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Post by Son Goshin on Jan 23, 2005 16:21:53 GMT -5
Last time on DragonBall AF, Goku and Vegeta Jr. had just perfected the Fusion dance. Unfortunately, with two small children fusing, they became too immature and full of themselves. Now the young Gogeta Jr. has blindly flown off to fight someone who he thinks is the strongest next to him. What will Gogeta find, and will he be able to stand up against this power?
"Gogeta!!!" yelled Pan. "Get back here! Gogeta!" "It's no use," said Roshi, "they're going to have to realize their error for themselves. They only have 30 minutes anyways. I guess I should've told them that before they flew off." "What?!" exclaimed Bra. "You bonehead! What if the Fusion were to wear off in the middle of the fight?" "Hmmmm," said Roshi, "I never considered that, but they should be all right!" "Better hope so," answered Pan. Soon Gogeta had flown overhead a giant army base. This was the place where Gogeta sensed the immense level of energy. "Here we go! Hmmmm, Red Ribbon HQ. I wonder what that is? Oh well, I'll knock out whoever gets in my way. Huh?" Just then a siren went off and soldiers started to surround Gogeta. "Stop right there! No outsiders allowed!" "Oh yea!" said Gogeta. "Eat this!" He then threw a giant ki blast straight at the guards and wiped them out. Gogeta then rushed threw enemy lines knocking out anyone that got in his way. Soon he came to the exact location of the power source. It just so happened it was inside Commander Red's office, and fortunately was unguarded. Gogeta broke down the door to see Commander Red seated in his chair, almost as if he were waiting for Gogeta to come. "I know there's a fighter in here, show him!" "Very well," replied Commander Red. "But be aware that the difference between your two powers are vast and you will be annihilated." "Heh," laughed Gogeta, "we'll see old man." A door from behind the Commander opened up. It was too dark to see anything except the silhouette of a small person. Suddenly, a radiant yellow light burst forth. And Gogeta could now clearly see the fighter he was so worked up about. "Wha- wha- what is this?" said Gogeta. “How can this be? I thought I was the only one with this sort of power! I can't stand up to this, not now! I'm outta here!" And then as fast as he could, Gogeta flew out of the Commander's office and flew all the way back to the island with the Commander's maniacal laughter ringing in his ears. "HAHAHAHAHA! I TOLD YOU, YOU HAD NO CHANCE, NO ONE CAN DEFEAT OUR SECRET WEAPON!"
* * * * "Oh," worried Pan, "where could he be, it's been over 30 minutes!" "Wait," yelled Bra, "I see them! Vegeta! What happened to you boys?" "I honestly can't tell you," said Vegeta. "I have almost no recollection of what happened." "I guess I also should've told you boys that you tend to forget what happens when your fused. the more you do it, the more you'll remember,” said Roshi. “Well," said Goku, "all I remember is a blinding light and someone was just standing there. The rest is just a blank." "Well," said Pan, "why don't you boys get something to eat and rest up, you'll need your strength when you start your hunt for the DragonBalls tomorrow. You mind if we spend the night here Roshi?" "What? Sure, you two ladies can sleep in my room, heh-heh!" "You really gross me out," said Bra and she slapped him in the face. "Ohhh," groaned Roshi, "I'm so lonely."
***** The next morning, the boys got up early, excited about their adventure that was about to start. "All right boys," said Roshi, "one last piece of advice: only use the Fusion dance as a last resort, you two are very young to be handling Fusion and I want you to only use it against your strongest opponents, understand?" "Yes, sir," they answered. "Oh, Goku," said Pan, "please be careful and come back in one piece. I'll miss you." "Ya don't need to worry, grandma, I’ll be fine," answered Goku. "Good luck, Vegeta!" said Bra. "Do well on your quest, and don't get yourself killed, OK?" "Don't worry, grandma," replied Vegeta, "I promise! Well, ya ready Goku?" "Ready as I'll ever be! Goodbye everybody! See you soon!" And with that the two young Saiyans flew into the morning sunrise off on their adventure. "Be safe, boys," whispered Pan to herself.
