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Post by rjxsapri® on Apr 7, 2005 13:11:51 GMT -5
no they can't force you to donate. that's really cool of them that they don't charge. but they do ask you to everytime you download a vid I actually get asked to donate like every time I load a new page...
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Post by rjxsapri® on Mar 27, 2005 2:26:05 GMT -5
yep...Blood Cold. Nice suggestion jstarbob...coming with names is sure a hard thing...
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Post by rjxsapri® on Jan 26, 2005 14:45:28 GMT -5
Awesome job, LittleSyxx. I just recommend you modify the title of the thread everytime you make an update so we can now you've added more to it... Just like you did with your last story... Anyways, this is great...I could pay you too... ;D
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Post by rjxsapri® on Jan 20, 2005 20:24:20 GMT -5
I liked the part of Vegeta watching talk shows, that was hilarious... ;D
EDIT: Well, after I read the whole thing...IT WAS AWESOME. Raditz almost choking with a pretzel was one of the funniest parts...but everything was awesome. ;D
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Post by rjxsapri® on Jan 19, 2005 23:06:19 GMT -5
haha
Imagine Brolly with Pikachu's voice saying: "ka ka". haha ;D
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Post by rjxsapri® on Jan 19, 2005 22:55:15 GMT -5
hahahaha. man, this is awesome. I also like what you did with Brolly. Funny stuff man... ;D
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Post by rjxsapri® on Jan 18, 2005 16:07:31 GMT -5
Man this is awesome!!!!!!!!! ;D
I see you have something with Raditz, you always like to make fun of him... ;D. Anyways, you come up with great funny ideas... ;D
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Post by rjxsapri® on Mar 20, 2005 15:42:33 GMT -5
Yeah...I've read about 1/4 of the first chapter too...it's hard for me to read from a screen...I'll finish the first chapter by tonight...
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Post by rjxsapri® on Mar 20, 2005 12:22:55 GMT -5
Yep...nice forward SnakeFire...it works as what it should work...a HOOK....
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Post by rjxsapri® on Feb 16, 2005 13:25:43 GMT -5
Geez, I had getting lost on this story...but I just needed a day off-work to catch up...so, here I am. It's still great...and I like Luna too... ...but do whatever you feel to her...whatever makes the story the best for you.
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Post by rjxsapri® on Jan 26, 2005 0:29:00 GMT -5
The story is awesome, it's just hard to read...but as I said, I recommend you to write it the way it suits you best and then just separate the paragraphs a little.
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Post by rjxsapri® on Jan 24, 2005 16:51:25 GMT -5
yep, and if you feel separating while you write messes up with your style, just write it the way you can and then just make some changes to it
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Post by rjxsapri® on Jan 24, 2005 15:29:06 GMT -5
Well, I thought I would never finish reading this, but I like it. Still, the separation thing would have helped me read it faster....
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Post by rjxsapri® on Jan 19, 2005 0:23:16 GMT -5
Geez, I don't know why I hadn't read this before. You write exactly the way I wish I could write. Like SockPerson said: "very lovely". I wish I could write like that, but I'm not that skilled... I love it, I love the way you write. Good Job, and keep it coming...
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Post by rjxsapri® on Jan 24, 2005 17:38:39 GMT -5
I was wondering now, if you would edit the third part of this story when I post it. If there's anything to edit, that is. (which is highly likely)
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