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Post by gokuromario on Dec 10, 2004 17:01:26 GMT -5
Dragon Ball Saijan Reunion Episode 1
FAMILY REUNION
PART 1 – THERE’S…..NO WAY!!!!!!!!
(Scene starts off with Vegeta and Bulma driving to a mysterious place)
Vegeta-“how long till we get there” Bulma-“not far now, stop bickering” Vegeta-“bah, why do we have to go to this stupid event anyhow?” Bulma-“Mr Satan invited us you can’t just turn down something like that” Vegeta-“man, it’s been 5 months since Kakarot blew Majin Buu to pieces and the guy still tells everyone that it was him” Bulma-“oh let him have his fun, besides, do you want everyone to know your some super being from outer space, get real, they do weird stuff to people like you, carnivals, autopsies just to see if you have a radical gene inside you” Vegeta-“I am the prince of all saijans, I will not take such petty patronage from a fool like him” Bulma-“sometimes I just don’t understand you Vegeta, you still go on about a race that doesn’t even exist anymore, you just don’t realise that you’ve got to move on, you cant keep living in the past, you’re a normal person now, well super strong but still normal” Vegeta-“you could’ve at least brought the brat along to keep me sane” Bulma-“were here anyway so just enjoy yourself (they pull into a parking area outside a huge building and in front of them are Goku and Chi-chi) Goku-“HEY Bulma, Vegeta, you got the message after all” Vegeta-(getting out of the car) “I had hoped it would get lost in the mail” Goku-“aw come on spoilsport, lighten up” Vegeta-“I’ll lighten up when I see that pompous jerk roast on a stake in my back yard”
(They all walk together towards the front entrance, when the doors open a thousand reporters suddenly surround them all)
Mr Satan-“THERE THEY ARE FOLKS, THE TRUE HEROES” Vegeta/Goku/Bulma/Chi-Chi-“huh” Vegeta-“what’s this about Satan” Mr Satan-“didn’t you get my message” Goku-(pulling out the message from his pocket) “umm, meet me at Satan studios 1 o’clock love Satan” Mr Satan-(looking embarrassed) “hahahaha yes that one, but that’s not what I meant, you see……. (Goes over to Vegeta, looks back towards the crowd) HEY GIVE US SOME ROOM WILL YA!! (Crowd leaves) you see, I’ve been thinking” Vegeta-“did it hurt” Bulma-“must have” Mr Satan-“yeah actually it did, well you see I’ve been thinking its time I stopped accepting all the glory” Goku-“glory, you mean you don’t like that with your turkey” Chi Chi-“ugh, husbands!” Vegeta-“that’s gravy stupid! Glory is when you get praised for something you did, and enjoy it” Mr Satan-“well anyhow that’s why I’ve arranged this little get together, to show the world how glorious you guys are, so what do you say we go through there and you can all greet your new fans” Vegeta-“hmm (thinks about it) no thanks” Mr Satan-“huh, why not” Vegeta-“because, I like what I am, I don’t need anymore fame, I’m happy living on earth thank you” (Bulma smiles slightly) Goku-(to Vegeta) “come on Vegeta, how many times have we saved the universe and not get a thank you” Vegeta-“as a matter of fact it was three” Goku-“exactly, so why don’t we just go in their and enjoy ourselves” Vegeta-“humph, fine” Mr Satan-“great, right this way, the press is waiting”
(Mr Satan leads them through a few doors into a huge corridor filled with flashing lights and fast talkers, he leads them on to the platform in the middle of the room, Vegeta doesn’t look thrilled, Goku is eating it up, Mr Satan heads towards the microphone while the others sit behind him)
Mr Satan-“ALRIGHT, now I don’t wanna keep you all too long, I’ve got training to be done after all, so lets get right down to business, its time I shared a secret with you, you see………uh…….well you see, over the years I’ve been telling you that I single handedly defeated the great cell and Majin Buu, but the truth is that’s all a big lie” (The room gasps in shock) “actually I had a little help, now I’d like to bring forward two young men who….assisted me in the fight over evil, come on up guys (Goku and Vegeta step forward) would you two like to say a few words” Vegeta-“yes, I would indeed, (steps to the mike) fellow earthlings, I am Vegeta, prince of all……..uh scratch that, I am the strongest warrior on the planet” Goku-(budging in) “of course not as strong as Mr Satan here, right” Vegeta-“humph, yes of course not as strong as him, and it was a real…….Kakarot would you like to take it from here” Goku-(stepping to the mike) “yes, it’s been a real honour fighting alongside Mr Satan, not only……..” Mr Satan-(cutting in) “yes, yes we all know how great I am but the real people were here to give praise to today is you two, so it is my great pleasure to present you two with, the key to the city and your own personal hotline, which will be contacted in the unlikely event that I will require your help (hands the keys over plus a couple of cell phones) GIVE THEM A ROUND OF APPLAUSE” (The crowd cheers for the two super saijans) Goku-“wow, our own hotline, I hope it doesn’t singe my pocket” Vegeta-(to himself) “man he’s a moron”
Narrator-“so the great Mr Satan has finally decided to hang up his obnoxious crown and accept help from the ones who can really make a difference, little do they know this is only the start of a new adventure for all of them, THIS IS SAIJAN RE-UNION!!!