***** "Now Gold, explain to me how a child could do such a thing to the Red Ribbon Army!" thundered Red. "Well, uh, sir, my men were unprepared. We had just returned and were caught off guard!" “Well, you have one last chance to redeem yourself, or I'll have our secret weapon obliterate you. He tells me that the child that attacked us is also on a search for the DragonBalls. The one closest to them is on an island near the southwest. I want you to intercept them, and kill them!" "Understood sir!" replied General Gold. "I'll get my men ready now!" "Wait just a minute there," said Red. "You're not bringing your troops. You will be going alone. I want to see if you're actually strong enough to take down one child. If you can't, well, you know what will happen!" *gulp* “Uh, yes sir!" And Gold ran out of the office into his plane to intercept the boys. "Heh, such an idiot," said Commander Red. "I know he can't defeat this child, he's much too strong, but not strong enough to take down my weapon. I'll have him fight the child so I can see for myself what powers he does possess. And I can also get that blubbering fool out of here before he blunders anymore! HAHAHAHA!"
***** "Hey, what's the radar say, Vegeta?" asked Goku. "It says the closest DragonBall is 50 miles due east. It looks like it's on a small island, not like Roshi's though. Shouldn't be too tough to find it. Come on, I'll race you!" "OK," smiled Goku, "but I'm gonna beat you!" And with that the boys powered up and flew off to get to the DragonBall. About 20 minutes later, the boys were on the island and began looking around for it. "Hmmm, it should be just in this wooded area," said Vegeta. "Hey," yelled Goku, "I found it!" Goku had found the 2-star ball and it was in his hands. "Yes!" exclaimed Vegeta. "Our first DragonBall!" The two boys began jumping and dancing with joy, but that happiness was soon to be interrupted. *****
OK thought Gold to himself, I've gotta look tough. I can't let this kid see that I'm scared. I know martial arts, but if this kid took out over a hundred of my men, what chance do I stand? Well, here goes nothing! Gold then stepped out of the shadows where he was hiding and soon was facing the boys. There's two of them! Oh great, well time to put up my act! "Excuse me children!" boomed Gold, "But I believe that DragonBall belongs to the Red Ribbon Army! Hand it here and I promise you won't get hurt, much!" "Screw you!" answered Vegeta. “It's ours, if you want it you gotta fight me for it!" "Hey," said Goku, "I wanna fight!" "I saw him first Goku. If we come across anyone else, you can deal with them. So ya hear that army dude, it's time the great Vegeta opens a can of whoopass!"
The boys have finally began for their search of the DragonBalls, but will the Red Ribbon Army pose a threat to our heroes? From the looks of it, it doesn't seem General Gold will! But what about the strange person that Gogeta encountered? What secret could he hold? Find out these answers and more, next time on DragonBall AF!
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Post by Son Goshin on Jan 23, 2005 16:19:18 GMT -5
Previously on DragonBall AF, young Goku and Vegeta Jr. had just finished fighting at the World Tournament. Soon after the boys began to inquire what happened to their missing parents. After much thinking, Goku Jr. decided that the DragonBalls should be gathered in order to wish him and Vegeta's parents back! Now our heroes have traveled to Master Roshi's island for guidance, but what can he teach a couple of Super Saiyans?
"Master!" yelled Turtle. "We have visitors!" Master Roshi came to the door fuming. "How many times to I have to tell you not to bother me while I'm watching TV?!" answered Roshi. "But Master," replied Turtle, "Goku and Vegeta's relatives have come all this way to see you!” "Oh I see!" exclaimed the old hermit. The ship had just landed and Goku was the first one out. "Hi, I'm Goku Jr. Me and Vegeta's grandma's wanted us to come see you and get guidance before we look for the DragonBalls, but we thought it would be a waste of time since we're stronger than you but now I've changed my mind! Do you have any food cause I'm hungry." Master Roshi just stood there dumbfounded. "DragonBalls...guidance...food?" “Yea!” answered Goku. "Well," said Roshi, "I've got some food but when you two boys told your grandmothers I couldn't help you, *gulp*, uh, I think you were right." "What?!" shouted Pan. And soon everyone had fallen onto the ground in shock. "Well how about this," said Roshi, "you come in and tell me what's going on and we'll talk. But if you still want me to assist them, there may be one technique I can show them...” * * *
