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Post by Son Goshin on Mar 2, 2004 22:09:04 GMT -5
if i had the chance, i'd vote vegeta president of the US as well as president here! could you imagine vegeta being president of the US? (of course that would be only in a world where anime characters come to life ;D )
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Post by Son Goshin on Apr 3, 2005 13:20:10 GMT -5
yea, i was a little confused by it. like why is piccolo evil now? i'll keep reading to see how it unravels
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Post by Son Goshin on Mar 30, 2005 13:37:54 GMT -5
nice job bob. i like that little kuwabara special too ;D
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Post by Son Goshin on Mar 25, 2005 17:55:54 GMT -5
wow, this is gettin pretty good man, the suspense keeps rising.
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Post by Son Goshin on Mar 24, 2005 20:07:17 GMT -5
nice chapter, it'll be interesting seeing what oni does
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Post by Son Goshin on Mar 19, 2005 22:21:37 GMT -5
so far i think it's pretty well laid out. keep up the good work
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Post by Son Goshin on Feb 25, 2005 10:41:29 GMT -5
well, right now i'm writing my fan fic, DragonBall After Future. i still got plenty of ideas for it, so it'll be around for a while. ;D as for your fan-fic schmee, i'd like to see another fan fic like your krillin one. maybe, you could make a story about an alternate reality where krillin marries marron instead of 18. i think that'd be interesting
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Post by Son Goshin on Mar 26, 2005 21:18:18 GMT -5
dude this is an aweosme story! i always wanted to know what happens in trunk's timeline. nice work
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Post by Son Goshin on Apr 14, 2005 18:19:17 GMT -5
i like it, especially the way you used descriptive words, that was pretty good. ;D byt the way, who did you say i was again, i can't remember
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Post by Son Goshin on Mar 17, 2005 11:11:14 GMT -5
it's pretty good, a lot of blood in it. i'm interseted in seeing who adonus's god is in the next part
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Post by Son Goshin on Feb 24, 2005 21:20:05 GMT -5
i think it's pretty good. i'm not one for interpreting poetry well, but the ending caught me when it was the speaker's own blood
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Post by Son Goshin on Feb 3, 2005 20:13:42 GMT -5
dude, i gotta say, sweet chapter! ;D finally got time to catch up and everything this story is great. and i think i know where you got mephisto's name. correct me if i'm wrong, but it's a shortened name for 'mephistopholes.' i know this becuase when i was looking for a name for dabura's son in my fanfic, i considered using that when i was looking for names associated with 'demon'.
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Post by Son Goshin on Apr 17, 2005 17:16:46 GMT -5
attention all DBAF readers! with the fourm now moving, i will continue posting my story on the new site. this is mostly for all you unregistered guests who read the story. here's a link to the new site: s10.invisionfree.com/DBZ_Live_Movie_Forum/so from now on, starting with chapter 44, i will be posting all chapters of DBAF there. for those of you unregistered with the foum, consider registering on the new one, and continue to enjoy DBAF ;D
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Post by Son Goshin on Apr 16, 2005 11:21:43 GMT -5
Last time on DragonBall AF, Goku Jr’s fight with Beelzebub continued. As the battle went on, Goku Jr became more and more consumed with revenge and in a rage tore off the demon’s arm! Will cooler head’s prevail? Find out today!
