talk about saijan reunion

[gokuromario]

i've noticed a bunch of people do these kind of threads before so i thought i'd try it out, so lets talk about saijan reunion, which parts you found confusing, which parts needed improving, anything to help me out and to help yourself out.

so talk about saijan reunion, if you dont, thats ok, i'll just send a bunch of threatening hate mail to you all ;D ;D ;D

[Trunksangel79]

I think saijan reunion was an awesome series. Your series Gokuromario actually has helped me become better at writing.You maybe wondering how.Like I said before you put alot of details in your story and that has helped me with my detailing in my stories.I would had never guessed that reading somebody else's story could help with your writing.Thanks for writing this series Gokuromario! ;D It was a great story.I didn't get confused with none of it.I'm sad that it's over,but I have really enjoyed reading it.Great job! I look forward to reading more of your stories.

[gokuromario]

thanks for the compliment, and i'm happy to hear that i've helped you, i think i could have been more detailed if a tried but for what its worth i got everything i wanted out.

[King Friezan]

ummmm....I don't really have anything to comment on. It was a good story. I can't really put it any simpler than that. I just hope my stories I am working on turn out just as fine, because I ain't so great a writing stuff. But anyway, The story was good.

[TheDarkPrince]

It was a great series. I appreciate that you used my suggestion for name for the the new super saiyan level. One thing though. I was a little confused on the whole thing about the infidels and so forth. I never fully understood what happened when.

[gokuromario]

to tell you the truth i had no idea where i was going with it.

basically i was trying to make it that turnip retrieved other saijans from other planets to make it look like he was fulfilling jacanas desires but he really wasnt, they probably all lived in harmony at first, the infidels were a group of highly intelligent saijans who obviously never knew about the whole freiza situation, they were forced to become slaves to a fake king and were used for there advanced technology skills.

turnip forced them to produce field generators and energy transferrence machines, they found that the planet they lived on doesnt revolve around its own orbit so it had to be created by these generators but what they didnt know was that the generators were just a ploy to raise turnips own power.

i dont know, it's hard to explain your own stuff.