Post by ~*Hieislove*~ on Mar 5, 2005 20:30:04 GMT -5
O.k I finally translated one of my fanfics and here it is, its not so good but please still read it and post your REPLY
Thank you...oh and my fanfics are usually in two parts
Kenshin was at his usual spot beneath the trees. The day was blazing with heat and Kenshin was drench in sweat. Kenshin glanced to the left and saw his sword tumble down. He quickly dash to get it. Kenshin didn’t like the idea of not having his sword with him. With all his battosai days, who knows what rumbles in the shadows around him? Kenshin stood up and took a few steps forwards when he heard his name whispered out. He turned and saw an old man standing there in front of him. The man was holding a long rolled up paper in the grip of his hand. Kenshin’s eyes shifted up and down on the man. Kenshin stood his ground. Even if this man looks like he couldn’t hurt a fly, Kenshin learned from past experience, trust no one. Kenshin rotated to the right a little bit.
The man smiled at how prepared Kenshin was. “I have found one. Finally my journey is at an end.” The elderly mad walked in circles around Kenshin; where ever the man went the handle of Kenshin’s sword followed. The man glanced how Kenshin kept at ease, but equipped as well. The man took one step forward and was greeted with the tip of Kenshin’s sword. The man tilted his head back to avoid the sharp edge of the killer weapon. The man held his hand up; Kenshin budged to the right and stood at alleviate on his right foot. The man plummet the rolled paper on the floor. The man gazed into Kenshin’s bitter stare. The man smiled softly but then his smile revolved to a frown when Kenshin didn’t pick the paper up. “Aren’t you going to pick it up young man?”
Kenshin smirked. “No, I am not. What is your, is yours, and you protect it. You drop it; you shall be the one to pick it up.” The man was shocked, the man beamed with a sigh of relief. “Yes, I have found the one.” The man turned his back to Kenshin and started to walk. The cynical Kenshin turned to the more innocence and fastidious Kenshin. Kenshin kneeled down and grabbed the paper off the floor then waved his hand. “My elder you forgot this.” The old man turned in joy. “Respect for your seniors as well. You’re perfect. Keep it young man; it’s a token for my appreciation.” The man walked off into the dark.
Kenshin stared at the piece of paper in his palm. Kenshin assuaged his back and glanced at a spot on the tree where he can sit down and respite. Kenshin walked over to the shady tree area and sat down. He liberated a sigh of relief. Kenshin gripped the paper tighter. “Who was that man? And what did he mean, he finally found the one. Where are we in, the matrix?” Kenshin kicked back and rested his head on a branch near him. Kenshin twirled the paper in his hand. Kenshin then played with the corners. “Ah what the hell.” Kenshin ripped the seal and let the paper release open in his hand, it was a map.
“A map, what's it for.” Kenshin scanned the paper, it was in some code. Kenshin hissed at the unknown words and symbols that laid in front of his eyes. “d*mn stupid crappy letters” Kenshin scold at himself for not understanding it at first hand. Then Kenshin exam the map with more effort. He noted that the map was old. He then glanced at a drawn black circle and with two little poles on the right side. “Well, I know that place, it’s the old well.”
Kenshin look across the field to where he saw the well at a mere glimpse. Kenshin decide to go out and see this old well. “Maybe it will explain the map more.” Kenshin stood and walked onward to the well. When he arrived he step on the rims of the old monument. He glimpsed down and perceived that the well was empty of water. Kenshin shrugged his face. “What a useless well.”
Thank you...oh and my fanfics are usually in two parts
Kenshin was at his usual spot beneath the trees. The day was blazing with heat and Kenshin was drench in sweat. Kenshin glanced to the left and saw his sword tumble down. He quickly dash to get it. Kenshin didn’t like the idea of not having his sword with him. With all his battosai days, who knows what rumbles in the shadows around him? Kenshin stood up and took a few steps forwards when he heard his name whispered out. He turned and saw an old man standing there in front of him. The man was holding a long rolled up paper in the grip of his hand. Kenshin’s eyes shifted up and down on the man. Kenshin stood his ground. Even if this man looks like he couldn’t hurt a fly, Kenshin learned from past experience, trust no one. Kenshin rotated to the right a little bit.
The man smiled at how prepared Kenshin was. “I have found one. Finally my journey is at an end.” The elderly mad walked in circles around Kenshin; where ever the man went the handle of Kenshin’s sword followed. The man glanced how Kenshin kept at ease, but equipped as well. The man took one step forward and was greeted with the tip of Kenshin’s sword. The man tilted his head back to avoid the sharp edge of the killer weapon. The man held his hand up; Kenshin budged to the right and stood at alleviate on his right foot. The man plummet the rolled paper on the floor. The man gazed into Kenshin’s bitter stare. The man smiled softly but then his smile revolved to a frown when Kenshin didn’t pick the paper up. “Aren’t you going to pick it up young man?”
Kenshin smirked. “No, I am not. What is your, is yours, and you protect it. You drop it; you shall be the one to pick it up.” The man was shocked, the man beamed with a sigh of relief. “Yes, I have found the one.” The man turned his back to Kenshin and started to walk. The cynical Kenshin turned to the more innocence and fastidious Kenshin. Kenshin kneeled down and grabbed the paper off the floor then waved his hand. “My elder you forgot this.” The old man turned in joy. “Respect for your seniors as well. You’re perfect. Keep it young man; it’s a token for my appreciation.” The man walked off into the dark.
Kenshin stared at the piece of paper in his palm. Kenshin assuaged his back and glanced at a spot on the tree where he can sit down and respite. Kenshin walked over to the shady tree area and sat down. He liberated a sigh of relief. Kenshin gripped the paper tighter. “Who was that man? And what did he mean, he finally found the one. Where are we in, the matrix?” Kenshin kicked back and rested his head on a branch near him. Kenshin twirled the paper in his hand. Kenshin then played with the corners. “Ah what the hell.” Kenshin ripped the seal and let the paper release open in his hand, it was a map.
“A map, what's it for.” Kenshin scanned the paper, it was in some code. Kenshin hissed at the unknown words and symbols that laid in front of his eyes. “d*mn stupid crappy letters” Kenshin scold at himself for not understanding it at first hand. Then Kenshin exam the map with more effort. He noted that the map was old. He then glanced at a drawn black circle and with two little poles on the right side. “Well, I know that place, it’s the old well.”
Kenshin look across the field to where he saw the well at a mere glimpse. Kenshin decide to go out and see this old well. “Maybe it will explain the map more.” Kenshin stood and walked onward to the well. When he arrived he step on the rims of the old monument. He glimpsed down and perceived that the well was empty of water. Kenshin shrugged his face. “What a useless well.”