In the depths of Hell, Son Goku and Bebi’s fight had undergone a slight pause. Son Goku had just tried out his new technique, the Kamehameha times 20, on Bebi. “Maybe this will be an interesting fight Bebi,” commented Son Goku. “Grrrrrr,” growled Bebi, “you disgusting Saiyan! Enough of this! I’ll rip your head off! HA!” Bebi started to run towards Son Goku, but he jumped into the air just before being speared by Bebi. Bebi took off into the air and chased after the Saiyan he loathed. “Special Beam Cannon!” he yelled as he fired the stolen move. “That bastard,” muttered Son Goku. He didn’t have enough time to move and he crossed his arms over his chest to block the beam. Unfortunately, his arms began searing with pain and before he realized it, Bebi was right in his face. “TAKE THIS!” And with that, Bebi sucker punched Son Goku in the face sending him flying backwards. Bebi flew after him and stopped him in mid-air by grabbing his tail. “What would happen if I tore this tail off monkey?!” he screamed. “DON’T!” bellowed Son Goku. Bebi began pulling at the tail until Son Goku finally spun around and clocked Bebi in the face. Then he proceeded in giving Bebi a flurry of punches and kicks ending with a powerful sweep that sent the Tuffle to the floor. Son Goku floated down and now stood over Bebi. Bebi’s breathing had become heavier. “Don’t try moving, or I will finish you,” said Son Goku. “No you won’t,” said Bebi. “You can’t bring yourself to do it because I’m in Piccolo’s body. Heh-heh-heh.” Son Goku knew this was true and could only look on in anger as Bebi slowly stood up. “I’m not done yet, there’s still fight left in- *HUCK*”. Before he could even finish his sentence, Son Goku elbowed him in the gut causing blood to spew forth from his mouth. What’s going on?! thought Bebi, I shouldn’t be losing, not like this at least! It’s like I can’t tap into the Namek’s full power. But why not?! This symbiosis is supposed to be stronger, or have I miscalculated? “You are a pathetic soul Bebi,” announced Son Goku. “Now this is your last chance. Get out of Piccolo’s body, or I’ll blow through Piccolo’s stomach and take you out myself.” Bebi looked up in horror. Then is face turned into disgust. “Screw you!” he yelled and he spit in Son Goku’s face. “That’s it!” said Son Goku. He grabbed Bebi’s face and flung him into the air. He took a familiar pose and then jumped into the air. “SUPER DRAGON FIST!!!!” Son Goku’s fist began to glow yellow as he closed in on Bebi. I hope that Piccolo can survive this! thought Son Goku. And just as he was about to connect, a figure flew into his path and took the punch. “AAAAAAAACK!” A blinding light burst forth as Son Goku and Bebi fell back to the ground. When the light faded away on the ground next to Son Goku were Bebi and the half-mutilated body of another warrior. “CELL!” yelled Son Goku. Cell lay on the ground, a bloody heap, his entire torso and left side gone. “What have you done?!” “I’ve protected… my master,” muttered Cell. “I couldn’t just look on and see Lord Bebi finished by you Goku.” Then, Cell began to regenerate. His torso popped out first, then the rest of his upper body filled back out, his arm forming last. Son Goku walked right up to Cell’s face and looked him in the eye. “If you or anyone else interferes again I will blow you into oblivion,” sneered Son Goku. “And don’t you dare take this as a joke.” Cell stared at him for a moment, and without saying anything, he walked back into the crowd of entities watching the fight. Just as Son Goku was about to turn around and confront Bebi, he was met with a blow to the back of the head and was knocked to the ground. When he looked up, he saw it was Bebi. “Don’t underestimate me monkey!” he yelled. He began flinging ki blast after ki blast at Son Goku. The first few connected, but once Son Goku rose into the air, he began to dodge them with ease. Once the barrage let up, Bebi flew straight at him with his leg outstretched ready to plant it in Son Goku’s face. “HA!” Son Goku reacted in time and caught Bebi’s foot. “Heh,” he laughed, “have a nice flight.” And with that he started spinning Bebi round and round, and after a few seconds, he whipped him to the side. Bebi spun out of control and he forcefully hit the wall of the cavern and slumped to the ground. Son Goku then started charging up another attack. “KA-ME-HA…” Bebi seeing this thought fast and he put his hands on one another and quickly prepared his next attack. “MASENKO-HA!” Son Goku saw it coming and quickly fired his attack. The two beams were just about to collide when Bebi’s hands seemed to suddenly jerk to the left and cause the attack to move the