(The crowd keep cheering on as the two just stand and take the applause, the day continues with them shaking hands with the crowd and taking pictures, the day ends with them heading into their cars and driving off for another adventure)
END OF PART ONE
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Post by gokuromario on Dec 10, 2004 17:02:03 GMT -5
PART 2 – 3 years later
(three years later, gohan and videl are walking down the street together, gohan wearing glasses and videl with longer hair, the scene shows videl looking through a window at a beautiful wedding dress, the pair going into a restaurant and gohan getting soup spilt all over him, videl laughs, the next shot shows them both sitting down to dinner while gohan searches through his pockets)
videl-"something wrong gohan" Gohan-"uh nothing, just......searching my (struggles to get his hand free) d-d*mn p-Pockets (gets free) whew" videl-"i told you not to wear those, there too tight for you" gohan-"hey these are the trousers i wore on the first day we met remember" videl-(thinking) "wow, it is, i didnt realise that" gohan-(gulps, looks embarrased) videl, there's something i've been wanting to ask you" videl-"well if you need another loan i'm sure my father......" gohan-"no not that" videl-"then what (notices his hand is clenched) ohhhh.....is this what i think it is (trying to sound sympathetic)" gohan-"yep, saw how happy you were looking through that store window so (holds out a small box) i got you something" videl-"oh gohan, you didnt have to drag me out here to show me that" gohan-"huh, i didnt" videl-"of course the answer is yes" gohan-"wuh, oh no, you've got it all wrong this is just a pair of earings" videl-"huh (gohan opens the box, the items inside is indeed earings, videl looks disapointed) oh......well......thanks" gohan-"you didnt let me finish (videl looks up surprised) this is just a pair of earings, (holds out his other hand) this is a ring!" (videl smiles, gohan opens the box to reveal a beatiful ring, he places it on her finger and the two embrace each other)
(the scene splits to a later spot of the night where it cuts through several shots of people being told of the announcement, the shot ends with it zooming in on goku's home)
chi chi-(hugging the two) "i always knew you two were meant for each other, i just never thought it would happen so soon" gohan-"mom, its just an event" chi chi-"just an event, this isnt just an event gohan this is a wedding we need to plan this out, (runs out of the room) wheres the phonebook!" gohan-"hehehe, my mother" (the door swings open, gohan and videl look round in glee) videl-"ah, theres your dad" (goku enters with goten, the two are grabbing each others cheek and screaming, goten is now 11 years old with much longer hair) goku-"LET GO OF MY CHEEK" goten-"YOU LET GO OF MINE" goku-"YOUR THE ONE WHO BLEW IT UP" goten-"IT WAS TRUNKS IDEA" Both-“GRRRR (both tug tighter on each others cheeks, notices videl and gohan and let go) Goku-“oh hi guys, long time no see” Gohan-(looks embarrased, shuts his eyes in disbelief) “why me” Goku-“what’s the occasion” Videl-“well, gohan and I have decided to get married” Goku-“oh, that’s great, you must be really excited” Gohan-“we are” Goku-“so when’s the wedding” Videl-“uh, we haven’t really decided on that yet (chi-chi comes rushing through)” Chi-chi-“WHAT YOU HAVENT DECIDED WHAT ARE YOU THINKING YOU NEED TO DECIDE RIGHT AWAY” Gohan-(grabbing her shoulders) “mom calm down” Chi-chi-“how can I calm down when my sons wedding is in jeopardy” Gohan-“but its not in jeopardy” Chi-chi-“oh nonsense (she goes and grabs a little notebook) hmm” Goku-“uh, chi-chi what are you doing” Chi-chi-“well i’m trying to work out a suitable date for the wedding that’s all” Goku-“but shouldn’t they be……” Chi-chi-(gets hysterical) “GOT IT, (rushes to videl) oh videl your going to be the most beautiful bride ever, I’m so happy for you” Videl-“uh, thank you I guess” Chi-chi-“I’ve worked it all out, if I can just convince my father to let you have a wedding just like ours in his castle then I can pencil your big day in for next week how does that sound” Videl-“um, great” (sarcastically) Goku-“chi-chi