Majunks
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Post by Majunks on Apr 14, 2005 8:51:02 GMT -5
Oh uh guys. Let next episode might be a bit diffrent. Actually they all might for a while. Just letting you know.
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Post by Majunks on Apr 4, 2005 9:07:31 GMT -5
There's now way Yusuke can win in this story is there? That's what I like to see, the hero in a consant strugle instead of always gaining some un imaginable power that makes it so he can blow up the planet in one touch. Keep it up Bob.
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Post by Majunks on Apr 15, 2005 9:34:51 GMT -5
Oh, is it DBZ the Musical? I'll check it out.
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Post by Majunks on Apr 14, 2005 9:06:01 GMT -5
Hey I'm really liking this Syxx , nice job And its good you and Gokuromario are teaming up, I was going to team up with someone but it didnt work out. You and JStarBob should team. If you did a Yuu-Yuu Movie Fic it would be awsome. Think aboot (South park movie Aboot) it. And Broly only being able to say Kakarot never gets old. Even though he can speak pretty well in the movies.
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Post by Majunks on Apr 8, 2005 9:21:01 GMT -5
If Raditz has no money, then how did he get the disquise kit? And why doesn't he just death threaten the sample hander outters? Oh wait, then it isn't funny. Okay what ever makes people laugh.
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Post by Majunks on Apr 5, 2005 9:39:43 GMT -5
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
SYXX! This is GOLD! To TOEI! We're making you a comedy writer!
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Post by Majunks on Mar 25, 2005 10:27:51 GMT -5
That was pretty funny.LMAO I love it. ;D Broly can come live at my house.LMAO ;D I was laughin my a** off too! Nice Syxx!
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Post by Majunks on Mar 24, 2005 11:34:21 GMT -5
Hey Syxx! glad to see ya again (I havn't seen you around in a while) Anyway This is real funny. I'm a comedy writer too ya know, I even have my own DBZ/GT sitcom about Marron, Krillin and 17 (It's called Krillin and Android 17, Yeah!) But that was a side note. Anyway a DBZ reality show should be pretty funny, like drawn together. I just need to know who Z and Onio are. I know Kurzia is Frieza's son but I don't know Neko Majin Z or Onio. (I wanted to involve Kurzia in my fic but I might need to know them first.) Okay thanks. And make sure the next episode is funny too.
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Post by Majunks on Mar 25, 2005 10:34:55 GMT -5
No, I mean the way you discribe it is kinda like a novel rather than a script but I see where you're coming from. I'm just saiyan that you should try an episode or two in narrative just to see how that works. You'd probably be a good novelist from the way you write but ultimately since your the author it's up to you and I'll still read anyway. Just a little food for thought.
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Post by Majunks on Mar 24, 2005 9:12:48 GMT -5
It looks like you guys are having fun. Oh yeah Goku, it sounds like the action in your parentasis isn't so much an action sequence of events, it's more like discription. It's good though, but maybe you should consider switching to a narrative form rather than script, in the next Saga of course.
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Post by Majunks on Mar 22, 2005 10:23:24 GMT -5
This was a little awkward and it moved a little faster, like you were in a hurry or out of characters for the post. But alteast you're consistant. You need a little work on time but the story line is suspenseful, keep it up Bob. Side Note: Where's Boatn? Is she still there?
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Post by Majunks on Mar 25, 2005 10:32:19 GMT -5
BOTAN! I've always wanted to see botan kick somones ass! ;D, she'd look good doin it to. (Make sure she's wearing the Saint Beast stuff and has the bat) Then I wanna see the fight with Kokugen, I've seen quite a few gravity users fight and those get repetative but time control is always interesting depending on how it works in the series.
side note: I'm assuming Yusuke and Kurama have lost some power but and Hiei and Kuwabara have been slowin it down for a while but are they all still gonna get back to class S or will there be something beyond S? (I like Powerlevels that's why I post mine at every fan fic I finish, if I finish)
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Post by Majunks on Mar 24, 2005 9:20:49 GMT -5
Wow JB, i'm glad to see Kuwabara is finally back in the running. At first i thought that he had lost his spirit sense but then you reveal that he was just messing. I'm glad you don't over pump up Yusuke like other people, when that happens Kuwabara, Hiei and Kurama's extreme power get overshadowed. Keep that up, although I thought just finding a random demon healer was a bit too easy, or was that just a transition? Because unless it was Yukina or Botan I doubt Yusuke would trust her, with a finger or not. Keep postin the Kuwabara episodes (Number one in my top three Yuu-yuu characters, right before Juri and Kuramama)
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Post by Majunks on Mar 22, 2005 10:26:30 GMT -5
Yeah, this is cool. Like I said before, the whole idea of making it so Goku, err sorry Kakarot is a villian like he was originally meant to be (As far as Raditz says) is great. You can do some great stuff with this story line. It's really open ended and could lead to several diffrent outcomes. It's kinda like a alternate timeline that Trunks and Gotenks can travel too with the victory cannon and time machine. I'm really excited about this.
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Post by Majunks on Mar 21, 2005 11:15:43 GMT -5
Gotcha Goku, Questions: 1: Could you PM me a powerlevel analis? I'd like to see that. 2: Will Krillin's ultimate technique be the Double Zanken or will he still make the Destructo Disk? 3: I'm assuming that Gohan won't exist for a while and that Vegeta and the other Saiyans will be introed later but they still make an appearance right? 4: Will Yamcha and Bulma stay together or will Vegeta still be Trunks' father? Cause I like the idea of Yamcha and Bulma stayin together, but I really want to see Gohan and Trunks back.
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