other way missing Son Goku and his Kamehameha. “WHAT?!” he exclaimed in surprise. Son Goku took this as a moment to not waste and lunged at Bebi. He wrestled Bebi to the ground and both were struggling to get up off the ground first. “Grrrrrrrrrr,” growled Bebi as he tried to push Son Goku off of him. Just as Son Goku was about to punch Bebi in the face, something inside hi moved. “What?” exclaimed Son Goku and he suddenly jumped off of him. Bebi was now going into convulsions on the floor. His body began to tremble more and more as it seemed that something was traveling through his body. Then, Bebi started floating up, his back still perpendicular to the ground, making it seem like he wasn’t the one controlling the movement. Then, to the surprise of all that were watching, Bebi began to split in two. “AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!” screamed Bebi. An entire separate form was branching off from Bebi, and all Son Goku could do was look in horror. “What’s happening?” he wondered aloud. “Is this multi-form or something?” Finally, the split was complete and both bodies fell to the ground. It took Son Goku a second though to realize that both bodies looked different. “Oh my gosh!” he exclaimed. “Piccolo!” On the ground lay Bebi, still in the same form with the pale blue skin, but next to him was Piccolo. Both seemed to be unconscious. “Piccolo! Piccolo speak to me!” yelled Son Goku as he rushed to his ally’s side. Then, Piccolo began to stir. “Uhhhhh,” he moaned, “my aching head.” “You’re all right!” exclaimed Son Goku. “What happened though? How did… this happen.” Piccolo got up and looked down at the unmoving Bebi. “You forget,” he began, “Kami is inside of me. The past guardian of Earth had many safeguards on how not to become possessed. I may have looked it for a while, but I was gaining more and more control back the whole time. Him missing you with that Masenko was no coincidence, that was me.” “But how were you able to split like that?” asked Son Goku. “Well,” he continued, “once I was sure I was able to take control back, I used multi-form. So in essence, he is still inside me. We have to defeat him right now. Once we do, both of my bodies will rejoin and I’ll be back to normal. But if for some reason I’m defeated, both bodies will be absorbed into each other again, and Bebi will have total possession of me.” “BASTARDS!” yelled Bebi as he started to rise up. “This can’t be! We were supposed to have the strongest symbiosis ever!” Piccolo stared at him. “It was a good theory, it might’ve worked on another Namek. But I used to be the Guardian of the Earth. I know many tricks of the trade you could say.” “AAAAAAAAAAH!” screamed Bebi in a rage. “I’ll kill both of you!!” “That won’t be happening I think,” replied Piccolo calmly. “Now that we’ve split, our power has been cut in half. You don’t have a chance, against Goku at least. That’s why I’m going to finish this fight.” “Piccolo, no!” exclaimed Son Goku. “I’ll finish him right now, you won’t have to do anything.” “Stay out of it now Goku,” he retorted. “This fool had the nerves to try and take over my body. Well, I’m going to take it back. And now since our power levels are even, it should hopefully be a good fight. What do you say, Bebi?” “I say you’re going down Namek! HAAAAAAAAA!” *** Back on the Planet of the Kais, everyone there was still engrossed in watching Goku Jr’s fight with Beelzebub. “I still can’t believe what I’m seeing!” exclaimed Vegeta Jr. “How could Goku be so, brutal!” As the fight continued in the crystal ball, Goku Jr was still pummeling Beelzebub’s face and gut. “I have a bad feeling about this,” said Rou Dai. “Young Goku here could go insane from this. And it’s possible that this I still his match to lose.” “How can that be possible?” asked Gohan. “Just look at him!” “Yes,” replied Rou Dai, “but notice that Beelzebub is still taking it, he’s not dead yet. There may be more to him than we already know. If Goku doesn’t realize that there still might be something up his sleeve, he might find out the hard way. And lose.”
Rou Dai has explained what his bad feeling about the match is with Goku Jr and Beelzebub. Will Goku Jr come to his senses before it’s too late? And what about Piccolo? How will he fare in the fight against Bebi for control of his entire body back? Find out next time on DragonBall AF!
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Post by Son Goshin on Apr 14, 2005 9:47:55 GMT -5
yea, i like the fact that goku and vegeta jr were added in. it let us see the future of goku's family and how the world would be 100 years without him
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