I think we should let them decide there own date (goku pats his hand on her shoulder and in a blinding speed chi-chi appears behind goku, its so fast it’s as if she hadn’t moved, she grabs his ear and starts yelling” Chi-chi-“HOW CAN YOU SAY SUCH A THING, THERES NO TIME LIKE THE PRESENT WHEN ITS OUR BABIES OWN WEDDING TAKING PLACE AND I DON’T THINK I HAVE TO STRESS TO YOU HOW QUICKLY OUR WEDDING WAS OVER AND DONE WITH DO I SO I DON’T WANT YOU COMPLAINING ABOUT BLAH, BLAH, BLAH, BLAH, BLAH, BLAH, BLAH, BLAH, BLAH, BLAH, BLAH, BLAH, BLAH, BLAH, BLAH, BLAH ,BLAH!!!” Goku-“yes dear, no dear OOOOHHHHHH!!!!!!” Gohan-(looks on in horror) “h-how about w-we leave r-right now” Goten-(reaching up to gohan, he becomes excited) “hey gohan is videl gonna be my new sister am I gonna have a new playmate, can trunks come over to visit, are you still gonna come train with me, what would you like as a wedding gift (Gotens voice goes into a complete blur as gohan just stands there looking dazed) Videl-(to herself) “wow, I wonder how my dad’ll take the news”
(Later on the phone, we see Hercules dressing room door) Mr Satan-“wonderful news sweetheart (we see him pigging out on a short-cake, his hair is slightly receded, Buu sits alone in the corner playing with bee) so when’s the big day (pause) what next week, (sarcastically) that’ll only give me enough time to invite half the world, hahahaha just kidding, my little girl getting married how great Videl-(calling from goku’s phone) “I’m glad you see it from our point of view dad, its really no big deal” Mr Satan-“no big deal, it’s not everyday you get married, well I better go, important things to work out, HEY DON’T EAT THAT MAJIN BUU THAT THINGS PRICELESS, I better go, bye bunny” Videl-“bye dad (hangs up) so what should we do now” Gohan-“look for a dress” Videl-“don’t be silly your moms gonna lend me hers” Gohan-“how come” Videl-“well she said to me a while back that if I ever get married I can borrow her dress” Gohan-“oh, well I guess that only leaves the catering, although I don’t think 60 pounds of every beef dish will be enough to feed just the three saijans in this family” Videl-(hugging him) “oh gohan this is gonna be so perfect” (gohan says to himself, I hope so)
END OF PART 2
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Post by gokuromario on Dec 10, 2004 17:02:30 GMT -5
PART 3 – THE BIG DAY
(Its gohan and videl’s wedding day, the audience is in the alter, Vegeta and Bulma watch on from two computer screens attached to two robots because unfortunately they were on a cruise at that time, but even more unfortunate is that trunks is there and he starts playing around with goten, trunks is now 12, his hair now hangs down to the length future trunks had, goku stands in front of a mirror trying to straighten his tie, and videl comes in all dressed)
Goku-“oh, hi videl, what’s up” Videl-(walking over to him) “oh its nothing, I’m just nervous that’s all” Goku-“well we all get like that” Videl-“no it’s not that, I’m worried that I won’t be a good wife” Goku-“you’ll be fine, besides if you don’t do alright in the first year I know this great old lady that chi-chi’s been telling me about who teaches you how to become a better housewife, I think she said her name was octagon” Videl-“you really think I’ll be ok” Goku-“with gohan around I don’t see how you can go wrong” Videl-“thanks, that means a lot to me, thank you (hugs him) I feel a lot better now (videl reaches up and kisses his right cheek then his left then on the lips, goku moves her back)” Goku-“hey, leave some kisses for gohan alright” Videl-(looks a little embarrased) “oh, sorry, I get a little touchy when I’m this happy, how do I look, I think I overdid the lipstick” Goku-“well, you look beautiful (she blushes) now get going, you’ve got a wedding to go to remember” Videl-“right” (starts to walk away, she starts thinking to herself) “god he’s gorgeous, no wonder gohans so handsome, I still don’t know how I got my looks”
(The scene ends and goes on to the alter, gohan is already standing there with goku and chi-chi beside him)
