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Post by Tekk on Feb 28, 2005 11:17:07 GMT -5
Episode VIII: Cell Hell Holy Sock and Gyrashu lied in the cell for months, they barely ever moved in the dark rusted cell. They survived on the rainwater that leaked into the cell and fed of the fungus growing in the corner. ‘You think we’ll get outta here?’ whispered Gyrashu nearly dehydrated. Holy sock didn’t answer. Suddenly there were gunshots heard. ‘What the?’ said Holy Sock getting up. There was a sudden explosion then the door smashed open. A little red monster with a dog’s snout four long ears and six arms smashed into the wall. ‘Spika!’ shouted the monster. The monster ran out of the cell with two guards following him. ‘Catch the Stitchbite!’ shouted one of the guards, ‘catch him!’. After the Stitchbite and the two guards were out of sight Holy Sock and Gyrashu snuck out of the cell and made their way up the long factory. There was smoke everywhere. Everywhere they went there were machines making items out of molten lava. It was boiling, they had only travelled for 3 minutes but to them it seemed like hours. They eventually reached a door with a security panel on it. ‘We need the code’ said Holy Sock. On the other end a guard was about to open the door when burst of energy came out ‘What the…’ the door suddenly blew up instantly killing the guard and sending him into a wall. Holy Sock and Gyrashu ran into the main hall. Lord Dhraka’s Throne Room Admiral Duoff ran into the room, ‘Me Lord…the prisoners have escaped!’ said Duoff. ‘WHAT!!?’ shouted Dhraka, ‘you, B*STARD…I PUT YOU IN FULL RESPONSIBILITY FOR THE SECURITY ON THOSE PRISINORS AND NOW YOU WILL PAY!!!!!’. Lord Dhraka got up and walked towards Duoff. Duoff move slowly backwards. Lord Dhraka then put his hand on Duoff’s head. ‘N-no please Lor-ARRRRRRRGGGGGGGHHHHHH!!!’ screamed Duoff. Private Kenneth was about to open Lord Dhraka’s door when he heard a loud crushing sound. Moments later a pool of blood leak out from under the door. Kenneth turned round to see Holy Sock and Gyrashu escaping, ‘GET THEM!’ shouted Kenneth. Many guards ran after Holy Sock and Gyrashu while the bounty hunter looked on. ‘We have company’ said Holy Sock. Holy Sock and Gyrashu swiftly turned around only to see guards running at them. Gyrashu charged up his staff then shot out an energy beam which went through one guard and into another killing them both. Holy Sock got out his minigun and shot at some of the guards. A turret appeared from the roof. It was dome shaped with two laser cannons on each side with someone controlling it. The turret shot at Gyrashu who deflected the lasers by twirling his staff. Suddenly the bounty hunter jumped off the balcony into the main hall, he took out a laser rifle and shot at Gyrashu. Gyrashu deflected the bounty hunter’s laser which rebounded into the turret making it explode. The bounty hunter pressed a button on his leg. Dart guns came out of the side of his le and shot at Gyrashu, two darts missed Gyrashu deflected one but was hit in the neck by the last one. Suddenly plasma laser flew at Holy Sock; Holy Sock rolled under it. A guard with a plasma gun charged up and shot out another one. Holy Sock rolled to the left dodging it. The laser hit a guard behind him instantly vaporising the guard. Holy Sock took out his dagger and threw it straight into the plasma gun making it explode, vaporising the guard and two others near him. Gyrashu pulled out the dart when suddenly the bounty hunter punched him to the ground. The bounty hunter put is laser rifle in its socket and pressed a button on his wrist. Suddenly electricity flew out of his arm into Gyrashu. ‘ARRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHH!!!’ screamed Gyrashu in pain. Holy Sock knocked a guard to the ground with his thread boxing glove. He turned around to see Gyrashu being electrocuted. Holy Sock threw a dagger into the bounty hunter’s wrist, the electrical circuit malfunctioned rewinding the circuit making the bounty hunter electrocute himself. Holy Sock threw a dagger at the control panel next to the main entrance opening the door. The bounty hunter got up, pulled out his laser rifle and blasted Gyrashu in the back. Holy Sock turned round flew at the bounty hunter and smashed him in the face. The bounty hunter got up and threw a thermal detonator at Holy Sock. Holy Sock smashed back the detonator with a few threads. The detonator went right next to the bounty hunter’s head and making a gigantic explosion. Holy Sock grabbed Gyrashu and they both flew out while the entrance collapsed. ‘At least that’s over’ said Holy Sock. Suddenly five helicopter hunters flew out from behind the fortress towards them. ‘Sh*t’ shouted Holy Sock.
