Post by ~*Hieislove*~ on Feb 17, 2005 19:21:42 GMT -5
Shortest Chapter I ever made.
Chapter 4
Hitori was packing his things when Yoko stopped him. Yoko placed his hand on Hitori’s head.
“You’re so young…so innocent…you don’t deserve any of this.” Yoko gently ran his hand through Hitori’s hand.
“Well my mother didn’t deserve to die. Sometimes we get what we don’t deserve – or want.” Hitori grabbed his bad and stood up.
Hideki’s branch was shaking. “You guys be careful. And make sure your back on time, maybe this isn’t a good idea after all. Maybe you should just stay here, where it’s safe.”
Hitori glared hard at Hideki. His eyes looked so lost and young, you couldn’t tell it hold so much emotion. “Not in this life time. I’m always hiding behind my mother from, things. But now she’s not here, so it’s my turn to fight for what I say.”
Yoko was confused, though he spoke with wary, he was serious. “Things? What things did your mother protect you from?”
Hitori was shock at Yoko’s question. “Why the hell do you care? It’s nothing to get worried about.”
Yoko slapped Hitori right across his face. Hitori stood there facing down. Yoko was about to see if he was o.k, but Hitori pushed him away. “Hitori, I’m so sorry…it’s just your mouth was so out and I just hate when you speak with such grudge in your sentence.”
Then Yoko could hear a faded out sound. Yoko kneeled down to see Hitori’s face, he was crying. Yoko hugged him but was rewarded a shove by Hitori. “Go away.”
Hitori got up and ran into the shadow. Yoko tried to catch but fell on a rock. “Hitori don’t go!” But Yoko was too late, he was already gone.
Hitori kept running and running until he fell flat on his face. Hitori was crying. He just stood there lying on the floor. There was rustles behind him, but Hitori was too sad too even looked, he took the chance to let his guard down. The rustle began to step closer and closer. Hitori felt a presence around his legs. He felt something rub against his foot. Someone or something was now playing with his foot. The someone was a female for sure; Hitori could tell by the way the girl laughed.
“Shut up!” Hitori shot up and froze when he saw how beautiful the young girl was. She had long brown hair and wonderful blue eyes.
“Well aren’t you rude.” The girl giggled. She poked Hitori’s foot. “And you’re cute too…” The little girl said in the most childish voice.
The girl glanced at Hitori; he was blushing. Hitori kicked the girl’s hand away softly. “Don’t touch me”
“My name is Naoko, what's yours” The girl fluttered her eyes.
Hitori backed up. “Stupid girl…My name is Hitori…”
Naoko jumped on Hitori. “What you doing here in the forest?”
Hitori pushed her off. “I live here.” Then Hitori heard Yoko calling out to him.
Naoko looked up and saw Yoko. “Hello”
Yoko glanced at Hitori blushing and the girl poking Hitori’s foot. “Hello to you…”
Then out of the brushes Kono popped out. “Missed me?” Kono glanced at the girl. “Wo what a hottie.”
Hitori glared. “Back off you idiot.”
Well thats its, I wanted to start Chapter five with the fight...o.k thats all I'm telling you ;D Will Kono die?
nah , hes my favorite character ;D
Chapter 4
Hitori was packing his things when Yoko stopped him. Yoko placed his hand on Hitori’s head.
“You’re so young…so innocent…you don’t deserve any of this.” Yoko gently ran his hand through Hitori’s hand.
“Well my mother didn’t deserve to die. Sometimes we get what we don’t deserve – or want.” Hitori grabbed his bad and stood up.
Hideki’s branch was shaking. “You guys be careful. And make sure your back on time, maybe this isn’t a good idea after all. Maybe you should just stay here, where it’s safe.”
Hitori glared hard at Hideki. His eyes looked so lost and young, you couldn’t tell it hold so much emotion. “Not in this life time. I’m always hiding behind my mother from, things. But now she’s not here, so it’s my turn to fight for what I say.”
Yoko was confused, though he spoke with wary, he was serious. “Things? What things did your mother protect you from?”
Hitori was shock at Yoko’s question. “Why the hell do you care? It’s nothing to get worried about.”
Yoko slapped Hitori right across his face. Hitori stood there facing down. Yoko was about to see if he was o.k, but Hitori pushed him away. “Hitori, I’m so sorry…it’s just your mouth was so out and I just hate when you speak with such grudge in your sentence.”
Then Yoko could hear a faded out sound. Yoko kneeled down to see Hitori’s face, he was crying. Yoko hugged him but was rewarded a shove by Hitori. “Go away.”
Hitori got up and ran into the shadow. Yoko tried to catch but fell on a rock. “Hitori don’t go!” But Yoko was too late, he was already gone.
Hitori kept running and running until he fell flat on his face. Hitori was crying. He just stood there lying on the floor. There was rustles behind him, but Hitori was too sad too even looked, he took the chance to let his guard down. The rustle began to step closer and closer. Hitori felt a presence around his legs. He felt something rub against his foot. Someone or something was now playing with his foot. The someone was a female for sure; Hitori could tell by the way the girl laughed.
“Shut up!” Hitori shot up and froze when he saw how beautiful the young girl was. She had long brown hair and wonderful blue eyes.
“Well aren’t you rude.” The girl giggled. She poked Hitori’s foot. “And you’re cute too…” The little girl said in the most childish voice.
The girl glanced at Hitori; he was blushing. Hitori kicked the girl’s hand away softly. “Don’t touch me”
“My name is Naoko, what's yours” The girl fluttered her eyes.
Hitori backed up. “Stupid girl…My name is Hitori…”
Naoko jumped on Hitori. “What you doing here in the forest?”
Hitori pushed her off. “I live here.” Then Hitori heard Yoko calling out to him.
Naoko looked up and saw Yoko. “Hello”
Yoko glanced at Hitori blushing and the girl poking Hitori’s foot. “Hello to you…”
Then out of the brushes Kono popped out. “Missed me?” Kono glanced at the girl. “Wo what a hottie.”
Hitori glared. “Back off you idiot.”
Well thats its, I wanted to start Chapter five with the fight...o.k thats all I'm telling you ;D Will Kono die?
nah , hes my favorite character ;D 
. Keep up the good work
And don't take that as some kind of put down, everyone can always improve.
yay!