Gohan-(notices his fathers mouth) “uh, dad why are you wearing lipstick” Goku-“oh (rubs his lips) that right…..well you see” (the doors open and videl begins to come into view, Mr Satan leads her down the isle as the music plays) Mr Satan-(to videl) “you look just like your mother” Videl-(to her father) “thank you, who was my mother anyway, I don’t think I ever asked you” Mr Satan-“sigh, well she was the only woman that ever really loved me (videl looks intrigued) she never cared about my fame, my fortune or anything, she saw the real me, now its just hookers and cars, nothing but hookers and cars (videl smiles)”
(They get to the front of the alter, videl hugs him and he goes and stands beside goku as videl goes to gohan)
Mr Satan-(looking at goku) “hey, is that my daughters lipstick on your cheek” Goku-(to Mr Satan, whispering) “she gave me a kiss on the cheek alright, no big deal”
(The scene zooms to the point where the pair are about to say I do)
Priest-“and do you Gohan, take Videl to be your lawfully wedded wife” Gohan-(prepares to speak, as he opens his mouth, above the clouds a black figure begins to form, goten turns and looks, he becomes fixated on the figure which at a huge speed begins to increase in size, all voices and actions from now on are in slow motion) ………I………….. (He prepares to say do when points upwards goten) Goten-“LOOK OUT”
(in slow motion everyone turns around, in a few short moments the entire room seems to explode and the remains of the building fly through the church, goku leaps up and creates an energy ball which surrounds them all, the huge figure which once flew through the air now bounces across the ground onto a nearby field, the entire roof of the church is gone, the speed of speech and action resumes as normal now)
Mr Satan-(looks around) “THERE (points)”
(Everyone turns round to see the large object lying in a huge home made crater)
Videl-“is it a comet” Goku-“no, it’s a ship” Gohan-(realisation dawns on him) “dad that looks like Freiza’s ship!” Goku-“impossible, it couldn’t be him (looks round) VEGETA (notices that the place where both robots stood is now covered in rubble, goku searches through it and finds Vegeta’s still intact) are you alright” Vegeta-“I did get a scare, but my auto droid seems fine, screens a little fuzzy though” Goku-“good, and Bulma” (her head appears on the screen) Bulma-“I’m fine, what was that” Gohan-“it looked like some sort of ship, I’m not sure but it looks exactly like Freiza’s” Vegeta-“impossible, Freiza’s dead, take a closer look” Goku-“alright, I’ll go take a look, gohan stay here (goku flies off with Vegeta’s droid in his arms, he flies closer to the ship, stops short of it) wow, this is a big ship” Vegeta-“I-I don’t believe it, it is his ship”
(Goku flies down and searches for an opening, stops searching when he notices strange writing on the side of the vessel)
Goku-“huh what’s that, (looks closer) Vegeta, I think I’ve found some kind of password, or maybe its just a name, I’m not sure, can you take a look” (holds the droid up to the writing, Vegeta’s screen is very fuzzy, but we see Vegeta’s face beginning to turn from annoyed to shocked in an instant) “well, what does it say” Vegeta-“I-I-I, I don’t believe it, that’s Saijan vocabulary” Goku-“what, did you say Saijan” Vegeta-“yes, my visors a little fuzzy but I definitely think its in Saijan, (looks closer) it sa-a-a-a-a-a…… (His screen cuts out) “ Goku-“Vegeta (holding the droid to his face) Vegeta”
END OF PART 3
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Post by gokuromario on Dec 10, 2004 17:03:55 GMT -5
PART 4 – IT CAN’T BE
(Final part, Vegeta and Bulma are relaxing on a cruise ship, this scene enters just seconds after Vegeta got cut off)
