Post by ~*Hieislove*~ on Apr 6, 2005 18:22:41 GMT -5
***Well this is the new chapter... BlackCoven, I know I sended you yesterday, but I add something at the ending , so you might want to read off the part....it's only a few lines 
hope you guys like it ^_^ Thank you and feel free to give me your though 
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Chapter nine
The man held his hand up and smirked. Hitori shook his head and charged at the man. “What did you do with Hideki?”
The man grabbed Hitori’s arm and brought it to the air, hanging Hitori up. The man spoke softly. “Why do you care about what happen to him?”
Hitori wiggle around before he actually spoke. “If I don’t get to him, I die! And he was the smartest person I ever meet. And he’s sweet and sometimes a smart @ss but that’s what makes him who he is!” Hitori kicked up at the man.
The man dropped Hitori. “You’re funny. It is me, Hideki.”
Hitori’s face turned straight. “What? How do I know, you’re not lying.”
The man that called himself Hideki smiled. “I finally remember… The curse was if I didn’t remember who killed my family, I would never be free. I finally remember who killed my family. It was me. I was a bad person, Hitori. But you showed me, there’s more in life then killing. There’s revenge. There’s love. I had a lover, but she was killed. It is me Hitori, and I want to help you…And besides, if I was to cut him, I couldn’t just hide a 100 foot tree under my shoe.”
Hitori frowned. “What will happen to me, I have no place to go…after I change to fox form?”
Hideki took the map from Hitori. “Is this the map?”
Hitori glanced at how Hideki looked. Hideki had a long dark green hair and pitch black eyes. He was slim and tall. He had a light green tail sticking out of his pants from the back. Hitori giggled at the sight of the tail. Hideki heard the giggle and glanced at Hitori. Hitori glanced at Hideki’s nails; there were sharp and claw-like.
Hideki sighed. “I am a wolf demon.”
Hitori smirked. “Well, do you think we can make it in time?”
Hideki glanced at the map with a stern look. He tilted his head to the side then back. “Well we might be able to make it with time to spare if we leave now.”
Hitori already had his bags in his hand. “Then what are we waiting for?”
Hideki took a step forward slowly. “Its find to even walk. I haven’t walk in so long, I kind of forgot the feeling. The pleasure of feeling the wind against my face it’s so great…. It’s been so long. Now let’s go.”
Yoko smiled at Hideki. “It’s good to have an older person here…I mean you always been here but…”
Hideki’s flicker his tail. “I understand what you mean, what you need help in controlling these boys? Hahahah.”
Yoko rolled his eyes. “Please, don’t make me even explain. They always get in trouble. Always fighting, talking with an attitude; they make a wonderful best friends.”
The gang started to walk off in the direction of the cave. Hideki glanced at Kono. Kono was smiling and looking at Naoko. Kono was walking directly behind her and kicking her feet, making her stumble every now and then. His hands were in his pocket and he wasn't paying attention to anything around him. Hideki looked over to Hitori. He was behind Kira, and has a huge grin painted on his face. Hideki looked at Kira she keeps glancing back at Hitori, like she knew he was watching her. Hideki glanced at Naoko; she was trying to pull some type of sexy walk. Hideki rolled his eyes, and then thought to himself. “Well I can see Hitori and Kira got close, and look at that Kono boy, now I can understand why Yoko calls him a born bad boy.”
A few hours passed and they gang was at the cave. Hitori looked into the cave, it was completely dark and he knew he should enter without some type of light. Hideki step in front of Hitori then was brought down to the floor and dragged into the cave. Hideki grunted in angry and began to hit whatever was attacking him. Hitori and the rest could only hear the hits and small screams.
Hitori looked at Yoko. “What do we do? Hideki is getting attacked.”
Yoko looked at Hitori and stared…it was like someone was forcing him to stare at each other. Yoko’s eyes widen when he felt the sudden change of power in the air. Yoko ran to the girls and pushed them down and stood over them. Hitori glanced at Yoko with the most innocent eyes. Hitori then was pulled by a cloud of darkness. Hitori fought to stay on the ground but couldn’t bare the pain.
Yoko searched for Kono, when he glanced Kono was on his knees crying softly, whispering some and holding his ears. Yoko called out to Kono. “Help Hitori, he needs you!”
Kono crawled over and stood there. Hitori was still fighting the cloud of darkness. Hitori held out his hand and called out for Yoko. Yoko looked down at the girls, there were helpless and Yoko couldn’t afford to leave them waiting in a mist. Hitori kicked up but was brought into the air. Hitori’s eyes suddenly turn pitch black. Hitori was taken in the cave.
Yoko ran to Kono. When Yoko tried to help Kono, Kono shivered in fear. Kono glanced up with his green eyes, meaning he was nearly turning to his demon form. Yoko gently slapped Kono’s shoulder and spoke at ease. “Hitori and Hideki need you.”
Kono looked at Yoko with, what seemed to be insane eyes. “I forgot it’s the shadow cave.”
Yoko gently helped Kono get up. “I can see you’re sensitive of the dark. What is this, shadow cave?”
Kono glared at Yoko. “You don’t understand. Well anyhow, the cave is said to be the container of evil of all the people who died in the demon world.”