TO BE CONTINUED
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Post by Tekk on Feb 26, 2005 19:21:31 GMT -5
I did this on Word
Episode VII: More ‘Negotiations’
The bounty hunter walked through the hall way towards Lord Dhraka’s throne room. Suddenly General Starkryke came from the conference office. ‘Do you have clearance!?’ asked Starkryke. ‘I’m here to see Dhraka’ answered the bounty hunter. ‘It’s LORD Dhraka’ blurted Starkryke, ‘and I cannot allow you to enter you dimwit!’. The bounty hunter lifted up his gun and blasted Starkryke in the stomach sending him to the ground killing him. ‘Thank you’ said the bounty hunter. The bounty hunter looked at Private Kenneth who opened the doors with nervousness. The bounty hunter walked in and stood in front of Lord Dhraka who was clouded by darkness. ‘I have the bounties and I expect to be paid double!’ said the bounty hunter. ‘DOUBLE?’ shouted Dhraka, ‘Yes’ answered the bounty hunter. ‘Hmm, I like your style, a bout you work for me for a while and I’ll pay you quadruple’ said Dhraka. ‘As you wish’ answered the bounty hunter. The bounty hunter pressed the button on his wrist releasing Holy Sock and Gyrashu. ‘Now leave’ bellowed Dhraka. The bounty hunter walked out of the doors and towards the office. ‘Hey!’ shouted Admiral Duoff ‘that’s a restricted area!!’. The bounty hunter turned round and shot Duoff in the leg ‘SH*T!’ shouted the Duoff. ‘I could do worse!’ said the bounty hunter as he walked through the grey slide doors. Holy Sock and Gyrashu gained consciousness. ‘So’ said Dhraka ‘you think you’re smart?’. Lord Dhraka stood up, he was gigantic with red armour and a velvet cape coming down from his back. He had jewellery attached to his armour and a human skull. His face was pure bone with a glowing red coming from his eyes. ‘I said…DO YOU THINK YOU’RE SO SMART!’ he shouted. ‘I’m going to kill you!’ whispered Gyrashu. ‘What?’ said Dhraka, ‘I said…’ Gyrashu was smashed into the roof by Lord Dhraka, he then fell back into the ground again. ‘What about you?’ said Dhraka to Holy Sock. ‘Did you?’ asked Holy Sock. ‘Did I what!’ said Dhraka puzzled. ‘Did you destroy the Soki village in the 27th dimension with bandits?’ answered Holy Sock. ‘Ahhh, the banits…my good old friends, Yes I did!’ said Dhraka. ‘YOU B*STARD’ screamed Holy Sock pulling out the minigun. He fired at Dhraka. All the bullets bounced off his armour. Dhraka lifted up his arm, his hand glowed red and a wave of fire flew out hitting Holy Sock. ‘STARKRYKE!!!!!’ screamed Dhraka. Admiral Duoff limped through the door, ‘Sir’ he said ‘Starkryke is dead’. ‘What’ said Dharka in astonishment, ‘d*mn, take these two to the dungeon’. Two guards game in and dragged Gyrashu and Holy Sock away. They travelled into the deepest depths of the fortress. They arrived at a rusted door with Cell No. 4529103 inscribed on it. They open the door and threw them both in. The shut the door and inserted a key into the side. A security laser forcefield activated then the guards walked away leaving the two heroes to rot to death.