"...and that's why we're looking for the DragonBalls, Roshi," finished Pan. "Now would you mind telling us what this technique you've been talking about is?" "Well first," said Roshi, "I'll need the boys to step outside with me to see if they're ready." "Ready for what?" asked Vegeta. "Ready to help you look for your dirty magazines?" "No, but if you come outside you'll see," replied Roshi.Now outside, Roshi started talking to the boys. "I want both of you to go to your maximum powers, as strong as you can get." "All right," said Vegeta in a roostery tone, "but be warned, me and Goku are probably too much for you to handle! Let's go! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!" The boys turned into Super Saiyans and their power was steadily rising. After a minute, they were at their peaks. "Bra," said Pan, "I've never seen our grandsons so beefed up before in my life." "You're telling me." "Amazing," marveled Roshi. "They're both stronger then Trunks and Goten were. You two can power down. Boys, I think you're ready for the Fusion dance!" "What? said Vegeta. "What the hell is that?" "Watch your mouth young man or you'll eat soap!" scolded Bra. "Whatever," said Vegeta. "So what is this Fusion dance?" asked Bra. "Oh, wait, I think I know what it is!" exclaimed Pan. "I saw your father and my grandpa doing it before Bra. It greatly increases your strength and combines two people into one new body!" "Exactly," said Master Roshi. "I picked it up from Goku and Piccolo when they were training Goten and Trunks for the fight against Majin Buu. They fought a fierce battle, I even heard they broke a dimensional rip, all thanks to Fusion. You boy might need this technique to face off against some bad guys. Weird aliens are migrating to Earth, ever since interstellar travel began about 50 years back, and who knows how powerful they are." "Oh, I know someone like that," said Goku. "he's in my class and has two huge horns sticking out of his head! But Master Roshi, I'm ready to do this, I want to be real strong!" "All right," said Roshi, "let's start now then!" "..and two and three, come on ladies, doing good!" Master Roshi had forgotten to turn his TV off. "Wow, hold on!" yelled Master Roshi. "Maybe after my TV show!" "Ugh!" screamed Pan. "you pervert!" and with that she smacked Roshi upside the head. ***
Unbeknownst to anyone on the island, a secret organization was making plans to also look for what are heroes are searching for. "All right men! We have our new radar, the DragonBalls will be found easily now! We will crush all opposition, return our army into the glory it experienced years before, and now one will defeat us with our secret weapon! Long live the Red Ribbon Army!" "Long live the Red Ribbon Army" echoed the troops. "Now, let us begin our search for the DragonBalls!" * * * * "OK, boys," said Roshi, "I'm ready now. Pan, Bra, you wait inside, this may take a while. Boys, are you ready?" "Yes!" they answered." “All right," said Roshi, "this is what you do. You start on opposite sides, then you raise your arms, like this. Then you bend your knees- *CRACK*- OWWWWW! My knees! d**n it!" "Uh, you okay sir?" asked Goku. "Of course I am!" yelled Roshi. "Now, back to business. Next you take three steps with your knees bent and moving your arms to the other side saying 'Fuuuuu', like this. Think of it as if you're looking at each other through a mirror. Now do a quarter turn saying 'sion' and then bend your pointer fingers out saying 'HA'. And remember, you're power levels must be equal. And that's how you do the Fusion. Any questions? Yes, Vegeta." "Um, uh, could you start from the part where you began?" "Uhhhhhhh," sighed Master Roshi, "this is gonna be harder than I thought." * * * * *
"Commander Red, Commander Red, come in. This is General Gold, do you copy, over!" "Yea, I hear ya, what do ya want?" "Sir," replied General Gold, "we just uncovered the four star ball deep inside this jungle, but many of my men have caught some virus and are in need of medical assistance!" "We've no time for weaklings, Gold," said Commander Red, "leave them and bring me the ball!" "But, Commander, I can just-" "Maybe you didn't hear me right," growled Commander Red, "I said bring the ball back...now!" "Yes sir, right away sir! General Gold out!" "Eh, good help is so hard to find these days..."
3 Days Later
"Well boys," said Master Roshi, "we may've ran into a few problems-" "Yea," giggled Goku, "we were fat!" "Yes you were," replied Roshi, "but I think we're now ready to present the fusion to your grandmothers." "Well, Bra, this should be good," said Pan. "I wonder what his name will be?" pondered Bra. "Oh, don't worry," said Roshi, "he comes with his own name. Now boys, are you ready?" "Yes!" they answered. "Then let's go!" exclaimed Roshi. "Fuuuuuuuu.... sionnnnnnn.... HAAAAAAA! Light started emanating from where the boys were standing and everyone was blinded. Then, something started to emerge from the light. "Wow! He did it!" said Turtle." Amazing," said Bra. "He looks more like Vegeta, but the hair is definitely Goku's." "So ya got a name there?" asked Pan. "Gogeta Jr.," he answered sharply. "Well Gogeta Jr.," said Roshi, "you've done good, why don't you go have a snack or something." "How 'bout not?" he retorted. "Hey, mind your manners young man!" said Bra. "Sorry, grandma," said Gogeta, "but I feel like fighting. I'm gonna face the most powerful guy I can sense. Mmmmmm. Ah ha! There we go!" And with that he flew off. "No, wait, come back!" yelled Roshi. "Eh, they're too immature to handle the Fusion. Same thing happened with Gotenks. But he'll be back, I hope."
