Post by BlackCoven on Mar 24, 2005 20:37:33 GMT -5
This story was inspired by a show I watch called Carnivale. I hope you like it, and I will still finish my other story, I just want to get this down while its fresh in my head.
Are our lives predetermined, is our future told before we have a chance to live it? Are we simply pawns on a wooden board, shuffling about our lives without reason or control? How absurd is it not, the idea of some entity placing us in motion. What would be the price to defy fate, what if you alone could decide the fate of all mankind. Would you hesitate and run, or would you be brave. Then again, do you really have that choice...
Looking back on it, I truely was a fool........
The year was 2023, Revelations was truely ravishing the Earth as the smell of sulfer and fire filled the air. The ashes of a false sun stripped the land of all life across most of the planet. The Eastern continents have spread across Europe and advance on the lands of Africa. The America's allied in a last attempt to liberate Europe and stop the eastern advancement but it was far too late. With the muslim treaty signed and Russia destroyed, Asia was far more dominant then any could have imagined. The America's sent a fleet of soldiers to England as they hope to drive back the forces of the East. The human moral had never been lower.
A war that seemed so impossible, until one day, it wasn't. The stars were aligned as the North Star shined as bright as the sun. In the light of the night, a prophet is born, one that shall usher a new age. To each prophet, a prince is born, and so shall the Alpha challenge the usher in a battle for mankind. And it is then, the angels shall choose sides in the fight for the prize........humanity.
That is my intro, tell me your thoughts on it....
Fate
Prologue
Prologue
Are our lives predetermined, is our future told before we have a chance to live it? Are we simply pawns on a wooden board, shuffling about our lives without reason or control? How absurd is it not, the idea of some entity placing us in motion. What would be the price to defy fate, what if you alone could decide the fate of all mankind. Would you hesitate and run, or would you be brave. Then again, do you really have that choice...
Looking back on it, I truely was a fool........
The year was 2023, Revelations was truely ravishing the Earth as the smell of sulfer and fire filled the air. The ashes of a false sun stripped the land of all life across most of the planet. The Eastern continents have spread across Europe and advance on the lands of Africa. The America's allied in a last attempt to liberate Europe and stop the eastern advancement but it was far too late. With the muslim treaty signed and Russia destroyed, Asia was far more dominant then any could have imagined. The America's sent a fleet of soldiers to England as they hope to drive back the forces of the East. The human moral had never been lower.
A war that seemed so impossible, until one day, it wasn't. The stars were aligned as the North Star shined as bright as the sun. In the light of the night, a prophet is born, one that shall usher a new age. To each prophet, a prince is born, and so shall the Alpha challenge the usher in a battle for mankind. And it is then, the angels shall choose sides in the fight for the prize........humanity.
That is my intro, tell me your thoughts on it....
it would be cool if the two people are real angels but long ago they were cast out becuz they were different from the others and when they came from the earth they lost their memory 
. And as far as action, there probably wont be that much at first. It will be slow, but the story will be good......I hope.