TO BE CONTINUED
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Post by Tekk on Feb 26, 2005 18:37:37 GMT -5
Ok, thanks
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Post by Tekk on Feb 26, 2005 18:26:59 GMT -5
My computer kinda half froze then I accidently pressed the POST button.
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Post by Tekk on Feb 26, 2005 18:05:14 GMT -5
I've modified it
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Post by Tekk on Feb 26, 2005 17:14:52 GMT -5
Episode VI: The Drouhaku Fortress
'Put you're...err...threads up!' shouted the figure. The figure had a dark orange armor. He wore a green shirt with dark orange armor plates. He had a thin, wrinkeld light brown cape on the left side of his shoulder. He wore a helmet with a small visor on it. His helmet was light orange with dark orange around the visor. He wore grey trousers with orange boots. 'What do you want?' asked Holy Sock. 'You' answered the man, 'I'm a Bounty Hunter getting the bounty for Lord Dhraka, he'd prefer you alive but if it pleases me I'll kill you...both!'. 'Not on my watch' shouted Holy Sock as he punched the bounty hunter to the floor. Suddenly bullets flew from behind Holy Sock, a green monster crossed between a crocdile and a human in a yellow suit was standing there. 'These bounties are mine so leave them be!' said the other bounty hunter. 'Basak, Hmm, If you wanna live take a hike' said the bounty hunter, with that he shot bulltes at Basak. Basak suddenly flew into the sky with rockt packs on his legs. He then shot some bullets down at the bounty hunter. The bounty hunter shifted and let a few bullets pelt into the ground. Suddenly one bullet hit into the bounty hunter's wrist, 'Arrrghhhh!' he shouted. Suddenly the sheild around Gyrashu disintergrated. Gyrashu stumbled upright. He pulled his staff from his back, 'Sock, let's finish them!' he grinned. Holy Sock shot loads of threads at Basak. 'Hey, what the-yahhhhhh!' screamed Basak as Holy Sock smashed Basak into the ground. Gyrashu suddenly teleported right behind the bounty hunter and kicked him in the neck. The bounty hunter turned round and shot at Gyrashu. Gyrashu twirled his staff deflecting the bullet. Basak got up then Holy Sock smashed him in the face sending him to the ground again. Gyrashu shot an energy wave out of his staff, the bounty hunter rolled to the left then shot Gyrashu in the stomach hurdling himoff the cliff, Gyrashu stuck his staff into the cliff soporting himself. The bounty hunter leaned over the cliff then pressed a button on his wrist which shot out electricity at Gyrashu creating an energy ball around him. Basak got up and took out a dagger from his leg pocket and threw it at Holy Sock. Holy Sock grabbed it and started to glow he then let go of the dagger and another one flew out from his body into Basak's chest. Basak then stumbled backwards of the cliff falling to his rocky grave. The bounty hunter pressed a button on his wrist making Gyrashu float up to him. The bounty hunter turned round, pressed a button on his wrist which shot electricity at Holy Sock. Holy Sock then was paralyzed and trapped in the ball of energy. The bounty hunter then walked towards the factory with the two energy balls following him
Later in Lord Dhraka's throne room A man burst through the doors walked towards Lord Dhraka and bowed. 'My Lord, the bounty hunter has got those two nuisences' said the man. 'Very good Captain Jejlo' said Dhraka, 'who was the bounty hunter?'. 'He gave no name' said the captain, 'shall I bring him in?'. 'Certainly' said Dhraka. 'Right away sir' answered the captain. Captain Jejlo walked back through the doors and turned to another man. 'Private Kenneth, let the bounty hunter in' said the captain. 'Right away' answered Kenneth. The doors of the Drouhaku Fortress opened and entered the notorious bounty hunter.