Vegeta-“BLAST IT” (thrusts his hand softly against the table) Bulma-“calm down Vegeta, I’m sure I can get the connection back up and running, just give me a few seconds (works away at her computer trying to hack into the system)” Vegeta-(pause, to himself) “it can’t be (to Bulma) Bulma, do you remember the day when trunks first arrived, he destroyed Freiza in an instant right, well how much of a chance is there that he’s still alive?” Bulma-(working away) “oh about 1 in a zillion, besides don’t forget your super Saijan 2 so Freiza wouldn’t stand a chance, quit worrying” Vegeta-(sitting down) “humph, actually I was getting kind of excited, getting to challenge Freiza one last time, and make him pay for what he did to me” Bulma-(computer goes dead, she hits the keys) “darn I can’t seem to restore the image, looks like were stranded” Vegeta-(pause, looks up to the sky) “oh well, I’m sure Kakarot can handle it anyway (he speaks in a disapointed yet happy voice) lets just enjoy ourselves” Bulma-“what, don’t you wanna check it out” Vegeta-“of course, but I’ve got other things to worry about, besides, I finally realised 3 years ago that I’m not as strong as I think” Bulma-(looks confused) “but, you’re Vegeta, I don’t understand” Vegeta-(he sits, down, we see a high low angle view of the sky) “it’s a long story” (minutes later his phone suddenly starts to ring, he picks it up and answers) “hello Satan, what is it” Mr Satan-(voice) “Vegeta, theres no doubt in my mind that you saw exactly what happened am I right” Vegeta-“yeah so” Mr Satan-“so, what you mean so, get down here right away and check it out” Vegeta-“I’m busy leave me alone” Mr Satan-“either you come down here now or I’ll send a chopper over to pick you up, it’s your call, either way your getting over here and that’s final” Vegeta-(getting frustrated) “FINE, if it’ll shut you up you worthless piece of cowardly garbage then I’ll come over there and save the day for you once again” Mr Satan-“great, Satan out” (Vegeta hangs up, and crushes his phone to dust) Vegeta-(gets up and starts to circle furiously) “JESUS CHRIST, WHAT DOES HE EXPECT FROM ME, EVERY TIME THAT ASSHOLE SEES HIS SHADOW IT’S ALWAYS THE PHONE, ALWAYS THE GOD d*mn PHONE, WHAT THE f**k IS WRONG WITH THESE PEOPLE CANT THEY JUST LEAVE ME ALONE RRRRRRGGGGGHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!” Bulma-(to herself) “at least he’s back to normal” Vegeta-(looks to Bulma) “Bulma, I have to leave, I hope you understand” Bulma-“sure, just be back here before limbo lessons” Vegeta-(starts running towards the front of the ship) “I’ll get Kakarot to bring me back if I get lost ok” Bulma-“OK”
(Vegeta flies off towards the destination, Bulma is left sulking in her chair as everyone on board looks on in horror)
Vegeta-(flying across the ocean 30 minutes later) “now where is Kakarot, I cant sense a thing out here, I’ll try gohan (concentrates, gets a reading) there, not far from here” (zooms to the left, the scene splits to where goku and gohan are standing along with the entire audience of the wedding and even a couple of news reporters)
Mr Satan-(to the reporters) “look you don’t really need to be here, this is top secret stuff for crying out lo….HEY THERE HE IS (everyone looks up to see Vegeta flying through the air, he leaps through the air and to the ground) Vegeta-(to Mr Satan) “lets make this quick, I haven’t got all day” Goku-“over here Vegeta (goku waves, Vegeta walks towards the vessel, stares upwards, then back to gohan and goku) we figure its some kind of password because nothing we do seems to be able to open it, so that’s why we called you, well, what do you make of it” Vegeta-“well for one thing it’s definitely in Saijan text” Gohan-“what could this mean” Vegeta-(to gohan) “it means we’re either about to be completely ambushed by false pretenders, or somehow part of our race survived and are now here for some reason to chat” Goku-“let’s hope it’s the other thing, can you read it” Vegeta-(smiles) “Kakarot, I may have been gone from my planet for so long but I think I can remember a few words of our old lingo” Gohan-“go ahead then” Vegeta-“well, it’s not just one word, it’s an entire paragraph” Goku-“a whole paragraph, you think whoever wrote this didn’t want to be found out just yet” Vegeta-“maybe, (begins to read the words printed, reads it out loud, the camera men close in on him) THOU HAST STUMBLED UPON A VESSEL OF NO LIMITATIONS, ONLY HE WHO HAS RECEIVED KNOWLEDGE OF THE SAIJAN TEXT MAY ENTER, IF THOU BE TRUE TO THY WORDS AND SPEAK WITH THE TONGUE OF A FELLOW OR OF A ROYAL BLOOD, MAY SPEAK THE WORD WHICH WILL GRANT THEE PATRONAGE AND SOLITUDE, THE WORD IS………TURNIP!”
