Majunks
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Post by Majunks on Mar 21, 2005 11:31:56 GMT -5
SHOT GUN! I see Kurama and Yusuke are getting back into it but with Kurama dying slowly, Kuwabara captured, Hiei controlled and Yusuke at his Dark Tourney power level things look pretty bleak. This is nice and suspenseful, just be sure to consider the Kurama empire idea. Hieislove: HA! Now it can work! His spirit sense is going out and he's weakened!
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Majunks
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Post by Majunks on Mar 21, 2005 11:36:32 GMT -5
Dont call me Hiei, its Hieislove, I hate when people call me Hiei , I'm not Hiei , I'm his love. I'm not going off, I'm giving him suggestions, its better then just saying "oh good" I would like someone to givve me suggestion then just "Good chapter" That's aside from the point... and it's a good thing that you give suggestions but the way you say things makes it sound like your trying to control the story. I know you aren't and I'm assuming that JB does to but still... Point of Rant: Try to be a little less dominant (That means put the whip away.) Thats becuz you dont read my story
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Majunks
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Post by Majunks on Mar 21, 2005 11:22:40 GMT -5
Hiei, you gotta stop goin off on people like that. let the man have his fan fic, we don't complain about yours. JB: Wait, I figured that hiei would be pullin the strings around there. But that is interesting. I'm glad we finally have Kurama vs. Hiei. I haven't read the next chapter and it probably explains it but: Does Kurama finally get to go Yoko again? And Kuwabara still has his dimesion sword right? That's pretty cool.
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Majunks
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Post by Majunks on Mar 21, 2005 11:08:39 GMT -5
Very good, I will still miss Gohan but having Kakarot invade is good. It's still suprising to have a fanfic of ANY DB series without Goku (excuse me, kakarot) as the Hero, but in mine Trunks is the hero. Of course I included Gohan so... Yeah. I'm lookin forward to episode 2
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Majunks
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Post by Majunks on Mar 18, 2005 10:28:48 GMT -5
A Dragonball Fan Fic? or is it Early DBZ? and Goku is the baddie in this one, this should become interesting. I've always wanted to see Tien and Krillin be the Heroes rather than Piccolo and Goku, of course I will miss Gohan... .
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Majunks
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Post by Majunks on Mar 18, 2005 9:44:02 GMT -5
So let me get this straight. Kuwabara's the Earth's detective, Hiei's gone away, Keiko left Yusuke, Kurama's lost it and Koenma's finally broken down and is calling upon the lazy ass Yusuke to hlp him fight again. This is lookin good so far Bob. The saga kinda sounds like a mix of the first case of Ghost Files and the Chapter Black. But the monsters are soundin pretty cool, as long as you make sure that Kuwabara has his Dimension Sword and Hiei's still fused with the Dragon i'll be happy, and continue to read.
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Majunks
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Post by Majunks on Mar 25, 2005 10:38:17 GMT -5
Yo-Yo! I just got this kickass idea for a DBZ Fan fic. You know how Vegeta, Raditz and Nappa were the only living Saiyans known to Frieza? (There were a few more living in secret but that has nothin to do with the story) Anyway I figured I could make a miniseries about Vegeta, Nappa and Raditz doing missions for Frieza before they invaded Earth. Wadaya think?
Side Note: I'll be the first to make a fic that doesn't involve Goku, Gohan or anyone else by the name of Son in anyway shape of form!
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Post by Majunks on Mar 18, 2005 10:21:06 GMT -5
Well as for me I'm gonna round out Yuu-Yuu-Ball DH, and continue DBV part time and go back to my roots as a comical writer. Good to hear your back with the writers Syxx.
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Post by Majunks on Mar 10, 2005 9:33:55 GMT -5
Umm.... Let's take Vegetron (Vegeta + Megatron) for example...Normally he looks just like Vegeta did when he first came to earth (Plus a Arm Cannon) and when he eventually gets gets reformated by X (I ain't blurting it out yet who is playing Unicron) he gets a different Armor, A new Arm Cannon, Ditches the scouter and gets green eyes(Lenses) and gets his "Hair" colored Gold. He also gets a small stump of beard( A' la Galvatron) and a Capital M on his forehead. In other words not Galvatron, But Majin Vegetron....And No, Unicron is NOT played by Bibidi, Babidi or Buu. And a whole lots of other stuff happens and it will also be a bit different than the Transformers Movie, But I'll keep in some major factors/Happenings. How could you not include Rodimus or Optimus PRime? What about Grimlock or Slag or Swoop or the other Dinobots! And you gotta have Starscream and Jazz!
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Post by Majunks on Mar 8, 2005 10:54:06 GMT -5
Dragon Former Z? A fusion of Transformers and Dragonball Z?
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Post by Majunks on Mar 7, 2005 9:25:56 GMT -5
She redifines Chaotic. And DBV is about Trunks' adventures in the Future after the defeat of the Androids. I have a few chapters posted on the Fan Fic Stories board (All under Dragonball V). Could ya read it and tell me what you think?
Side note: I'm working on a Dragonball Vs. Yuu-Yuu Hakusho Movie too. It's set right after the fight with Sensui and three months after King Piccolo, I'll have that up in a couple of days. (That's where you come in HL, I need you to help me out with some of the Yuu-Yuu moves, mainly for Genkai, Rinku and Botan [Yes Botan will fight: Botan Vs. Launch])
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Post by Majunks on Mar 1, 2005 10:31:18 GMT -5
^ You two have a lot of Ideas. Could you help me out with DRagonball V: The Variant Future? I know it'll be cool if I get help from you guys. That or talk to Little Syxx, (Syxx all ways looks out for me) on how to finish it.
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Post by Majunks on Feb 28, 2005 11:41:25 GMT -5
a ninja who's an angel, interesting, so your gonna have him fight against devils right, i think that's kinda like legacy of kain except he was a vampire wasnt he. anyway you do that, i dont know if i could ever write my own original fiction But aren't Fan Fics primarly Fan views of a series, like a spin off. If your Fic is original isn't it technically more of a real person story?
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Post by Majunks on Feb 25, 2005 11:58:29 GMT -5
I think I have a few Zelda and Mario spoofs I could post. It's Whose Triforce is it anyway and Super Mario Marrage Counsling.
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Post by Majunks on Feb 25, 2005 11:47:04 GMT -5
BlackCoven? You haven't been around here in a while... or I haven't seen you around for a while.
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