TO BE CONTINUED
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Post by Tekk on Feb 26, 2005 7:57:03 GMT -5
Episode V: Bounty Hunted
Gyrashu stared one of the wolves in the eye. One of the wolves moved closer. Suddenly bullets flew into the wolf's head making it explode sending the other wolves of the ledge. 'You OK?' shouted Holy Sock, 'I'm fine', replied Gyrashu, 'why did it blow up?'. Gyrashu looked closly to the ground, he saw a sparkle in the mud. Gyrashu picked up the strange object and read the writing on it: Mountain Wolf Model 62093B. 'It seems that these wolves were artificially made.' said Gyrashu. Holy Sock jumped on the ledge, 'Let me see' said Holy Sock. Suddenly the rock burst behind them and a wolf jumped at Gyrashu hitting him and sending him down the cliff. The wolf and Gyrashu hit another ledge near half way down the cliff. There was a tunnel behind them. The wolf started slashing at Gyrashu's body. Meanwhile Holy Sock was looking down to see if Gyrashu had survived the fall, 'Sh*t, sh*t, sh*t!' he shouted, 'GYRASHU!'.Holy Sock listened for an answer but only heard the chirps of nearby birds. Holy Sock turned around and started to climb back up the cliff wiping a tear in his eye. Gyrashu was sent to the floor with a massive tackle. He tried to getup when suddenly the wolf slashed him in the face, 'SH*T!' screamed Gyrashu. Gyrashu picked up a rock and threw it at the wolf. The wolf then jumped on gyrashu about to claw off his face when suddenly the wolf was shot of Gyrashu. Gyrashu tried to make out what shot the wolf when another bullet hit into the wolf's head killing it. 'Are you Gyrashu?' asked the strange figure. His voice sounded muffled yet gruff. 'I said are you Gyrashu!?'. 'Y-yes' said Gyrashu, 'I am'
Meanwhile on top of the cliff Holy Sock lifted himself up. He took many breaths. He then got up only to see a big factory with tonns of thick black smoke coming out of a gigantic funnel. Holy Sock started to move toward the factory, after about 43 minuites Holy Sock looked up. The factory seemed to be miles away. 'Don't move!' shouted a voice behingd him. Holy Sock turned around to see a man with a gun and Gyrashu paralyzed in a big energy shpere. 'You're Holy Sock right?'
TO BE CONTINUED
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Post by Tekk on Feb 20, 2005 18:04:17 GMT -5
Episode IV: A Living Death
'So where you going?' asked Holy Sock. 'What do you care...ya know what!?' said Gyrashu 'you should get your sorry *ss out of here...a-and, jeez a sock! Who the hell would think a SOCK, a-a Sock would talk, fight, excel the power of humanity...I-I just, my God!'. Gyrashu started to walk away from Holy Sock. Holy Sock moved forward, 'Don't folow me you freak!' shouted Gyrashu. 'Hay!' shouted Holy Sock, 'you said you were here to help me'. 'No I didn't!' answered Gyrashu. 'Yes you did you green pr*ck!' shouted Holy Sock, 'and why you so angry with m-'. Gyrashu smashed Holy Sock in the face. 'NEVER call me a pr*ck, NEVER!!!' said Gyrashu. 'Ok, sheesh' said Holy Sock. 'You, Drhaka those bandit b*stards are all the cause of my pain, I will die if I don't stop the Walking Death' said Gyrashu. 'Drhaka, bandits, walking death what are you do-' 'I'm TRYING TO STOP MY DEATH!!!!!!!' 'Yeh, but...' 'LOOK! What do you want' asked Gyrashu angrily. 'I want a home, a family, a life' said Holy Sock angrily. 'But don't you...' 'NO! They all died, killed by big black clothed pr*cks. They killed everyone, I'm the last one, that's why I climbed the mountain, to escape, to live!' Gyrashu stood there in disbelief. 'Hay' he said, 'why don't you come along!'