Kira ran to Kono. “That's a lot of evil!”
hope you guys like it ^_^ Thank you and feel free to give me your though 
**** Chapter nine
The man held his hand up and smirked. Hitori shook his head and charged at the man. “What did you do with Hideki?”
The man grabbed Hitori’s arm and brought it to the air, hanging Hitori up. The man spoke softly. “Why do you care about what happen to him?”
Hitori wiggle around before he actually spoke. “If I don’t get to him, I die! And he was the smartest person I ever meet. And he’s sweet and sometimes a smart @ss but that’s what makes him who he is!” Hitori kicked up at the man.
The man dropped Hitori. “You’re funny. It is me, Hideki.”
Hitori’s face turned straight. “What? How do I know, you’re not lying.”
The man that called himself Hideki smiled. “I finally remember… The curse was if I didn’t remember who killed my family, I would never be free. I finally remember who killed my family. It was me. I was a bad person, Hitori. But you showed me, there’s more in life then killing. There’s revenge. There’s love. I had a lover, but she was killed. It is me Hitori, and I want to help you…And besides, if I was to cut him, I couldn’t just hide a 100 foot tree under my shoe.”
Hitori frowned. “What will happen to me, I have no place to go…after I change to fox form?”
Hideki took the map from Hitori. “Is this the map?”
Hitori glanced at how Hideki looked. Hideki had a long dark green hair and pitch black eyes. He was slim and tall. He had a light green tail sticking out of his pants from the back. Hitori giggled at the sight of the tail. Hideki heard the giggle and glanced at Hitori. Hitori glanced at Hideki’s nails; there were sharp and claw-like.
Hideki sighed. “I am a wolf demon.”
Hitori smirked. “Well, do you think we can make it in time?”
Hideki glanced at the map with a stern look. He tilted his head to the side then back. “Well we might be able to make it with time to spare if we leave now.”
Hitori already had his bags in his hand. “Then what are we waiting for?”
Hideki took a step forward slowly. “Its find to even walk. I haven’t walk in so long, I kind of forgot the feeling. The pleasure of feeling the wind against my face it’s so great…. It’s been so long. Now let’s go.”
Yoko smiled at Hideki. “It’s good to have an older person here…I mean you always been here but…”
Hideki’s flicker his tail. “I understand what you mean, what you need help in controlling these boys? Hahahah.”
Yoko rolled his eyes. “Please, don’t make me even explain. They always get in trouble. Always fighting, talking with an attitude; they make a wonderful best friends.”
The gang started to walk off in the direction of the cave. Hideki glanced at Kono. Kono was smiling and looking at Naoko. Kono was walking directly behind her and kicking her feet, making her stumble every now and then. His hands were in his pocket and he wasn't paying attention to anything around him. Hideki looked over to Hitori. He was behind Kira, and has a huge grin painted on his face. Hideki looked at Kira she keeps glancing back at Hitori, like she knew he was watching her. Hideki glanced at Naoko; she was trying to pull some type of sexy walk. Hideki rolled his eyes, and then thought to himself. “Well I can see Hitori and Kira got close, and look at that Kono boy, now I can understand why Yoko calls him a born bad boy.”
A few hours passed and they gang was at the cave. Hitori looked into the cave, it was completely dark and he knew he should enter without some type of light. Hideki step in front of Hitori then was brought down to the floor and dragged into the cave. Hideki grunted in angry and began to hit whatever was attacking him. Hitori and the rest could only hear the hits and small screams.
Hitori looked at Yoko. “What do we do? Hideki is getting attacked.”
Yoko looked at Hitori and stared…it was like someone was forcing him to stare at each other. Yoko’s eyes widen when he felt the sudden change of power in the air. Yoko ran to the girls and pushed them down and stood over them. Hitori glanced at Yoko with the most innocent eyes. Hitori then was pulled by a cloud of darkness. Hitori fought to stay on the ground but couldn’t bare the pain.
Yoko searched for Kono, when he glanced Kono was on his knees crying softly, whispering some and holding his ears. Yoko called out to Kono. “Help Hitori, he needs you!”
Kono crawled over and stood there. Hitori was still fighting the cloud of darkness. Hitori held out his hand and called out for Yoko. Yoko looked down at the girls, there were helpless and Yoko couldn’t afford to leave them waiting in a mist. Hitori kicked up but was brought into the air. Hitori’s eyes suddenly turn pitch black. Hitori was taken in the cave.
Yoko ran to Kono. When Yoko tried to help Kono, Kono shivered in fear. Kono glanced up with his green eyes, meaning he was nearly turning to his demon form. Yoko gently slapped Kono’s shoulder and spoke at ease. “Hitori and Hideki need you.”
Kono looked at Yoko with, what seemed to be insane eyes. “I forgot it’s the shadow cave.”
Yoko gently helped Kono get up. “I can see you’re sensitive of the dark. What is this, shadow cave?”
Kono glared at Yoko. “You don’t understand. Well anyhow, the cave is said to be the container of evil of all the people who died in the demon world.”
Kira ran to Kono. “That's a lot of evil!”