(A rumble begins to fill the air, suddenly the writing on the ship begins to move, Vegeta and co jump back and discover that the ship is opening a secret compartment, as the huge draw bridge like hatch begins to move a light begins to form and when the hatch comes half way down a blinding flash of light appears and lasts for no more than 10 seconds, all try to shield their eyes from the light but discover that the light is not really blinding but just glowing, Vegeta, goku and gohan look on in amazement, a dark figure begins to form inside the ship, when the hatch fully opens the dark form begins to move it steps 4 paces until its entire body can be seen in front of the light, the figure reveals itself to be a hooded man, caped and wearing Saijan armour, Vegeta’s eyes adjust to the light and he looks on)
Vegeta-(shock dawns his face) “HUH (the figure begins to move forward down a flight of steps) IT…….C-C-CANT……..B-B-B-BEEE!!!!! IMPOSSIBLE (the hooded mans eyes can be seen through his mask, Vegeta stares at the eyes, fixated on them, his eyes are drawn towards the mans, he tries to speak) F-F-F…….(Vegeta’s eyes begin to tear up slightly, he blinks and looks again) FATHER!!!!!!!!”
END OF PART 4 – END OF EPISODE 1
WELL THATS THE END OF THE FIRST EPISODE, I HOPE YOU ALL ENJOYED IT, SORRY THAT ITS A BIT LONG BUT I WORK BEST WITH A SCRIPT MODE AND I TRIED TO KEEP IT AS SHORT AS I COULD, THE NEXT EPISODE WILL TAKE PLACE SHORTLY SO ENJOY
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SockPerson
Super Saiyan 2
Where is my mind?
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Post by SockPerson on Dec 10, 2004 23:02:34 GMT -5
Oohhh this one is awesome. You really know these characters well. Hm...I liked it all. Ok I didn't get the glory/gravy bit lol. But the rest I could actually see as an episode. Nice work dude.
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King Friezan
Super Saiyan 2
"Veni Vidi Castratavi Illegitimos"
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Post by King Friezan on Dec 11, 2004 5:28:17 GMT -5
Permission to shout "Bravo" at an annoyingly loud volume?
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Post by gokuromario on Dec 11, 2004 6:59:56 GMT -5
thanks, its pretty easy to emulate the characters when you love the show, i'll start working on episode 2 soon
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Post by Bigbelly® on Dec 11, 2004 13:01:02 GMT -5
Awesome story man, you realy know how to write. It was funny picturing Mr Satan, teling that Goku and Vegeta were helping him ;D
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Post by gokuromario on Dec 11, 2004 14:43:17 GMT -5
i guess so, i wanted to keep this one as short as i could so i could concentrate on the main story, but i think its pretty good.
i think the first part could have been longer but you know hercule, when he gets into the act he doesnt like to be kept waiting
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Post by gokuromario on Dec 12, 2004 16:57:53 GMT -5
sorry for the double post but just to tell you that episode 2 is slightly longer script wise but dont worry thats just because it connects with the main story.
believe me as it goes on it should get much shorter, and i dont want to spoil anything but theres a part for trunks and goten in it too
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Post by BlackCoven on Dec 14, 2004 5:12:09 GMT -5
hookers and cars, rofl
good story man, keep it up
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Post by gokuromario on Dec 14, 2004 5:38:06 GMT -5
funny i dont remember mentioning those things, but i guess i dont remember a lot
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Post by Kuhan on Dec 16, 2004 18:48:53 GMT -5
PART 3 – THE BIG DAY (The scene ends and goes on to the alter, gohan is already standing there with goku and chi-chi beside him) Gohan-(notices his fathers mouth) “uh, dad why are you wearing lipstick” Goku-“oh (rubs his lips) that right…..well you see” (the doors open and videl begins to come into view, Mr Satan leads her down the isle as the music plays) Mr Satan-(to videl) “you look just like your mother” Videl-(to her father) “thank you, who was my mother anyway, I don’t think I ever asked you” Mr Satan-“sigh, well she was the only woman that ever really loved me (videl looks intrigued) she never cared about my fame, my fortune or anything, she saw the real me, now its just hookers and cars, nothing but hookers and cars (videl smiles)” (They get to the front of the alter, videl hugs him and he goes and stands beside goku as videl goes to gohan)
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Post by gokuromario on Dec 16, 2004 19:19:45 GMT -5
oh yeah, ;D ;D ;D man i am genious for that one
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Post by Trunksangel79 on Jan 12, 2005 1:34:24 GMT -5
Wow! That's pretty good writing!
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