Somewhere in a mechanical fortress a master was chatting to his slave
'They have destroyed Model 245198 my lord' said General Starkryke. 'What?' bellowed the master. 'I said...', 'I KNOW WHAT YOU SIAD' shouted the master, 'have them killed!'. 'Yes Lord Drhaka' answered Starkryke. Starkryke walked down the hall through the doors dissapereing into darkness. 'Their heads are mine!' whispered Drhaka.
********************************************* Holy Sock and Gyrashu where far from the city. They were climbing asteep mountain when suddenly a growl was heard. 'What was that?' asked Holy Sock, 'I dunno' answered Gyrashu'but keep moving'. Suddenly a wolf ripped Gyrashu off the mountain onto a ledge. 'GYRASHU!' shouted Holy Sock. Gyrashu blew the wolf off the mountain with a beam of magic. Suddenly four more wolves jumped on the ledge. 'Sh*t' said Gyrashu.
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Post by Tekk on Feb 18, 2005 15:39:16 GMT -5
How?
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Post by Tekk on Feb 18, 2005 13:53:29 GMT -5
Thanks
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Post by Tekk on Feb 18, 2005 12:49:42 GMT -5
Everyone else has really long stories which make mine look really cr*ppy So I've tried EXTRA hard to make a long one please enjoy! Episode III: Soki PowersThe enregy started to vaporise away only leaving a blue energy ball with a figure inside it. Suddenly a metal hand came out of some rubble. Insert Coin smashed out and wires came out of his front. The energy ball dissapered and from the energy ball came Gyrashu. the wires flew at Gyrashu wrapping round him. Suddenly a series of bullets pelted into Insert Coin's head. 'What the f...' Insert Coin was cut off when a boxing glove made from thread smashed him in the head. Holy Sock stood there. 'I know how I've got these powers I felt a strnge warmth while sleeping, the Wizard...' (loud thunder heard into background) '...must of given me powers' said Holy Sock. FLASHBACK'Hmm' said the Wizard (loud thunder heard in background) 'I might be able to stop him! If I give this sock powers and send him to that dimension that sock may be able to kill him'. PRESENT'I'll kill you' mumbled Insert Coin. Insert Coin threw Gyrashu into the ground then another twelve arm came out and all turned into miniguns. 'HOLY SOCK!' shouted Holy Sock. Holy Sock dodged the bullets. The bullets went absolutely everywhere. 'Arrghhh!' shouted Holy Sock; A bullet went straight through him, 'that's thirty-five holes'. A beam of energy smashed into Insert Coin's back making him flinch. Suddenly Gyrashu flew down at Insert Coin and blasted him at close range making him smash into the floor. Holy Sock (since he has no legs) flew towards Gyrashu. Insert Coin jumped out while uppercutting Gyrashu into the air then Holy Sock smashed Insert Coin in the side. Insert Coin got back up, 'Heh, Heh, Heh' he laughed, 'you get the booby prize!' a pie hit Holy Sock in the face. 'A pie?' mumered Holy Sock, 'a stupid pie?'. 'Oh my God, you through a stupid pie ' Oh look at me I'm a coin machine I throw pies, ladi da dada!' mocked Holy Sock. Suddenly the pie glowed and blew up in a gigatic wave of energy. Gyrashu suddenly flew past Insert Coin, grabbing his arm and ripping his arm off. 'Noooooozzkrkkkkkkz...' screamed Insert Coin half malfunctioning. 'What's the matter?' said Gyrashu, 'COIN got yer touge?'. Insert Coin shot out a coin which went straight into Gashryu's body, 'Gahhhh!' shouted Gasryu while dropping to the ground. Holy Sock appeared from rubble. He went over to the minigun arm and stuck a thread into it. Holy Sock glowed briefly then his thread wen t back in. Suddenly a minigun came out from Holy Sock. 'What the...' said Insert Coin in disbelief. 'I've got copycat abilities!' answered Holy Sock. Holy Sock shot thousand of bullets into Insert Coin making him explode. He then moved over to Gyrashu and pulled out the coin from his body. Then he stuck many threads into him which healed Gyrashu. 'Where...where am I?' gasped Gyrashu. 'Alive' answered Holy Sock... Please post if you like or hate it. Should I continue (have plans) or do you think I shouldn't?