Goku and Vegeta Jr. have succeeded in performing the Fusion dance, but with two children sharing the same body, they've now become full of themselves! And what is this power that Gogeta Jr. has flown off to find. And with the Red Ribbon Army already hot on the DragonBall's tail, what threat will they be to our heroes? Find out in the next installment of DragonBall AF!
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Post by Son Goshin on Jan 23, 2005 16:03:18 GMT -5
Our story takes place 100 years after Goku was taken by Shenlong, at the World Tournament, right after Goku Jr. and Vegeta Jr.'s spectacular battle.
“Wow, Vegeta,” said Goku Jr. “I never knew you had an attack like that!” "Eh, it was something my grandma picked up from her dad." said Vegeta Jr. "But you did pretty good yourself." "Thanks!" Just then Pan walked up to the two boys who were just getting out of the locker room. Pan was now an old woman and had lived with Goku Jr. ever since his parents disappeared. "Both you boys did great today! Why don't we all go out and celebrate with some ice cream. Your grandmother's already waiting in the car Vegeta, so let's go!" "Oh boy ice cream!" yelled Goku. *****
Soon the four arrived at the ice cream parlor, and Vegeta was hungry. "Hey, Vegeta," said Bra, who was Vegeta Jr's grandma, "can you let me have a scoop of your ice cream, I don't want to get a whole big one." "Heck no! Get your own!" he replied. "Uhhhh, I swear Vegeta, you're just like your father." "Great," sighed Vegeta, "here we go again. You throw in little details about my father, yet you never tell me the whole story! It's like your teasing me on purpose. Why can't you and Pan ever tell me and Goku what really happened to our parents?” Vegeta Jr.'s parents had disappeared around the same time as Goku Jr.'s and ever since then, the two old women tried not to say much about it. "We'll talk about this later, Vegeta," Bra answered curtly. "Anyways it's time we go. Say good-bye to Goku and Pan." "See ya guys later. I'll call you tomorrow Goku, maybe we'll go sparring or something." "Sure!" said Goku giving him a thumb's up. Later that night, Goku felt it was time to ask his grandmother some important questions. He never really knew his parents at all since he was only about two at the time of their disappearance. Now with Vegeta bringing up the subject again, he felt he couldn’t let his concerns go on any longer. "Grandma," asked Goku, "I've been wondering lately, whatever happened to my parents?” "Oh, Goku," Pan said, "I've dreaded this day for a long time. The truth is I don't know. When my daughter, your mother, and your father disappeared 12 years ago, I was devastated. That night they decided to go on a night on the town with Vegeta's parents. We never saw them again. I couldn't even sense their ki anymore. Luckily you with me that day and nothing bad happened to you. If there were just some way to find them... I... I..." Pan was trying to choke back her tears but Goku could see she was distressed. "There's absolutely no one that knew where they went?” "Nobody," Pan answered somberly. "We called the police, hired a private investigator, all to no avail. I suppose we'll really never know what happened to them Goku, I'm sorry." "Wait, grandma!" yelled Goku. "I just realized! Couldn't we call forth the eternal dragon you told me about?! We could wish to know the location of our parents!" "But Goku, the Dragon said no wishes could be made for 100 years after your great-great grandfather defeated the evil Shenlong. By my calculations, it's been 95 years since then." "Oh," said Goku a bit disheartened. "But it would've been a good idea. Well, good night grandma." "Good night, Goku." The next day Goku went over to Capsule Corp to visit with Vegeta. Soon, Goku was telling Vegeta about the idea he had right when Bra walked into the room."...but she said only 95 years have passed so we can't make a wish yet." said Goku, finishing the story. "Wait a minute," said Bra, "what is your grandma talking about Goku? It HAS been 100 years! I bet if we turn on my mother's dragon radar right now, we could get a signal!" "Really Grandma?!" asked Vegeta. "That's great!" "Oh, Mrs. Briefs, could my Grandma please come here too to see this?" asked Goku excitedly. "Sure!" said Bra. "Tell her to get here quick so we can all find out if this works!" Pan soon arrived and was in disbelief. "I don't believe this is happening! Hurry and turn it on Bra, let's see if we get a signal!" "Right!" and with that Bra clicked the radar on. Beep Beep Beep Seven dots appeared across the screen and the boys jumped for joy! "It worked! I don't believe it! Now we can find our parents Vegeta!" exclaimed Goku. "Grandma, can me and Vegeta look for the DragonBalls, just like you and your grandpa did?" "Yeah, please Grandma?" chimed in Vegeta. "What do you think Pan?" asked Bra. "Should we let them?" "Well, I guess so," she said. "But I think you both should go to Master Roshi's and get some advice from him. He may be a perv, but he's pretty wise and maybe he can show you a thing or two. "Aw, do we have to," complained Vegeta. "He smells bad and looks like a turtle." "But you'll be trekking alone and you two will need some guidance," said Pan. "It's amazing he's still alive though," said Bra. "My grandpa said he had an immortal phoenix and it gave him eternal life or something, I don't really know," said Pan. "But kids, we'll leave tomorrow so rest up, because tomorrow's gonna be a big day!” "The next day, Turtle was relaxing outside Master Roshi's front porch when he saw a Capsule Corp plane coming out of the sky. "Master!" bellowed Turtle. "we have visitors!" “...and one, and two. And three and four! That's good keep it up ladies!!" These were the voices coming from Master Roshi's TV. "Heh heh! Oh yeah! That's what I like!" said Master Roshi. "Oh Master," said Turtle to himself.
