Post by jstarbob on Mar 16, 2005 18:49:28 GMT -5
RECONSTRUCTION PART II
POOL OF BLOOD-
CHAPTER 1
Alicia a cultist under the leadership of Adonus for eight years had been waiting to see the god they all called great. Now the only thing she could think about was detective Max Rowling, and his struggle for life in the pool of blood.
“What will he do to him?” She asked herself.
“Will god accept me?” She wondered.
Of course the man who Adonus called god was no god at all but these people didn’t know that. He was Adonus’ father a magician in the black arts. A king among kings of the dark religion, for he had no name. People refused to call him anything that might upset him. Best known as my lord, my king, or his most common name Exophastas. And now he was coming home… from his bloody grave. The man who killed him was screwed for eternity to hell and would die a most horrible death that even the Devil himself would put mercy upon him. Then suddenly there was a blood-curdling scream from the cultists as they stripped themselves of there skin with knives and razors. They began ripping it off to show their appreciation for Exophastas the lord of darkness!
“He is coming home!” Adonus screamed as the blood from the pool began to rise and take shape of man.
Sprouting arms then legs followed by the torso, and then the head. The cultists fell to the ground bleeding to death as they finished cutting off there skin. Exophastas walked past his son and went straight to the dead cultists. He bent down and picked up skin to cover his skinless body that revealed all flesh and muscle. Then he looked at Adonus…
“… Where is he?” He asked with a scratchy voice.
“Father… I kept him in the chamber with the sacrifice! He was in a hollow in the walls.” Adonus said.
“Take me to him.” Exophastas said in a commanding tone.
Adonus took his father by the hand and led him into the room where he kept Max while he was unconscious. Adonus knocked on the walls looking for a hollow. He finally found it and smiled. He then knocked three times and a door opened. When Adonus and Exophastas walked in there was a skeleton on the ground bound up with chains much like the ones that Max had in his arms and legs, the ones with hooks in them.
“He’s dead!” Exophastas screamed.
“Father I thought you wanted him to die?” Adonus said while huddling into a corner.
“By my hands only!” Exophastas screamed.
Adonus ran out of the room and locked the hollow door. Exophastas screamed let me out but Adonus had to find away to send him back to hell or Exophastas would kill him with no mercy… could he resurrect Max? He ran over to the pool of blood and searched threw it. A hand came up and grabbed his hand followed by another one. The hands of the she demons that dragged Max under, but they were not pulling him in they were keeping him from escaping. Adonus looked in the middle of the pool. It was now bubbling and that meant trouble. Max’s head popped out of the middle of the water. He had red eyes and with hardly any skin left on his face. He was now a demon and he wanted revenge on the person who killed him which happened to be Adonus.
“No please!” Adonus said.
“Come on… lets have some fun! Dying isn't as bad as I thought it was!” The demon Max says in order to calm down Adonus.
Adonus finally gets free from the demon female hands and staggers backward right into Exophastas.
“Join them… or die!” Exophastas says to Adonus.
“You’re going with me father!” Adonus screams.
Exophastas laughs. Suddenly pair of hands break out of the ground and grab Exophastas legs. They begin to pull him under. Adonus manages to get Exophastas to let go of him. Adonus watches as his father is pulled into the ground while screaming. It seems hell still wants him…
Adonus smiles and sits down in front of the pool thinking its over. Suddenly the demon Max jumps out of the blood and pulls Adonus in. There is a struggle but finally the blood hardens into rock solid clay.
THE END
“This wasn’t the longest but I enjoyed writing it, and I hope for more reviews from fans of Part 1. And believe me when I started writing this I didn’t expect to kill the main character killed off =)
But I did a great thing making the main character become the villain after Detective Max Rowling was killed off. Adonus was a crazy bastard! Bet you thought Max would kill him and Exophastas.
Well if you have any questions please comment and look for my next story in a couple days (at the most maybe 5).”
POOL OF BLOOD-
CHAPTER 1
Alicia a cultist under the leadership of Adonus for eight years had been waiting to see the god they all called great. Now the only thing she could think about was detective Max Rowling, and his struggle for life in the pool of blood.
“What will he do to him?” She asked herself.
“Will god accept me?” She wondered.
Of course the man who Adonus called god was no god at all but these people didn’t know that. He was Adonus’ father a magician in the black arts. A king among kings of the dark religion, for he had no name. People refused to call him anything that might upset him. Best known as my lord, my king, or his most common name Exophastas. And now he was coming home… from his bloody grave. The man who killed him was screwed for eternity to hell and would die a most horrible death that even the Devil himself would put mercy upon him. Then suddenly there was a blood-curdling scream from the cultists as they stripped themselves of there skin with knives and razors. They began ripping it off to show their appreciation for Exophastas the lord of darkness!
“He is coming home!” Adonus screamed as the blood from the pool began to rise and take shape of man.
Sprouting arms then legs followed by the torso, and then the head. The cultists fell to the ground bleeding to death as they finished cutting off there skin. Exophastas walked past his son and went straight to the dead cultists. He bent down and picked up skin to cover his skinless body that revealed all flesh and muscle. Then he looked at Adonus…
“… Where is he?” He asked with a scratchy voice.
“Father… I kept him in the chamber with the sacrifice! He was in a hollow in the walls.” Adonus said.
“Take me to him.” Exophastas said in a commanding tone.
Adonus took his father by the hand and led him into the room where he kept Max while he was unconscious. Adonus knocked on the walls looking for a hollow. He finally found it and smiled. He then knocked three times and a door opened. When Adonus and Exophastas walked in there was a skeleton on the ground bound up with chains much like the ones that Max had in his arms and legs, the ones with hooks in them.
“He’s dead!” Exophastas screamed.
“Father I thought you wanted him to die?” Adonus said while huddling into a corner.
“By my hands only!” Exophastas screamed.
Adonus ran out of the room and locked the hollow door. Exophastas screamed let me out but Adonus had to find away to send him back to hell or Exophastas would kill him with no mercy… could he resurrect Max? He ran over to the pool of blood and searched threw it. A hand came up and grabbed his hand followed by another one. The hands of the she demons that dragged Max under, but they were not pulling him in they were keeping him from escaping. Adonus looked in the middle of the pool. It was now bubbling and that meant trouble. Max’s head popped out of the middle of the water. He had red eyes and with hardly any skin left on his face. He was now a demon and he wanted revenge on the person who killed him which happened to be Adonus.
“No please!” Adonus said.
“Come on… lets have some fun! Dying isn't as bad as I thought it was!” The demon Max says in order to calm down Adonus.
Adonus finally gets free from the demon female hands and staggers backward right into Exophastas.
“Join them… or die!” Exophastas says to Adonus.
“You’re going with me father!” Adonus screams.
Exophastas laughs. Suddenly pair of hands break out of the ground and grab Exophastas legs. They begin to pull him under. Adonus manages to get Exophastas to let go of him. Adonus watches as his father is pulled into the ground while screaming. It seems hell still wants him…
Adonus smiles and sits down in front of the pool thinking its over. Suddenly the demon Max jumps out of the blood and pulls Adonus in. There is a struggle but finally the blood hardens into rock solid clay.
THE END
“This wasn’t the longest but I enjoyed writing it, and I hope for more reviews from fans of Part 1. And believe me when I started writing this I didn’t expect to kill the main character killed off =)
But I did a great thing making the main character become the villain after Detective Max Rowling was killed off. Adonus was a crazy bastard! Bet you thought Max would kill him and Exophastas.
Well if you have any questions please comment and look for my next story in a couple days (at the most maybe 5).”
