Why was the infantry trying to hold them off until the women and children were off planet? I thought Saiyan women were warriors too. That's true...they were thinking about repopulation, thats why...but dont get me wrong though, there WERE women fighting, there were just labeled as "Men"...infact, one of The Crusaders is a woman.
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Post by Trunksangel79 on Mar 3, 2005 18:44:52 GMT -5
I read the other part of Volume 2 ya put up there yesterday. It's getting really interesting.
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Post by TheDarkPrince on Mar 4, 2005 11:33:26 GMT -5
Yeah. Just one thing though. Why is Diablo listening to Aesh'ma Deva's price to bring back Vegeta? Aesh'ma Deva isn't in much of a position to bargain is he? Also where did you think up the name Aesh'ma Deva? I'm sure I've seen that name somewhere before...
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Post by Neo Vegeta on Mar 4, 2005 12:23:33 GMT -5
In several religions AeshMa' Deva *Pronounced Ashma dia* is the demon of Wrath, but in this case he is the leader of all the demons. You'll see why Diablo listens to the demon in the next chapter
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Post by Majunks on Mar 7, 2005 10:19:50 GMT -5
Interesting... this is enough to hold my attention. Call me when you update DBG, while I wait I'll obsess over AF, then Obsess over DBG again and switch between them because they're both so awsome. He I got an idea for a thread! (Runs off to write thread)
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Post by ~*Hieislove*~ on Mar 8, 2005 15:43:50 GMT -5
I'm starting to get confuse about Diablo , Neo can you explain the character of Diablo alittle bit for me, in general , I have no question in mind, just want to have an idea on Diablo's character
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Post by Neo Vegeta on Mar 8, 2005 15:49:30 GMT -5
Basically all everyone knows at the moment is that Diablo was originally a saiyan *By the way, Diablo was not his original name...noone knows what it was*and he turned against his race and transformed into a demon and eventually became their leader.
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Post by ~*Hieislove*~ on Mar 8, 2005 15:57:00 GMT -5
He seems like a good character are you ever going to go into details with him?
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Post by Neo Vegeta on Mar 8, 2005 16:05:49 GMT -5
He seems like a good character are you ever going to go into details with him? Believe it or not, Diablo actually is a good guy to begin with, and yeah, I'm going to go into some deep detail about him, because he is basically the second main character in the storyline.
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Post by ~*Hieislove*~ on Mar 8, 2005 16:09:01 GMT -5
Well I will look forward to reading it Way to make the readers actually read the chapters, make them want to know whats going to happen, make them wonder make them guess makes them read!
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Post by Majunks on Mar 10, 2005 9:42:00 GMT -5
Diablo is good? Intersting... Wait, I got a question. Will Vegeta be making an appearence as an SSJ4 anytime soon? I kinda miss that now... . You don't have to it's just afanboy wish ;D
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Post by TheDarkPrince on Mar 10, 2005 11:20:27 GMT -5
There may well be the appearance of an SSJ5 at some point in the story...
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Post by Majunks on Mar 11, 2005 9:44:25 GMT -5
An SSJ5? That gives me an idea. (Writes plot of Dragonball V) Okay then. That's a good thing! Who thought of SSJ5 in the first place?
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