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Post by YoshikiRose on Jan 16, 2005 1:46:10 GMT -5
I skimmed very quickly through it; get your writing style fixed. Yes, I've written things for fun, and they ended up being around 10 pages long they were...emm..hentaiAnyways, just work at it, and be sure to at least put SOME details in there.
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jstarbob
Super Saiyan 2
Forever has to end sometime...
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Post by jstarbob on Jan 16, 2005 13:52:51 GMT -5
Thanks fluff. I will improve my writting style, but I am taking time off from writting to get ideas together because this didnt work out, but thats fine I wasnt expecting it too be amazing ;D. Last but not least thanks for all of your helpfull comments .
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Post by ~*Hieislove*~ on Jan 16, 2005 14:53:23 GMT -5
BAD FLUFF ! Shame on you your so young *tear*
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Post by YoshikiRose on Jan 17, 2005 2:47:51 GMT -5
Hey. It was only one episode.
It was extremely detailed, too ¬0¬
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