So what can old Master Roshi teach the two young Saiyans while watching aerobics? Will Goku and Vegeta be successful in their journey for the DragonBalls? Find out all this and more in the next installment of DragonBall AF!
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Post by Son Goshin on Apr 15, 2005 19:10:01 GMT -5
thanks man i appreciate it! ;D and i apoligize everybody, but chapter 43 will be a bit late. it'll either come out late this friday night or early saturday morning, so please stay tuned
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Post by Son Goshin on Apr 14, 2005 19:43:40 GMT -5
well, this ain't the place to discuss it. just read around in those threads in the general board and you'll see
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Post by Son Goshin on Apr 14, 2005 19:03:56 GMT -5
*sigh* check out the general board, it's all explaind there
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Post by Son Goshin on Apr 14, 2005 18:11:09 GMT -5
yes, it will becoming out tomorrow. and it will be coming out HERE not on the other forum
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Post by Son Goshin on Apr 12, 2005 18:14:06 GMT -5
lol, no need to rush. ;D try to get the best out of your reading experience ;D
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Post by Son Goshin on Apr 12, 2005 17:41:15 GMT -5
Hella crazy ain't it Gogeta? BOT: Yeah I finally got a chance to read 42. For some reason it reminded me of the part in Attack of the Clones when Anikin's Mom died in his arms. Did you gather the idea from that? BTW, looking forward to seein how Goku does against Bebi (I kinda want Trunks to be involved too but I'm just a Trunks Fanboy) Sidenote: How strong is Majuub in comparason to the Saiyans? In GT it wasn't like he was that strong but he had the strength of Kid and Majin Buu fused. And since he has all of Buu's powers I figured that he would be pretty strong. Could you clear that up? actually, that whole part where goku jr goes crazy came straight from me, but know when i think about it, it is kinda like anakin from episode II. as for uubu, he's pretty strong. his power level is inbewteen that of a super saiyan 3 and a super saiyan 4. i'll let ya guys in on a little secret too, uubu WILL see some action in the coming chapters ;D
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Post by Son Goshin on Apr 10, 2005 16:42:44 GMT -5
here's a pic of pan when she's older: and it might take ya a while to catch up, so go at your own pace and don't read the stories too fast. oh, and remember not to double post.
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Post by Son Goshin on Apr 9, 2005 17:47:21 GMT -5
yea, and while you're at it, read the story too! ;D
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Post by Son Goshin on Apr 9, 2005 17:39:30 GMT -5
if you would've read the description, this is a FAN-FIC made by me. we already know that DBAF is fake, this is just my story
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Post by Son Goshin on Apr 9, 2005 15:46:39 GMT -5
lol, it'll be here before ya know it ;D
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Post by Son Goshin on Apr 9, 2005 12:19:41 GMT -5
glad ya liked it guys and yes, chapter 43 comes out next friday
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Post by Son Goshin on Apr 8, 2005 18:20:09 GMT -5
yup, and it's up right now! ;D and for those of you that are wondering why nothing was mentioned in chapter 42 about son goku and bebi's fight it's becuase i wanted to focus more on goku jr this chapter and his feelings. except chapter 43 to be more focused on the fight in hell. and with the re-emergence of the original vegeta, to avoid confusion, vegeta jr will always be called vegeta jr, and vegeta will be called, vegeta.
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