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Post by Tekk on Feb 18, 2005 11:32:51 GMT -5
Episode II: Gyrashu
The minigun was stuck at Holy Sock's face. It sarted to charge really slowly. Suddenly a gigantic light hit the slot machine making him fly backwards into a building. 'What the...' whispered Holy Sock in astonishment. Another beam of light flew into the biulding destroying it. A figure could be seen where the strange lights had come from. The figure floated towards Holy Sock. 'PLEASE, DON'T KILL ME!!!!' shouted Holy Sock. The figure's staff started to glow, 'N-No, p-p-p-lease d-don't k-kill me' Holy Sock was on the ground half crying. The figure shot a beam which went past Holy Sock and hit the coin machine which had come out of th rubble. 'My name is Gyrashu' said the figure. Gyrashu was a human with emerald platings all round his body with only his face and hands to be shown. A series of bullets fired from the coin machine pelting into Gyrashu. Suddenly Holy Sock turned angry. Hundreds of thhreads came from Holy Sock and wrapped round the coin machine. INSERT COIN could be read on the slot machines side, 'Insert Coin huh.' grinned Holy Sock. Holy Sock smashed Insert Coin into another building. Suddenly the area glowed blue and rays of energy wiped over the whole area covering it in electromatic energy. 'Holy sh*t!' shouted a nearby man flying over the blue city. Suddenly the city blew up with energy bursting out...
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Post by Tekk on Feb 18, 2005 11:17:56 GMT -5
I love the concept. ;D The dialogue was a little weak, and I didn't bother trying to read "Tryspirrosymemeninensinoal" the first time, let alone how ever many times it's repeated. It's greatest strength is that it's random funkyness. But ultimately it isn't clear what your trying to do here. Also, how many "holes" does the Holy Sock have? EDIT: And don't take my comments as any kind of discouragement. Holy Sock has exactly 34 holes through him.
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Post by Tekk on Feb 17, 2005 11:03:00 GMT -5
Thanks!
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Post by Tekk on Feb 16, 2005 15:57:19 GMT -5
(These may be short) Episode I: A Coin Convention
Deep in the Dahooi Mountains a sock born in a religious temple was climbing through the dangerous blizzards. The sock was named Holy Sock. He sought shelter in a nearby cave where he drifted off in a deep slumber. He awoke moments later due to a bright light in the cave. Holy Sock saw a man in the cave opening a portal. 'What are you doing' asked Holy Sock.The man jumped and turned around. 'I...err...I-I'm...um maykin' a...Tryspirrosymemeninensinoal Portal!' 'A Treewanpissomental-wa-wah!?' 'A Tryspirrosymemeninensinoal Portal!' 'Who are you' 'I'm THE WIZARD!!!!!!!' (loud thunder in backgroud) 'So Wizard...' (loud thunder in backgroud) 'WHAT!' 'Why are you making a trytretrenchshipal portal?' 'It'a a Tryspirrosymemeninensinoal Portal!!!' shouted the Wizard (loud thunder in backround), 'because I want to send one sorry soul in it!' 'Well I'm a...' 'GOOD' The Wizard grabbed Holy Sock and through him in the Tryspirrosymemeninensinoal Portal made by THE WIZARD!!!! (loud thunder in background). He swirled and swirled and swirled around the portal until he woke up next to a Slot Machine. 'Now what the (loud cars passing by) are you doing here you piece of (loud car horn is heard)?' The slot machine's hand (yes it has hands) turned into a plasmatic minigun. 'Gulp' gulped Holy Sock. TO BE CONTINUED
Now be honest tell me what you think.
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